Daily Life in Shushan

After reading it, I have a few thoughts. First, the beginning of the article reveals the daily warmth and the disenchantment of the supporting characters. The main meaning is that the protagonist's senior brother suspects that the junior sister wants to be the leader because of rumors, and the protagonist is a senior brother, and his reputation is similar to that of her family. So. The protagonist thinks that his junior sister will kill him because of his position as the leader. He wants to solve the problem peacefully, but due to various changes in the situation, his junior sister wants to kill him. As for the female protagonist, she likes the male protagonist in her heart, but the fourth junior sister likes the female protagonist and disgusts the protagonist in various ways. As a result, the two sides interact with each other, and their subordinates compete with each other in various battles of wits and courage. If you look at it this way, it is indeed like a daily comedy, very interesting and joyful to watch. However, some things are inserted from time to time in the article, which makes it very uncomfortable and unable to experience joy at all. For example, the Seventh Son of Shushan in the article does not have any feelings of brotherhood. Everyone is independent, except for the senior brother who is good to the seventh junior brother, and the second senior sister who is good to the fourth junior sister. The sixth junior brother is caught in the middle. The seventh junior brother can assassinate the second senior sister for the sake of the senior brother. The fourth junior sister can kill the seventh junior brother and threaten the senior brother for the heroine. There is no sense of brotherhood. The second senior sister could also make a decision in front of the master to go down the mountain and take the head of the sixth junior brother because of a misunderstanding. The role of Fourth Senior Sister is quite annoying. She can insult Seventh Junior Brother in public if she doesn't like her. If she encounters him, she will hit him if he wants. If Second Senior Sister doesn't stop him, he will kill him immediately. The protagonist's behavior is getting more and more uncomfortable. He always thinks that the master does not want to kill his fellow disciples, but wants to gently persuade him. The fourth senior sister does not give him face at all and humiliates him in public. The protagonist dare not speak because of his injury. The protagonist gives me the feeling that to keep his reputation, he must also be in harmony with his fellow disciples. , And the master had already suspected him after listening to the rumors, plus the seven people who had no sympathy for each other, it made me more and more uncomfortable. The misunderstandings can be solved slowly, but this person uses happy words while having troubles and has no affection for humanity. The combination is really uncomfortable. I think the role of the Sixth Junior Brother is quite interesting, and the Seventh Junior Brother is like that idiot fan who will do anything for your own good. The fourth junior sister likes the second senior sister, so she is a bit yandere. The second senior sister likes the senior brother, and she can kill her fellow disciples because of misunderstandings. The eldest brother, the protagonist, does not feel the temperament of being a eldest brother at all. He always wants to deal with things gently and does not act vigorously and resolutely. I don't know how the author set it up. Whether the seven sons have been practicing together since childhood, or whether they are just practicing in the sect and have nothing to do with each other. If the former is a failure, the latter can be forgiven. In short, let's keep it in mind first. I still recommend that the author bring some human touch into the article. After all, if it is an anime, it will look funny, because there is no need to substitute, while online articles will be substituted into it, which will be very uncomfortable.

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This introductionhhh

The writing style is good, very suitable for writing online articles. Come on! There will be great success in the future.

The setting of all members being transformed is very interesting, but there are too few fighting scenes. Can there be more chapters?