Wings of Darkness V
漆黑之翼V
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 155k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Campus Life
- Updated
- 6y ago
- English
- Request a translation
Synopsis
Stats
146Chapters
918Recommendations
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Reader comments 17
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I came here because of a certain author, and I plan to support it for a while. Good luck, author! (✪▽✪)
I have something to tell you all. I'm going to work in a few days. I don't want to study anymore; there's been some trouble at home, so I have to go out to work to support my family. As for updating the novel, I won't fail, but! Updates might not be as frequent. Please understand.
At the request of a certain unscrupulous author, I'm here to leave a message.
I heard that posting in women's clothing can increase popularity? Is that true? 😅
Opinion Building
Here, a new floor will be set up. If you have any questions or suggestions regarding the novel, please let me know! I will go see them one by one. Then when there are free spaces later I'll organize it and then find time to revise it. But I will keep some things. I will also revise my writing when I have time after it reaches a certain word count!
That's very well written, keep it up!
Someone maliciously reported me and blocked several chapters. They even specifically warned me that otherwise the book would be shut down, so updates were temporarily suspended. I'm writing a book but not publishing it right now. I'll continue writing when the ban is lifted!
In short, there are problems with the descriptions in your book. Your use of long rhetorical devices is not good and it is not concise enough. You can revise it, or try to use the most straightforward sentences to express what you want to say in your future writing. Online novels are not prose; they're about the story and the plot, not fancy words. (This is just my personal opinion.)
Are you still in middle school? I came from Tieba (a Chinese online forum). Someone said your novel idea is good, but your writing style is about the same as a typical Mary Sue novel for girls. I came here specifically to check it out. Well, I think it's true. I think you should stop writing.
I always felt the title of this book had a strong chuunibyou (adolescent delusions of grandeur) vibe, is that just my imagination? 😂