A Group of Players Are Arriving at the End of the World

Although there are some poisonous points, the author still has to work hard 😆

The protagonist has some brain problems and feels like a fool. When the author wrote that the protagonist was the first in line to succeed, he thought his brain would be okay, but later on he seemed to have a weak IQ. There are also authors who wrote that the protagonist is very afraid of death, but I only read that he would rather starve to death than do anything else, and only sleep, which is the word "lazy". This system is no different!

One problem I have always had is that at first it was said that people have to excrete in the game every day. But he also said that underwear cannot be taken off. . . So how is excretion accomplished?

The player's attitude towards the protagonist is wrong. With the player's mentality, he would only call the protagonist a dog lord or something like that. How could he be so licking? The protagonist is in exile, why is there no sense of crisis at all?

The protagonist is not a time traveler... No wonder something is wrong? ?

It's not fun enough. The protagonist is like a lazy idiot. He doesn't have any sense of urgency even though he is exiled. He just reads novels in his spare time. He also treats the players with an indifferent attitude and tries to trick them in every way. The protagonist of this kind of behind-the-scenes novel is the BOSS, and the players also play a very important role. They always cheat the players, just like some sadistic novels cheat the protagonist. After reading too much, you will get bored and lose interest. Especially at the beginning of the game, the protagonist is sitting leisurely in front of the thatched hut reading the novel. The protagonist is too lazy to plant the berries even though they are a hundred meters away, so forget it. He does not remind the player, which delays the player for more than half an hour. The player is so angry that he says, "Then I am going to be hungry." There is a bottom line, after all, the players behind the scenes can be considered half of the protagonists. However, both missions rewarded berries, and the favorability promised before was not fulfilled. It may be an unspoken rule... Finally, a cool article is not based on teasing one's own people. The players belong to their own people. You can cheat a little, but if you always cheat your own people, it will give people the feeling that the protagonist is useless and has no bottom line. The above is purely a personal opinion. I like the creativity of this book very much and I am looking forward to the beginning of Waste Materials. However, I lost my feeling after reading the fifth chapter. Maybe it is too spicy for my taste.

Sure enough... There is something wrong with the protagonist's brain... There is also something wrong with this system's brain... The two fools are having fun, it feels like the players are smarter than these two

I just want to know if that idiot Qiao will come out in the future? Can you skip it as soon as it comes out? This character is really poisonous. He goes out to pick up a bunch of good things by himself, but has no ability to solve problems when he encounters them. It just adds trouble.

If you are writing about games, I recommend you a game called Yggdrasil. This thief is good looking.

There is also the matter of being deprived of rewards. If I were that player and saw an NPC dare to deprive me of rewards, I would go up and beat him up. If I got angry, I might chop him to death on the spot. And the protagonist can't tell what's going on now? Could it be that he thought he was the first-in-line successor? He is being exiled now. In such a dangerous situation, I don't want to deprive them of their rewards, but I have to find a way to increase their rewards. I feel that the protagonist is completely cerebral palsy, and just because the housekeeper took away his supper, he exiled the housekeeper out of the city. This is the end of the world, and the housekeeper is likely to die. I am surprised. Didn't taking a housekeeper just take your supper? Is it necessary? I also feel that the protagonist is a psychopath and has cerebral palsy.

In this type of novel, most readers assume the role of players when it comes to mission rewards, experience, and equipment. Isn't it disgusting for the protagonist and NPC to withhold rewards? Most players will just use a knife to do it, but if they can't do it, they will force others to continue, or they will directly quit the game and ask others to quit the game together. Don't think that these players will come back. Such lost players will never continue to play.

I'm sold on the plot of the mythical beast egg. The character of Qiao Luo is really extremely poisonous. You can write a funny character if you want, but if you want to force the plot into something that makes people uncomfortable, I'm going to throw you away if you continue writing like this.

This one looks better than the previous one and has a much stronger sense of immersion. Lao Hei, come on~\(≧▽≦)/~ . . . ps: I'm chasing you, don't give up (ฅ>ω<*ฅ)

Let's not criticize the protagonist and criticize the author. After all, the protagonist is the representative of the author's IQ.

The most annoying thing is seeing players' rewards being weakened without thinking. Players work, don't you just punish players if they punish you? Wouldn't it be nice if you gave him a level ceiling? In many categories, the player rewards are ridiculously low. Rewarding authors who are simply unreasonable forces them to be reasonable. Really 6.

Normal players will definitely have a bunch of people kill the lord directly 🙂🙂🙂 Don't ask why, normal people will

Among novels of the same type, the protagonist of this novel is the lowest I have ever seen.

In Chapters 10 and 11, if you just give the protagonist something that the supporting character explodes, why do you have to adjust the explosion rate to 1? What else can you do if everything is given to you?

This protagonist deserves a beating! ! ! ! Don't want to read it

Chapter 1 didn't say he was a time traveler, why did he become a native again?

After reading the previous chapters, I found that this pig's trotter is stupid and lazy, and is not the material for planning at all. Players who are concerned about their own life and death don't care about it, and just let them fend for themselves. I think the result is that the players will die a lot of times, and then the pig's trotter will starve to death on the spot...

I heard that a primary school student wrote 56 novels and it is difficult for him to be the author of this book.

The protagonist's height is 182cm and weight is 52cm? I just want to ask the author, is this a normal person?

This protagonist's brain is not working well, and he is poisonous at the beginning.

The beginning was too toxic and I stopped watching the rest.

The first chapter is full of loopholes. When I came out and read the comments, it turned out that they were all scolding. It was too vicious.

At a glance, there are only two apprentices and the other trainees are all slanderers, and you can tell how poisonous this book is.

① It is meaningless and provocative at the beginning. Do you plan to return to the family in the later stage to pave the way for a slap in the face, or do you plan to exile the guards in the later stage to make the readers comfortable? Otherwise, we cannot directly write that the protagonist opens his eyes on an alien planet at the beginning, and writes in his memories that he is a war criminal in exile ② sb protagonist, the most diner, as can be seen from the prison performance, maybe he was an arrogant young man in the past, but the protagonist is a snobbish commoner, and he can't lick the guard to treat others normally in a month, follow-up Sure enough, after summoning the player, he just read the novel and did nothing else ③ Let's talk about the poisonous point of inactivity above. In other novels, either the protagonist uses a questionnaire to judge whether the player is lawful or not, or the protagonist monitors the player from time to time, or judges the player through household registration information, or summons netizens who know the origin of the earth through acquaintances. And the protagonist just creates an interface and then reads the novel. Is he really not afraid of being a Class A war criminal at the beginning? (Although everyone knows that the author will not write about players killing the protagonist, but knowing that does not mean that the protagonist is unprepared) In particular, in your article, the protagonist goes directly to the deserted star. Unlike other articles, he either travels to the original body who knows the surroundings, or builds a base after careful investigation, or directly inherits the shelter. You go straight to the wilderness and just lie down and check your phone. Aren't you afraid of wild animals stealing your home? Aren't you afraid that players will be chased home by monsters? (Although he will be killed directly) ④ Can you trouble the protagonist who is helpless and smells of swill to clarify his early attitude? If the task prompts the player to ask you, won't you tell? The process of giving rewards during missions is similar to how an uncle rewards you. Anyway, the game doesn't remind you that NPCs will not be resurrected after they die. If I see you deducting those garbage berries, I will give you a few slaps.

At least write something relevant to Shao Qian's cover.

Damn, there is only one rotten monster in Chapter 45, so the process is really slow.