A Bit of a Messy World

There are still not many flaws in the previous plot and settings, with some minor flaws at most. I won't mention the writing style. On Chapter 14.15.16, The protagonist suddenly became wise. Judging from the setting, the protagonist is a fan of history and horse-and-blade games. But judging from the performance of the protagonist, he still belongs to a middle-aged boy who can't help but have his own destiny. Knowing that the villagers may threaten or even kill him, he still lets his words and deeds go as he pleases, even worse than Zhang Wei. Of course, the author may also consider letting the protagonist grow. But from a setting perspective, it doesn't make sense. It can only be regarded as a pseudo-historical fan, and the rules of riding and slashing are not feasible in this evolutionary world. The protagonist already knows that they are becoming more and more like humans, with thinking and learning abilities. If you still want to engage in riding and slashing, you have obviously lost your ability to judge. On the whole, he is the kind of guy who loses himself when he has the power and will never survive three chapters in Infinite Flow.

The fantasy is grand and thoughtful, and the details are auspicious. It just couldn't grasp the rhythm, the scene was seriously dragged out, it seemed to have an endless ending without ending, and there were too many climaxes leading to no climax. The language still lacks its own unique characteristics. The plot is ups and downs and exciting. It is an infinitely popular novel with excellent plot and writing.