Beast of the Desert

Well, how should I put it? Character descriptions are detailed Language descriptions are vivid In fact, personally, he is qualified. At least it's better than mine. But there are a lot of errors in the article, maybe it's a very cute novel. If you are interested, you can try to check it out. There may be some typos, but novices can understand it. No one succeeds overnight, only continuous efforts. Newcomers can only win if they persist. When you write the next book, you will find that, eh, my writing seems to have improved a bit. Anyway, come on! A poem is attached at the end. There is no way out despite the mountains and rivers, and there is another village with dark flowers and bright flowers. I hope the author will stick to it, thank you! (For the sake of me writing so many words, please add some details.)

I hope everyone can leave a comment, even if it is criticism. Suggestions are welcome with both hands. 😭😭

Starting today, the author will update once a day.

Wanting to give up is called laziness. And in the midst of laziness, there is a trace of unwillingness to give up. It's called a dream. This is an update every two days Oh, my God, what did you say? 3 Updates a day. No, I can't do that, it will kill me. What? You said two updates a day. Stop joking. Updated once a day? No, no. My waist will be exhausted. Then give up, right? How can you give up if it doesn't work? I must keep writing

The writing style is like a big truck running amok. Many places are abbreviated and a little unclear, as if you were engaged one second and started making people the next. The emotional scene between the male and female protagonists is also a bit awkward, but the author's choice is very clear, that is, to write it down in one stroke and directly write how long it takes to avoid embarrassment. The description can be more detailed, so that the development of the content can be forward and backward, so that it will be fuller. All in all, he is still a guy with sound limbs.

Thank you for your support, I don't care anyway.

Come on, author, I hope it gets better and better.

Come on, everything will be fine

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

There are too few words, and I can't arouse the interest in reading. I'll come back when there are more words. Come on, the author.

There is no persistence to support oneself in going forward. It is a faint hope. In a dim world, there is never hope. Until a light called love.