Journey to the West: the Dragon King of Jinghe River

I stopped looking when I saw Bai Qiulian. First, the protagonist should be well-written with the well-crafted Red Mansion section at the beginning. After leaving the Red Mansion, the story plummets. Secondly, I admire you very much. In order to forcefully advance the plot, you set up the characters to look like that. The little fox demon in Liaozhai is almost at the same level as you, or even higher than you. I am simply drunk. Is the immortal so accomplished? Are you sure you have watched Liao Zhai? Have you seen Xin Shisi Niang? Afterwards, Bai Qiulian is even more impressed with you. Why are you making this up? In Bai Qiulian's original work, Prince Long is a real dragon. What kind of random evil dragon and fake dragon are you making up? That's it, there are good and bad. Anyway, I don't want to read it later.

Injustice is not unjust at all. The court in the world asked for rain, and the emperor sent a petition to the heaven. The heaven agreed and issued an edict. The Dragon King did not take it seriously. If he did not die, who would die? So the Heavenly Court really tied him up and bestowed the Dragon King with magical power. The Dragon King didn't understand what was going on. He had offended his superiors and the Jade Emperor, so Wei Zheng really cut him off because the Jade Emperor told them that they could cut him down. As a dragon that had offended the court, the Emperor also wanted him to die. That's it, repaying the injustice. The author doesn't even understand it himself, he just knows how to fight and kill. If you don't think about your IQ in detail, you can probably still read it.

The writing is so bad, I don't know what I'm writing!

A Dragon King has lost his true energy and his aura is not as good as that of a mortal? That's really weak

What on earth was written? Come and watch Journey to the West. After dozens of chapters, I don't even know what you want to write!

I want to know when I can stop writing my previous name, Shen Xin, because it looks very uncomfortable. When someone calls you Ao Xin, you have to write Shen Xin.

Before I start reading, let me ask, how many claws does the dragon in this book have? I just got poisoned from the first page of the first chapter of Ao Bing! Let me start by saying that I won't watch a dragon that doesn't have more than a thousand claws. After all, it's too weak 🙂

The author has poor control skills and lacks basic common sense. A good Dragon King novel does not describe the characteristics of dragons at all. It accepts the inheritance of the dragon family. The content is indeed the Taoist Tao Te Ching. It is embarrassing.

Talking nonsense and copying books. The preface he copied doesn't match the postscript.

Forget about marrying that dragon girl from the West Sea, and still have wedding flowers and candles. It's extremely poisonous. If you don't like her, you still have to have a wedding. The most poisonous of poisons. Dog Market Novel

Is the author sculpting a loser protagonist? Getting flustered at every turn? What is it?

I found that the author likes to improve the cultivation level of these monks in that small world. In the Legend of White Snake, Xiao Qingxuanxian is in the late stage and has been practicing for thousands of years. The protagonist lived in the prehistoric times and was an immortal. After a thousand years, he was no more than an immortal.

This is just thinking about eating shit, repaying the gods, resisting, and swearing an oath of heaven. Just like the human emperor in the world, who originally had the same status as the emperor of heaven, but ended up being a lowly person and demoting himself to the next generation. If he were your son and wanted to be your generation, would you whip him? If your son wanted to steal women from you and resist endlessly, would you whip him? Therefore, no matter how much the emperor of the world tries to commit suicide, the Emperor of Heaven will not kill him. At most, if he attacks, the dragon clan still wants to stand up and become the top of the world. Is it possible? First of all, the first step is to backlash the oath and be wiped out by the law of heaven.

The author doesn't know how to write emotional scenes, so don't write it. Isn't it embarrassing to watch it after you finish it?

This is already a better start for Journey to the West, but it's a pity that the protagonist is a waste and I don't know what it is about. Although I haven't read it, I can tell from the introduction. A cannon fodder who seeks his own death, very cowardly, and a Dragon King who was hacked to death by Wei Zheng. Once you have seen the modern people in Journey to the West, if you wear this identity, you dare to say that it is not good.

There is something really wrong with this realm setting. It completely belittles the realm of immortals. I remember that in Journey to the West, Sun Wukong was able to bully the Dragon King of the Four Seas even before he went to heaven. The Xuanxian Taiyi Xuanxian you describe is just like a second-hand novice. Even the Eight Immortals of Shangdong are thousands of miles away from the Golden Immortals, okay? Why is it that the Shui Tribe always turns to Taiyi Xuanxian? In "The Legend of White Snake", a little green snake demon who has practiced for hundreds of years is in the late stage of Xuanxian? Obviously it was said in the TV series that Bai Suzhen was a genius when she ascended in the finale, okay? I feel like your realm is so worthless. In addition, even in the prehistoric period of the Conferred Gods, there were not many golden immortals among the second generation disciples of the Great Sect.

It was fine before, but I seemed very aloof, but when it came to marriage, I fell on my knees and licked him

I don't like that West Sea Dragon Mother, it's disgusting

The previous part was okay, but the part about Xihai where dogs are compared to things is so mindless.

The Dragon King of the Jinghe River was plotted by the Jade Emperor. You don't think he is innocent. Why is it the Dragon King of the Jinghe River instead of someone else, such as the Weishui River? A mere Dragon King can send emperors and emperors to hell under the protection of the Emperor's fate. Isn't this funny? Isn't it that I defected to the West and was liquidated by the Jade Emperor? I deserved to die. I don't know whether I will die or not. The little Dragon King can take away the emperor's soul to the underworld without anyone else. I don't believe it if there is no Western plot or Ksitigarbha's intervention. If you defect to the West, you will naturally be punished. Do you still want to occupy a position in the East?

Everything else written under the name Journey to the West has been watery from the beginning and has no meaning at all.

I can't even finish the second chapter, it's so long-winded! Do you still think you are very talented? ? ? ? I feel sick

I thought it was about Journey to the West, and it should be grand and grand, but I didn't expect it to be full of the atmosphere of the urban world, and it is also unique.

To be fair, the first part is not good, but the second part is getting better, especially from the middle. It is not a fairy grass, but it can still be regarded as a spiritual grass.

It's so rubbish. Yours is the most verbose and watery Journey to the West novel I have ever read. The others are only a little better than yours.

Conferring the Gods is something that happened at the end of the prehistoric period. Journey to the West should be written after Conferring the Gods, but it is all confusing. It should start with Conferring the Gods, then Journey to the West, and finally write the post-Journey to the West. It is so messed up that I can't understand it at the end.

The only immortal in the world of Red Mansion is the Dragon Prince. How can an immortal be so weak in the Age of Ending Dharma?

Although the Dragon King of Jinghe is dead, several of his sons have held positions and are quite good. What is there...😅

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The Red Mansion in Journey to the West doesn't match at all.