The Fairy Boy of the Prehistoric Age

A common problem with today's prehistoric novels is that they dare not write anything and dare not change anything. Moreover, if they dare not change, they cannot write anything that cannot be changed. It's frustrating. Since the pig's feet are worn, it can be changed. I think the inability to change is due to the deep influence of Gong He Xun Qin Ji. Why history is history is because it has happened, and what has not happened is the future. History cannot be changed, but the future can. This novel is also good. I hope the author will not turn the prehistoric novel into a frustrated novel.

Seeing that the protagonist has already cultivated Taiyi Golden Immortal, but is about to fall into inner demons in heaven and on earth, is the protagonist actually an immortal? It's so easy to fall into inner demons, so why not build a hammer?

The people who were kind to you are dead, and the people who are hostile to you are still running around, so what do you want?

The enemy who killed Master and Senior Brother, what nonsense are you talking about, you are still rich and born with infinite deity! Respect your sister! If you don't have any brains, I'm afraid this time travel will make you stupid.

The protagonist doesn't do anything, so I'm not interested in reading the original work of Fengshen.

Tianxian does not have three flowers and five qi. The three flowers of Daluo Jinxian gather at the top, and the five qi of Taiyi Jinxian face the Yuan.

The hatred of killing their masters, destroying their brothers and maiming their bodies, the hatred of slaughtering the sect, harming the Tao and destroying the family, it doesn't matter, this is the way of heaven. I just need to send them to face the disaster, learn something secretly and ask for some rewards. After all, I am helpless. I don't dare to mess with the saints and the way of heaven. It's better to die as a Taoist friend than to die as a poor Taoist. The protagonist is extremely cowardly and selfish! ! ! It was so heart-wrenching to read that I abandoned the book without even seeing the VIP chapter←_← Pitfalls

The protagonist is possessed by demons at every turn, who are you trying to scare? This rubbish national beauty can become an immortal. It is really an insult to pigs to say that pigs can become immortals.

I feel that the protagonist is too forward-thinking. Except for a few great saints, the rest can be calculated. Otherwise, how can we become enlightened?

In recent chapters, there has been a tendency to abuse the master... It's poisonous...

Why do the protagonists of all prehistoric novels eventually become enemies of all saints? Why can't you take revenge after being bullied? When you finally get out of trouble, do you act like it's nothing? Thinking about it, after being besieged, wouldn't the first thing after escaping the siege be to kill everyone one by one? Instead, they acted as if it didn't happen. Can the saint always look after his disciples?

After reading the first three chapters, Che Zhuluan talked endlessly about something that could be explained clearly in two sentences. Not very optimistic about this book

Now he has a chance to compete with that anti-time and space sanctification thing! Same goodbye

The protagonist's time travel and the fate of heaven are the biggest logical contradictions. If the Primeval Tiandao does not recognize the protagonist, the protagonist will be hacked to death. If the Tiandao recognizes the protagonist, then even if the protagonist has the ability to kill Sanqing, Tiandao will not interfere. If you look at the earliest Honghuangliu, you can find that Tiandao only confirms and affects the general trend through luck and calculation, but does not end up personally. But in today's prehistoric times, is the way of heaven still the way of heaven? What's the difference between a gangster and a gangster? The reason why this happens is actually very simple, that is, most authors cannot control the prehistoric plot at all, and they fall apart as they write, so they have to use the power of heaven to force the plot back. The current Honghuangliu works are only works with more than one million words, 80% of them are illogical, and the remaining 10% are 80% useless. In other words, there are one hundred Honghuangliu contracted novels, and only four or five of them can have no major logical problems from beginning to end, and have a clear main line.

The biggest poisonous point is that he doesn't dare to change anything. All the people who teach him are trying to kill him. But in the end, they don't dare to kill any of the pigs' trotters. If things are like this, why don't you just commit suicide when you first time travel?

After reading the whole book, it is still okay. This book is not like the previous books that always used rules and mysteries. The rules are okay, and the mysteries always feel like something from the myth of west Fang.

The protagonist Yang Qingxuan can only be named by fate. I remember the first fantasy cultivation novel I read. The protagonist's name was originally Yang Chao. After practicing in the novice sect, he was named Qingxuan, and then he was always called Qingxuan. The name Qingxuan is so sentimental.

The protagonist is very suitable for practicing Taoism. He is indifferent to people and tends to be ungrateful and ungrateful.

It's a good book. I read it in one week and I didn't feel anything was wrong. The character of the protagonist is also very good. The feeling of cultivating immortality is fully reflected in the book. It's a good book (´▽｀)ノ♪

Either you are literate or you are literate. Why are you half literate and half literate? It is true, but what you say is so far-fetched.

I have said that I will never post comments again, but I will make an exception this time. My complaints have the energy to destroy the entire world.

This novel is so frustrating to read!

The deleted mess is a mess, just look at it.

Two words: trash, abandon the book and don't read it. If you're afraid of this or that, you'll have to cultivate a hair fairy

Regarding Guan Zhong, the plot of Chan teaching and robbing his disciples is inexplicable. It's too far-fetched to explain that one's luck will be met with disaster. Can apprentices be robbed at will? Then Shifang Kutianzun can directly snatch Nezha and Yang Jian? Even if the protagonist doesn't have a backstage and it's hard to grab it, the Second Saint of the West can just grab the Twelve Golden Immortals, right? Even if you don't dare to offend Sanqing, you can still let Zhen Yuanzi become your disciple directly, right? So, there is really no logic to this, I just take it for granted.

I read it a long time ago and it was pretty good. Now that I'm reading it, many chapters are gone. It's so messed up that it feels incomprehensible.

Okay, it's next month, it's time to release a new book

The realm strength in it is too unreasonable. Where did so many quasi-sages come from! ! ! ! !

Nuwa's clone seems to be a matchmaker, right? Hongjun's clone is now old, is there anything else they have had?

I want to ask if the system is extremely poisonous. If so, I will avoid it.