Transmigrating into the Feminist World I Wrote

The author is a woman, right? 😅 There is such a huge difference in outlook. At first I thought it was about a male protagonist with confidence, strength, and self-centeredness, but I only read Chapter 20. Since the setting is that the chosen son is Huang Hao, who is handsome and temperamental, and there is a supporting female character He Wen who loves him deeply, so why don't we just let them be good? Don't get involved, don't take care of it. The settings say to stay away. If you can't stay away, then just make ordinary friends. There is no need to think that the supporting actress should be liked by someone else for the sake of the plot. She should like you, and then ask the supporting actress to take care of the chosen one, while telling everyone. The world announces which chosen one's lover it likes. I estimate that there will be 100% chance that there will be that Wen who knows that the protagonist likes her, and then acts like a domineering CEO or an infatuated person and tells the protagonist what to think about her. Finally, in the protagonist's over and over again blunt coincidences, the chosen one will The female supporting character gradually dislikes the Chosen Son and likes the protagonist. These plots are really not suitable for male readers. What plots do male readers like? If they like one, they will be one, and if they like two, they will be two. They know that they cannot stay away from the original Chosen Son, so they can be friends, no Go ahead, choose your own direction and work hard, and don't be like a dog. Just to end a plot or to pave the way for a supporting character, you will say "Look, she is the one I like" and then let others scold you as "green tea fool", and then show your confusion. What's wrong? Why are you scolding me? Hey, readers are scolding me too? Isn't it boring? Even you think this kind of plot is poisonous, so why bother writing it? Do you know the Matthew Effect? To use this book as an analogy, you come in with the expectation of making money, but find that things go against your expectations, and then the more you write, the more you feel that the results are not good, and then you have no motivation to think of a logical plot, and you are too lazy to fix any bugs. You are practicing writing anyway, and then the more readers read, the more they feel that you do not have normal thinking logic, and the more they read, the less they want to read. That's it, you must go back and look at those poisonous chapters and say, are you interested in changing your writing to be more rounded? No, after a few months you will lose even more interest, and eventually you will not even have the interest to finish writing the story you want. The problem is not whether you have recommendations or whether you brush or not. The problem is that you do tasks just for the sake of tasks without thinking logically.

Two chapters have been blocked and are being revised. Thank you for your support. The new author will continue to work hard.

Based on everyone's opinions, the heroines are currently Yu Qian and Ji Wen. The description of Yang Caini has been greatly reduced. It can be said that the characteristics of each character have been written out.

Come on! The writing is quite good, and it has a good taste!

The opinions are different, please don't criticize, I'm just complaining, Yang Chongsheng, she liked the male protagonist at first, then flirted with him, felt that he was not worthy of the male protagonist, wanted to work hard, and then saved Wang and then fell in love with Wang. The author also specifically added that she thought the male protagonist would marry her, I was stupid, I split, I can't imagine what happened to Yang, she seemed to like the male protagonist a few chapters ago, and the next moment she became Wang Hao's girlfriend,? ? ? ? ? ? What is this, an act of confusion? He also said that Ji would feel happy if she and the male protagonist got along. I was stupid. What kind of three views were these? I burst into tears on the spot Furthermore, Yang's system had given her a song before. I forgot the title of the song. It probably meant growing old together. After reading the full text, I didn't understand the meaning of the author's writing of this paragraph. What's the point? ? ? ? , And also said that this is the love she expected, growing old together? ? ? ? ? Then he fell in love with Wang,? ? ? ? ? Are Ji and the male protagonist stupid? The king was robbed, and the male protagonist gave her an idea to snatch her back again. Hanhan, shouldn't she be told not to lick him in this situation? ? ? ? ? ? I really can't understand the midterm mystery. Alas, this book is the one I have read in the past five years with many flaws and poisonous points.

Recently, people have commented that the plot is a bit toxic. Let me explain it here. Originally, I simply wanted to write in a daily style. I didn't think about it and pretended to fight, kidnapping and rescuing people, or some family feud plot. In the author's opinion, this kind of forced contradiction is the real poison. After all, most people live ordinary lives. Just a little bit of rant, don't take your seat Finally, I hope everyone pays attention to safety, the epidemic will pass soon, and welcome a better tomorrow 😳

Author, I advise you not to write about low-looking protagonists anymore. Readers like you, who are handsome, elegant, and handsome, will have no sense of empathy 😃 (raise a paw if you feel the same)

Ji Dang is here, Ji Dang is holding up to the sky.

I really hope that the heroine is Yu Qian. I always feel that the protagonist is not that important to Ji Wen. Just the embellishment of a perfect life. But for Yu Qian, it seems to be the greatest luck and the best memory in her life. And among the people here, only Yu Qian fell in love with the good-for-nothing person. At that time, the protagonist had not become beautiful, versatile, or exposed as a rich second generation. But just like that, she just fell in love with him. This is the most touching part of the whole book.

Come on, come on, Jilin shares are open.