The Captain's Comprehensive Comic Journey

Although it is not finished yet, it does not prevent me from summarizing (￣y▽￣)! ! !

Writing taboos First, you must persevere. Don't give up midway, eunuch or be a bad star. It's normal to not be able to update according to the deadline, but never give up. Second, don't be afraid of poor writing. For writing fan fiction, it is enough to clearly describe the cause and effect of the matter. The person who writes it is not a professional writer after all. Real professional writers probably can't write fan fiction. Third, the plot of the original story can be abbreviated, but it cannot be omitted . For the original plot that is considered unimportant, it must be briefly described and the past cannot be omitted. What you want to write is a complete story, not a diary. At the very least, people who have not seen the original work should be able to roughly understand what happened in the middle. Fourth, try to enrich the description of daily life, psychology, body movements, psychological expressions, enemy and friend, and other multi-angle plots. The original story estimates can be appropriately modified or extended, but he must pay attention to propriety, because most readers of fan fiction sometimes will not go too far to see the plot that the author has worked hard to create. When seeing such a strange children's day, most people will choose to skip it. It is okay to change the original plot, but it cannot be done in one stroke Fifth, except for the protagonist and supporting characters, the author's fictional characters should not exceed his or her control over the plot. If there are too many characters in a certain work that are not in the original story, it will be difficult for readers to accept and they will not be able to figure out the relationship between the characters. It is recommended to think twice before acting. Necessary characters can be fictionalized, but the scale should be controlled within your own overall story concept. New fictional characters should have prototypes as much as possible so that readers can adapt as quickly as possible. Sixth, be able to withstand the abuse and stick to the principles. The psychological quality must be good. No matter how you write, you will be criticized, scolded, intimidated, ridiculed... The work is your own, and you must insist on your own creation. Let those who curse die. Seventh, try not to wear random clothes. In a work, try not to include characters from other works, except for comic novels. You can also learn from the plots, skills, character prototypes, etc. Of other works. Eighth, the setting should be clear. For some unique settings, explain them in the story rather than writing them in related documents. Many readers don't look at the relevant settings. Ninth, YY is the kingly way, don't be afraid of criticism. Without YY, fan fiction would have no meaning in writing. It is precisely because of YY that it can attract people's attention. Tenth, don't go back. Unless there is a flaw, don't go back and make changes. It is advisable to continue writing, and do not follow the advice of some readers and go back to drastically change the plot. Eleventh, what you like is the most important thing. If you create or adapt a story with characters you don't like, the fan fiction will lose its vitality. Twelfth, don't be afraid to overturn the original settings and deliver packages. Many novels and animations constantly overturn their own settings. A story without flaws is incomplete. Thirteenth, the section should be clear, and avoid not writing the title or having no section. The number of words in the title should be between 4 and 15 words. If the chapter is not clear, many readers will forget where they saw it last time after the author updates it. 14. The number of words in each chapter should be controlled at about 2000- 5000 words. Too short or too long will affect the reading effect 15. Try to explain the unfamiliar nouns, geography, etc. That appear in the novel. (This is copied)

Suggestion: The protagonist can recruit some powerful and popular characters in the current world who have no sense of belonging to the current time. For example, young girls, etc. . . Leave with the protagonist, as long as you don't expose the system to them (at the very least, don't connect their consciousness to the system and communicate directly with it). Captain Levi himself leads a small team. A commander without soldiers. . . 😎😎😎

Will the soldier commander finally return to the world of giants? I hope he can change this shit ending. Let the Survey Corps' sacrifice of heart be rewarded.

I'm convinced by this system. Nowadays, I'm most annoyed by the system of playing around with the protagonist and the evil protagonist. It feels like it accounts for at least half of the system text. I don't know why a conscious system is written. Without this, it can't promote the development of the plot? Or is it simply that the author likes to amuse the protagonist?

Levi had a dream. He met his comrade-in-arms, his deceased comrade-in-arms. As soon as they met, he ran to Levi and asked: "Commander, is that damn female giant dead?" Levi...: "She... Became a hero..."

"That day the giants remembered the fear of being imprisoned in a wall of 1.7 Meters high"

The protagonist is 1.6 Meters tall? Then I hope the protagonist will find a female lead who is 1.8 Meters tall. The height difference makes me feel uncomfortable just thinking about it.

When will the soldier commander return to the giant world? Kick Alan to death!

Selega Yubitilia (セレジアユピティリア) Voice: Mikako Komatsu "If you want justice to become power, please stop having sweet dreams." The heroine of the fantasy robot animation "Rhapsody of Frogger". Karuya Rui (Kanoya Rui) Voice: Amamiya Ten "It has nothing to do with me whether this world will be destroyed or not" The protagonist of the robot animation "Monomagia". The pilot of the giant robot Gigasmachina. Meteora Estreshi (メテオラエスターライヒ) Voice: Inori Minase "If you don't know anything, then it would be more reassuring to welcome destruction without knowing anything." A sage who guides the protagonist in the open world RPG "Avacan of Remembrance" and serves as a librarian. Mirokuji Yuya (Mirokuji Yuya) Voice: Suzumura Kenichi "Whether you want to take action or not depends on your speed!" The final boss character of the comic "Enclosed Zone Underground -dark night-". Kouji Ma Mika Kou Shu Ma Mika (Kou Shu Mika) Voice: Murakawa Rii "Your world is a very excessive world where everyone is at war with each other. Don't you think that is wrong?" The protagonist of the magical girl animation "Magic Killer: Ma Mika" for little girls. Alicetria Fibrari (アリステリアフェブラリィ) Voice: Hikasa Yoko "I must save my world from the war" The princess who is the protagonist of the fantasy biography manga and animation "Scarlet Alicetrea". Blitz Tokar (ブリッツトーカー) Voiced by: Atsushi Ax "How about you try to look forward to the world a little more?" A character who appears in the manga and animation "codeBabylon" with a cyberpunk worldview. A bounty hunter who was once a criminal police officer. Tsukjoin Shinken (Tsukjoin Shinken) Voice: Sakamoto Maaya "You're lying, right? What's going on?" A character who appears in the legendary light novel and animation "Yorukōgōki". A person with unknown purpose. Hikayu Starga Voiced by: Shiina Natsukawa "Why, why, why does everyone know about me!!" The heroine of the beautiful girl game "Starry Sky☆Galaxy". Although he is timid, he is devoted to the person he likes.

In reality, dwarfs are really inferior. The lack of readers shows this. Regardless of whether the pair of dwarfs are not good-looking, they will quickly lose patience. In short, ordinary dwarfs in reality have no human rights, no mating rights, and no choice. It is as simple as that. First of all, the mating rights are gone 😏. This is the life of an ordinary man who is 1.6 Meters tall.

After seeing the volume about Zhanchi, I decided to skip this volume. I've read Zhan Chi's comics. In the end, the revolutionary army colluded with foreign nations in order to attack the imperial capital, and let the foreign nations hold back the imperial border troops. When the time came to conquer the imperial capital and cede territory to them, it made me sick. No matter how bad the empire was, it didn't send the border troops back to the mainland to fight the rebellion, even if they were beaten to their doorsteps. As a result, the revolutionary army's garbage group directly sold the country. When the protagonist decided to side with the revolutionary army, I didn't want to read this volume.

How to put it this way, I feel that one of the most striking characteristics of Levi is his sense of heaviness. He has a very heavy sense of mission. He is a very emotional person. He carries the expectations and missions of his dead comrades on his own body. I feel that the author did not write this sense of heaviness. Some of the psychological descriptions that are like playing tricks do not feel like Levi's character. Moreover, Levi is a talkative, full of shitty literature, with sharp words but a gentle heart, and a strong sense of empathy (for example, in the giantess, Eren is allowed to choose for himself, the TV version gives the Wings of Freedom badge to soldiers who have lost their friends, he comforts Armin and Jean in the King's Chapter, etc.), I understand it this way, but I feel that the author's portrayal of this aspect is not appropriate enough. Another point is that although Levi is not as good as the captain and Hanji in terms of mental strength, his starting value is 8. After all, he is the commander of the army. He has dealt with so many things with Erwin and is also very politically sensitive. However, Levi in ​​this novel is a bit "reckless". In the world of Attack, Levi can only sleep three or four hours a day at most, and he still sleeps on a chair. From this, it can be seen that his psychological burden is actually very heavy, and the quality of his sleep is unlikely to be good. The description of Levi sleeping and resting in the article feels a bit inconsistent, but it can be regarded as not being so stressful after leaving the giant environment? Also, Levi is very meticulous (look at his scarf, which requires constant attention to keep it neat, and the calligraphy he practices hard. JSC also said that if he were in modern times, he would make a facial mask and put small clips on his hair😂) and pay attention to hygiene. When he was in the Survey Corps, he would even go to the cafeteria and bathhouse to clean up after everyone else had rested (from the radio drama...) It is really a pity that these details were not described...

It's finally over. Does the author plan to write a new book?

✌️ It's not easy to collapse without a heroine, come on!

I think it's best if you can make readers fall in love with the anime you wrote through comprehensive manga and unlimited flow novels. It's not enough to just sell feelings and make fun jokes. If I read this novel, and the novel is about an anime I haven't seen, and the author can write it so that I want to watch the anime, that would be the best. The author may not be able to do it now, but he can work towards this goal.

My God, it's really not easy to find a book about giants at Qidian.

Sorry, at 1.8 Meters I can't look at you at 1.6 Meters 🤓

Author, can you please change the character of the system? It's a bit cheap, not suitable for Levi's system, and it's a bit annoying to watch ヽ('⌒´メ)ノ

Just read the suggestion: Levi, after completing the world mission, what is the ending of the current world? It is best to use a little time to describe the reactions of people in the current world after Levi left, so that we know that the worlds Levi has experienced are not illusory and meaningless. Some people will miss him and some will benefit from it. This is a perfect summary of a story. 😁😁😁

Among these highly toxic daily guides, there is finally one that I can watch, but I feel that the selection of the world is not very good, and it feels relatively niche. I have watched them all, but there are a few anime that are not too popular.

There's no heroine, I'll watch it if the character isn't bad

Levi's new image, the Frost Giant, reminds me of this picture of the old Ford teacher Li Qulan~ (InfringementRights deleted, Please do not commercialUse) Every painting of this great master is super artistic! Wall crack recommended! ! !

The start is toxic and does not match the character of the original soldier commander. It should be possible to watch it without thinking. 1. I want to form a strange team for no reason 2. Isn't it thirty seconds to transform into a corpse? 3 Rushed into the teaching building and massacred everyone for five minutes. None of the children outside the teaching building escaped or died. Oh, the outside of the teaching building is so much safer than the inside. 4. The corpse turned into a child as soon as he came out?

Why do I feel like the soldier commander became more and more like an ordinary person?

As long as you expose the back of your neck, I will kill all the gods.

Godslayers generally defeat the strong with the weak (except for Aisha, all of them are out of necessity, just like I don't want to kill you but you have to send me here). In addition, the power is actually a skill tree. The wolves can turn the werewolf into a werewolf. From Baphomet's Magic Book to Baphomet's Magic Lolita, I will not mention Elsa's corridor to another world and Annie's tracking magic bullet.

The plot is still very good, but why is it that no one has read it? If I hadn't been looking for a high-quality Titan fanfic recently, I might not have been able to read it.

Why is the cover wearing Jun Ji's hat🤫

I would like to ask, I have never watched Attack on Titan. Didn't the protagonist become bigger? Why did the protagonist jump off the giant's body and then burn the giant's body? Doesn't this burn himself? I don't understand the setting of the giant. Can you explain this to me?