Douluo Dalu: The Sandfall Douluo

There is no need to listen to them and not dismantle the original CP. Some people will read it if it is dismantled, and some people will read it if it is not dismantled. But you have written it like this. If Ning Rongrong is not the heroine, or is with Oscar again, then it is poisonous. Personally, I hope this book will dismantle the original CP.

The first time I watched it was Sha Pai Douluo, 😅😅 My glasses prescription is a bit high recently 😭😭

If you build a supporting building and want to play a supporting role in it, you can write it down according to the format. Name: (The words should be simple, not too uncommon) Gender: (Only male and female, no in-betweens are accepted) Age: (Even if it is written, I will change it) Character: (According to the personality, assign the power and work) Shortcomings: (No one is perfect, please mention at least one shortcoming) Martial spirit: (Long Aotian doesn't want it, it's better to be something strange) Soul skill: (Don't be too bt)

Looking for a supporting role Mao Wudi Level 94 Titled Douluo (this person has invincible defense but is too cautious) Martial Spirit: Obsidian Hobby: Collecting ores from the heart (the source of stones in the later stage of the protagonist) Soul Ring 1-4 Rock Hardening Five Earth Metamorphosis (obtaining soul power from the soil) Six Rock Spear Thrust Seven Obsidian body (the whole body is made of obsidian and is so hard that it cannot be hit) 8 Obsidian armor (absorbs soul power when attacked to strengthen the armor) 9 Obsidian space Character background: This person is too afraid of pain, so he adds all the defense points. He has basically no attack power. In terms of defense, 99-level Douluo cannot be hit. The attack power can only kill the Soul Douluo level. He likes to quarrel when he doesn't like it. He once had a fight with Tang Chen. Tang Chen can't be beaten

Based on the fact that it has been pirated for six years and has been published for two years, I think this book is okay. It does not blindly follow the group, nor kneels and licks. The battles are also realistic, and the hooks are not too high. That's it, you can read it if you like it, but forget it if you don't want to.

Be yourself, be willing to help others, come on, the starting point is that you are not so violent with others

It fits my impression of Shrek's teacher. He is so disgusting, just like when I met Canghui Academy outside the Star Dou Forest. Zhang Hui Academy is so arrogant. Did it offend Shrek? No, on the contrary, that pervert Ma Hongjun kept staring at that woman, and then he dueled her and beat her until she was almost crippled. I feel disgusted by the outlook of most Shrek people. I don't know why everyone who writes fan fiction has to hug Shrek's lap.

Many people say that the plot develops slowly, which shows that the author writes with great expectations 🤓

It would be disgusting if the heroine was not Ning Rongrong. We grew up together and Ning Rongrong already has feelings for the heroine. If we give him away as a daughter, then we can abandon it. The author, why don't you tell me in advance?

I haven't read this book yet and I don't know what to do with it. I'll give you a few suggestions: 1. If you want to write, stick to it and don't be confused. 2. If you are not good at emotional scenes, you don't have to write them. Don't break up the original couple randomly. 3. I hope this is not a stud story, it is really disgusting. 4. Please be reasonable when configuring soul rings. I will add this book to my bookshelf first and will not read it for now.