Pokémon Sky Blue

It's too good, my head hurts. Starting with a Charmander actually dissuades a lot of people. Because in the fanfic, Charizard is similar to Magikarp. ?

In fact, I was very confused. First of all, I knew that Team Rocket had basically confirmed the time traveler, but then a series of operations made me think that he was an aborigine. When I saw him using the illustrated book to scan the armor, I was basically sure that he was an aborigine. But he also said that he had seen four movies. Only elves you don't know yet will check the illustrated book. I suggest the author to figure out the setting quickly. If the setting is well handled, this book is still a good idea. After all, the subject matter is relatively new. The above are just suggestions. You can not adopt them but don't spray them.

It's better not to write this kind of time travel. The character description is like having no thoughts of a time traveler at all, just a pure aboriginal, and the foreshadowing is not strong enough, the emotions are directly **, I feel that the author takes it for granted. In short, it does not give me a strong sense of personal substitution and no resonance. Well, I tried poisoning. Come on, author, stick to it, and write better in the future＾0＾~

Please update it soon. I think the writing is very good.

It is recommended that the author change the title of the book. This title is so abnormal that I almost didn't want to click in 😅