The Legendary Trader

I have to complain a bit. The protagonist seems too impatient. Why is he in such a rush when he has superpowers? He even wants to be the house, which is incredibly dangerous. With such amazing abilities, I'm sure the house doesn't earn as much as you. It's much better to hitch a ride, it's safer. If you try to be the house and get rich, you'll get slaughtered. Those long paragraphs would be better broken down into two or three sentences each, making it flow more smoothly and comfortably.

I want to see how things develop. It seems like once the protagonist makes money in the stock market, a whole bunch of people will follow suit and buy stocks with huge sums of money. Even if you have superpowers, it's hard to say what will happen. A little kindness is appreciated, but too much kindness breeds resentment!

This is unbelievable. Trading stocks and futures with others involved? Why don't you just start a fund and charge management fees and a cut of the profits? There's no such thing as getting rich for nothing.

The author clearly doesn't understand futures trading; I suggest not writing about it. Forget about price movements; you could wipe out hundreds of thousands of yuan in a single market swing. Also, your book is called "Legendary Trader"—have you confused retail investors with professional traders?

The protagonist, a finance major, actually told me he didn't know that stock market manipulation is illegal.

I don't understand why I have been leading a few uncles to speculate in the stock market. They have no use at all except sharing their money. They have a net worth of millions to buy a house and a car, and they still ask for money from their families. Are they in such a hurry? You already have all the plug-ins, so what are you afraid of? The layout is too bad

The author's handwriting in the book is too dense, making it uncomfortable to read.

The protagonist is so naive, actually trusting that Aunt Qi. 🤮 Never trust a capitalist! Hundreds of millions or billions of dollars—who wouldn't be tempted? Underestimating human malice—if you weren't the protagonist, you wouldn't even know how you died.

The beginning was alright, but the latter part was just awful. Couldn't the author have a bigger vision when writing a novel? A few students, even if they make some money, what kind of trouble can they cause? Hundreds of millions of dollars entering the US stock market and attracting the attention of foreign capital in the foreign exchange market? They're taking themselves way too seriously.

Two major flaws. First, the protagonist's partner, the fat guy, is a terrible teammate; constantly having him act alongside the main character is pointless. Second, the rich kid asks him for help making money, working himself to the bone like he's doing someone else's work. What's the difference between this and directly asking for shares in the game?