The Road to Hegemony Begins with Private

After reading for a few minutes, all I could see was the first person who wanted to abandon the book. Leave a message specifically to support the author. If the author didn't start writing, I would also advise the author not to use the first person. But the author has already started writing. I will either secretly abandon the book or continue reading. I will definitely not deliberately ridicule the author. The starting point is always full of such lost people who speak harsh words and hurt others. They are not good at it, but they don't look good on others. The author should not take it too seriously. People with a bad mentality are not only uncomfortable with you, they are also uncomfortable with themselves. As for the person who points out the lack of details instead of venting, that is your noble person and the person who helps you grow. Finally, I would like to encourage the author. The author is very good, and he signed a contract for his first book. I have a brother who wrote his first book for more than a year and still had more than 1 million words, but he still didn't sign it. Some of the reviews were outrageous, but he stuck to his ideas and successfully signed a contract for his second book. It ranked well both on the new book list and the rising star list. So, come on, author!

There is no directory and I don't want to see it 😵

I can't say enough good things about this book! But it's definitely not bad! Time travel first, no problem! No problem for farmers either! No problem with first person! ! The first problem lies in what I think is that as a cannon fodder-level soldier, your promotion speed is ridiculous, and the promotion process is too far-fetched! As a soldier at the lowest level, an officer at the lowest level, a group army commander, or a theater commander, how can it be so easy to see him! And my trust in you comes too quickly! It's too easy! The second is the Kingdom of Sira itself! The author's setting may be to make it easier for the protagonist to gain power and control the state machinery! But this also limits national strength and domestic foundation! Some people may say Germany after World War I! First of all, Germany's own strength is definitely the best in Europe. The defeated Germany is still in the first group. Without super strong industrial and technological strength, there would be no need for a mustache! As for the Kingdom of Xila, it is in a period of economic transformation. The domestic industrial and technological level is obviously second-rate or even third-rate! And how many years did the protagonist take the lead? ? You are traveling through time, but the foundation is there. Especially aviation technology is really not a simple 1+1! ! The protagonist can activate the halo, but this long-jump development is too hasty! Finally there is the war itself! In the description of war, it can be said that it is very careful, including micro and macro, individual characterization and team description! There are also descriptions of things other than war! However, the description of the overseas colonies and several other countries and the development of the war in the later period are a bit hasty! ! I hope future books will get better and better! ! Come on! !

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Although I also feel that Orientals are the most expensive, I still resent that in this situation, someone with just a little bit of Oriental blood leads the Orientals. This is too dramatic, and there is no need for the setting of Orientals.

If this book hadn't been written in the first person, because it was written about World War I, many people would probably read it, because there are relatively few people writing about the First World War, and now everyone has read too many literary works. It would be a bit difficult to read the book in the first person 😅 and there are no chapter names in this book. . . I just want to persuade a lot of people to quit. If this is changed, there should be a lot of people reading it. However, I have written nearly 300 pages of this. If I change it, it would be better to rewrite it.

After reading a few pictures, I found a lot of problems, Not to mention that bells have been around for a long time. If you don't have one, you can smash one by hand with a piece of rotten iron. The alarm device made of cans and nailed bullet casings is quite ineffective, and even after so many years of fighting, even a pig can think of something like this. Moreover, the lieutenant has no right and will not transfer you to the regiment headquarters for such a trivial matter, unless he is too idle and wants to find someone to chat with. Moreover, cans and bullet casings must be recycled and reused. Metal is also a scarce resource in wartime and needs to be recycled multiple times. Bullet casings can be rubbed out by hand to produce unstable earth ammunition. Another point is that the artillery will test fire and calibrate before carrying out covered bombardment. At this time, soldiers will enter bomb shelters and air-raid shelters to avoid, leaving only sentries to observe the enemy's situation. The underground space of the trenches is humid and hot, easy to accumulate water, and is full of mice and cockroaches. The sanitary environment is also extremely poor because of the sick and wounded and the dirty blood and minced meat that are difficult to clean after the war. Especially in summer, minced meat and rotting corpses will attract flies and plague.

Some personal opinions: The relationships and emotions between the characters are too novice, as if they belong to junior high school students or high school students. The narrative is too streamlined and lacks in-depth descriptions of all aspects of the kingdom, such as politics, economy, culture, institutions, geography, people's livelihood, etc.

Another protagonist who reveals his identity as a time traveler

If nothing else, I quit 90% of the time after reading the chapters.

I just read Chapter 21, but I haven't read the rest yet. After reading the previous chapters, I feel that the first person is not unacceptable, but the description of some characters and plots feels very childish and unreal. It can be said that I like this subject in terms of the background of the story, but the author may wish to strengthen the details. In fact, in the first person, I can count the number of times I can read on one hand. Generally speaking, the subject and background story of this book actually has great potential, but the author's writing skills are not very good, but it is understandable for newcomers after all. In fact, I'm quite looking forward to the author's new book. Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง (the above is only my personal opinion)

I have been chasing the book for a while and I have some thoughts after reading so many chapters First: Industrial Development! Even if there is a certain industrial foundation, such a big step in development in just a few years is indeed too abrupt! The technological upgrades to aircraft and tanks feel a bit far-fetched. Second Weapon Selection Now the Army of the Kingdom of Shiraz uses semi-automatic rifles + submachine guns combined with squad light machine guns (doesn't it feel like M1 + Sampson)? As supplementary firepower, can we consider equipping grenade launchers? This thing is easy to carry and add two to each squad. The current trenches will be very useful in future urban operations. The process is not complicated and the cost is not high! Although it is a little devil's thing, it is really useful! Then there is the 92 infantry gun, which is light and flexible and suitable for various terrains! Taking the 92 Infantry Cannon as a template and adding Silla's own rapid-fire (similar to Miss 75) technology! It can make up for the firepower limit very well! Now Shiraz is 152 and 105. These are division-level firepower. What about the battalion and company level? 92 Can run more than 200 kilograms. 5-6 People can dismantle and run. Install and use! !

I really don't want to watch first person, it feels so awkward

Two hits without tools at 900 meters, why fight anymore? Let's go and film Avengers

I just read the first chapter and a dozen "I"s in a row tried to persuade me to quit.

Can't each of these pictures even have a name?

This novel is written like a fucking meeting.

It was written by an elementary school student, or an innocent elementary school student, right?

What do you think? I, I, I, I, I, I, I, I, I

I couldn't stand it anymore when I saw the protagonist reveal that he was traveling in time. It's so annoying. I'm leaving.

Is this a complete book with a thousand chapters? What a coincidence!

The depictions of characters, battlefields, armies, and countries are all quite good. But after reading these chapters, I feel that being promoted from private to second lieutenant in a few days is a bit too dramatic.

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