This Journey to the West Is a Bit Weird

Plot post (Chapter 13~14) (Please give Loli more details in the starting point client) This time let's take a look at the content and details of the second chapter. What do these two chapters talk about? After Su Wu shed cow tears, he saw the living corpse in the ancient well, and then triggered the story information. The story collection sealed the story fragments, and then Su Wu went to the world of living corpses and became the living corpse fragments in her body. The woman took his daughter to find his father, but after finding Later, his father ignored the mother and daughter, causing the woman to be completely immersed in the story's message It seems that the content expressed is not very much, but in fact, if you look closely, it is very meaningful. Let's not talk about the foreshadowing and details, just talk about what it expresses, which is thought-provoking enough, even though it is written like this It's for plot, but the story of that woman is enough for us to think deeply about. A person abandons his relatives, children, and friends for fame and wealth. In reality, there are many such people. I believe some readers know them and may even have experienced them. Such behavior is really sad enough. , If you encounter such a situation and you also have a story in your body, then you will be devastated and influenced by the story's message. I feel that Loli wrote such a plot not only for the plot, but also partly to express her disgust for such behavior (purely my own guess). Okay, now let's talk about the details and foreshadowing. What are the foreshadowings in these two chapters? First, let's take a look at the first sentence on page 9 of Chapter 14 (it's page 9 here): "No... It doesn't matter... We'll wait a little longer, your father must not have recognized us, right, he didn't recognize us." This sentence is very obvious, even obviously overdone, and obviously self-deception. In fact, at this time, the woman already knew the result but still deceived herself, telling herself and her daughter that he just didn't recognize us. Is this scene very familiar? In fact, we deceive ourselves many times. For example, I know clearly... But... Don't talk about it or talk about sad things. Let's look at another detail in Chapter 14. Let's look at page 12 (I'm still looking at page 12 here). "The most important thing is what to do with Xiaoya." This sentence expresses a mother's love for her child. Even when she is dying, she still thinks about her daughter. The author also writes next that there are many such things around us. Mothers are willing to give everything for their children. In fact, not only mothers but also fathers are the same. In my opinion, these two chapters are the ones that gave me the deepest insights among the existing chapters. I have to say that Loli felt that she put her heart into writing these two chapters. In fact, more than these two chapters, I feel that Loli put her heart and soul into every chapter she wrote. Never stop updating! Don't stop updating! Don't stop updating! Don't stop updating!

At the age of 18, you went to college. 20 years old, your sophomore year is over, and you start to regret your childish behavior in the first two years so you start working hard 22 years old you graduate from college, but find that cannot find a job that satisfies you Work 26 years old, You see everyone around you getting married, The cost of the wedding increases year by year Going home during the Spring Festival, your parents changed from taking you to visit relatives to taking you to meet your blind date Meeting more than a dozen girls Every time you feel that you are a little worse than that girl 28 years old That year, you met a girl who had a similar experience to you You guys chatted together but not together She said: You are not bad You He took a sip of Coke and said: You too You are not sure whether you like her yet The parents of both parties have already arranged an engagement party The week before the wedding, you went out to drink with your friends You said you didn't want to get married, My friend said, you just think too much. Who didn't come here like this? This life. 29 years old, You finally got married. The wedding was neither big nor small, with just a few friends coming I have saved money for several years to realize my dream Take a ride In this private temple party of 100 people The wedding was in the middle The emcee wore a standard commercial smile He shouted to the relatives and friends in the audience: Do you want them to kiss each other? Those people in the audience started cheering together I don't know why you simply kissed me The two of them returned to their original position You whispered: I love you I couldn't understand that one yesterday. You flipped the model bride stood for a moment and said: I love you too You weren't sure if she said it to you Just like you weren't sure if she said it to her After the wedding, there was no romance as you imagined You listen to the bride in the outer room calculating her share of the money Thinking about how it has only been two years, How did it become like this? Thinking about it, I fell asleep on the wedding night 30 years old, She quit her job because she was pregnant. Work and raise babies at home You gradually gain some status in the company Manage a dozen people in your hands Responsible for a project independently The car worth about 200,000 yuan that was given as a dowry before marriage has become your sole possession. Enjoy But you still dare not relax Every time you work overtime There are complaints and grievances on the other end of the phone But you can't argue about anything Who made her pregnant with your child At this moment Both her parents and your parents are on this side unconditionally 31 years old, The child was born I spent 100,000 yuan on pregnancy tests and hospital expenses But it doesn't matter You look at your child, You like it however you like You are as happy as if this is your new baby 32 years old, This is the year you least want to repeat in your life Sleep 3 hours on average The child makes a fuss every hour The next day he drags his eyes out of sleep Go to work and the boss says you don't work at work When you go home, your wife says you don't work You have been thinking for a long time and don't understand, then who will do the work? The car that you have been driving for 3 years has become your real home You no longer complain about the heavy traffic on the road You even begin to wish to be stuck in traffic for a while longer Go home , you turned off the engine Lighted a cigarette in the car This is the happiest ten minutes of your day In front of the car is fame and wealth, in the back is firewood, rice, oil and salt 35 years old Because your health is getting worse You work less and less overtime The speed of promotion is getting slower and slower After get off work that day, your wife told you The child is going to kindergarten Bilingual, 3,000 a month You frowned, and you were already impatient Lao Wang's children, 6,000 a month" "You are already like this, do you want your children to lose too? " You didn't say anything, and went back to the house and transferred 6,000 yuan to your wife You originally planned to celebrate your birthday with this money and buy a new computer 38 years old, The child is in the first grade The teacher said that the first grade is the most critical, and it is important to lay a good foundation You smiled and said, yes, yes, teacher, please take more care of me The teacher who welcomed the freshmen looked at your confused face He pointed out a clear way for you "Extracurricular tutoring class, 2200 a month" 40 years old The child is in the third grade The teacher said that the third grade is the most important, it is very important to connect the past and the next You smiled and said: Yes, yes, I am planning to sign up for another cram school br> 44 years old, The child is in junior high school One day when he comes home, he says to you Dad, I want to learn piano You have no hesitation You think you have gotten used to it over the years But you can never say the sentence "Dad can't afford it now" Fortunately, the child understands better Things He said: Dad is fine, how about I learn the ocarina first You look at such a sensible child, but you are not happy 46 years old, The child went to a good high school One day you were in a meeting and received a call from the teacher The phone said that your child had a fight in school Tell you to come You are submissive Take a leave with the leader who is 5 years younger than you Go to school and get scolded by the teacher again It's just that line As parents, you know how to work and whether you can accompany your children You look at this teacher, it's a bit ridiculous It seems At that time, he said: Parents have to work hard outside He is not the same person who makes more money to let his children take extra classes 50 years old, the child went to college very promising, he is a scholar you can't understand the major he studied you only know that a job is not necessarily easy to find and learn It's expensive You and him want to talk late at night Prepared half a pound of white wine and a plate of peanuts You said the words you once hated the most You still have to think about your future work Choose a popular major Life is more important than love You went from communicating to quarreling You said Now, you are old You may not be able to beat this 18-year-old kid You can't talk to him, you can only say: I am your father! The kid looks at you and knows that no matter how much you argue, it is useless The drinking party that established your final dignity broke up on bad terms You didn't hear it clearly The kid seemed to be nagging on the way back to his house. I muttered "I don't want to live like you" Why are you crying? The wine must be too spicy, right The wine must be too spicy 55 years old, The child is working, and he seems to understand you a little But you turned it around and said not to compromise 56 years old, The child is also married You ask him if he likes that girl He was stunned and said: Yes 60 years old, I have worked hard all my life and want to go out for a walk The person next to me has passed 30 years You still can't tell whether you like it or not You started planning the travel route After so many years You still have differences and are still arguing At a certain moment, you think This might be good Everything is ready The son said: Mom and Dad, I am too busy at work Can you help me take care of the child You canceled your ticket and went back to 30 years ago 70 years old, The children have grown up, You don't have to worry about it every day You made up your mind and said: you must go for a trip But the crutches at hand can only support you to walk to the garden downstairs 75 years old, You are in the hospital bed There are people around you, You see the doctor shaking his head in a daze The people around you have solemn expressions You understand, you are going to die You don't feel a trace of fear You suddenly ask yourself, When did I die? You think of that wedding at the age of 30 It turns out that you were going to die at that time According to the customary 3 seconds before death, your brain is going through a revolving door Throwback to your 75 years of life The pictures pass one by one One second, two seconds and two seconds pass You watch with an expressionless face. Looking at the memories in these two seconds Suddenly you laughed at the third second It turns out that you have returned to the year when you were 15 years old You saw a boy He was holding a bag of milk and carrying a schoolbag Running under the balcony of another girl's house The boy looked in the window That was your crush when you were 15 years old That girl You can't remember what she looked like For the last second you tried to remember Then you finally laughed 3 seconds passed and the people around you suddenly started crying You may not have heard clearly The last noisy sound you heard It was a group of teenagers in their fifteenth or sixteenth year. Crying and shouting: Let's watch this together Journey to the West is a bit weird

(Please loli, please add more details in the Qidian client. I want to apply for an operation officer) Ahem, I'm here again, yes, it's me This time it's mainly about the background. First of all, everyone should be familiar with the background of Journey to the West, not to mention the Monkey King in it. Is using Journey to the West as the background a good or bad thing? In fact, it is not difficult to distinguish. You can tell it through a few conditions 1. The fit between the setting of the work and the background (This setting of the story is very good. It has no limits, which means that it is difficult for the general world to accommodate it for a long time. For example, you can easily collapse in the martial arts world, just like Although the charm value of the book is not broken, in fact, if you imagine that if the protagonist continues to develop, he will not be able to stay on earth, or a powerful villain will appear, or he will go to other worlds. If the protagonist is too powerful, he will definitely not be able to stay on earth. And what about Journey to the West? The world view of Journey to the West is extremely complex and grand. Even if the protagonist is more powerful than the scope of Journey to the West in the later stage, he can also revive gods and demons from ancient times. In comparison, it would be more vulgar to keep traveling through time while reading) 2. The compatibility between the plot of the work and the background (As for the plot of the work, the plot will actually change with the background, but in some circumstances It won't work if it is paired with an inappropriate plot. A plot with story development can be matched with most categories, but the most suitable ones should be urban, fairy tales, and two-dimensional. These three, in the city, there is a story genre in a quiet life, which is very reasonable. Then there is the fairy tale, and it can be done precisely because of the story genre. The newly born Xianxia can also be the story species derived from the background of Xianxia, and the story master is a special training system, and the mythology cultivation chosen by Loli is more suitable. As for mythology, most powerful story species should be mythology, so the background chosen by Loli is extremely suitable. As for the second time I won't go into details if it's Yuan) 3. The compatibility of protagonist factors such as the protagonist's golden finger and the protagonist's personality with the background (Although there are not many Loli now, it can be barely seen. The protagonist should be a person with a strong sense of responsibility, a certain sense of adventure, and a relatively cautious person. Such a person is suitable In what environment? Such a person is more suitable to lead a force forward. Logically speaking, such a person is more suitable for history, fantasy, etc., But Journey to the West is also very suitable. The protagonist can lead his village in the early stage and the human race in the later stage. However, there are many other ways, such as playing with the Journey to the West team, and the Journey to the West world. Although it does not seem to be the most suitable, it is very suitable with the factor of the story. After all, it is a supernatural factor, so it seems that the protagonist of Loli and the background of Journey to the West are also very suitable) 4. Based on the above three conditions, the background of Journey to the West chosen by Loli is very suitable. I have to say that Loli has a really good vision. 5. In one sentence Never stop updating! Don't stop updating! Don't stop updating! Don't stop updating!

I feel that the writing of this book is very bright, combining Journey to the West with suspense and ghosts. Most people think that Journey to the West may be nothing more than cultivating immortals and asking questions, but this book goes in the opposite direction. Especially the setting of the story is refreshing. However, I am very curious about the author's setting of the four masters and disciples of Tang Monk. After all, it is thought-provoking that the immortals and demons do not have the purpose of obtaining scriptures.

The beginning was okay at first, but then a younger sister came out, so forget it. The key is the description of the younger sister and the inner writing. I really couldn't stand it. Generally, having younger sisters is already poisonous enough. Adding an ignorant younger sister to the story, I couldn't stand it anymore and walked away. I don't know if the writing at the back is good or not, but I couldn't stand the front. I couldn't help it.

(Ask the author to improve it in Qidian Reading) 1. According to the author's other two books, the author's writing style is good, and the story setting is also innovative. In summary, the quality of this book is definitely good 2. But in terms of the setting of this book, it has similarities with the previous book in terms of charm, but the background is different. Picking out the setting of the story, in fact, it has loopholes in the world of Journey to the West, but I guess the author will also think of this, aside from this Not to mention, there is actually no limit to the story setting. Although it will be infected, its potential is unlimited. To say that it is infected actually means that the control is not in place. Assuming complete control, the entire story will not be infected in the hands of one person (purely my personal opinion, I don't know if Loli will write it like this). In addition, the setting of the story should be considered innovative (I have not seen anything similar to this setting in 5 years of reading books), so this book is fresh. 3. Based on the above two conditions, this book is not bad at all, but the rest is the plot. I hope Loli will not make the plot too cliche, so that the quality of the book will be even better. 4. Also, Loli has a group of lovely book friends like us to cheer her on! ! ! 5. The last point Don't be a eunuch, don't be a eunuch! No eunuchs! No eunuchs!

Today, our focus is on the introduction. What is the main factor in whether the introduction is excellent or not? In fact, it is not difficult to distinguish. It is mainly a matter of fit. However, in addition to fit, there is another big issue, which is attraction. In fact, for passers-by, attraction is far more important than fit, because it is related to whether he will click in to read, and then it is fit. Generally, when a person clicks in, he will have a subjective concept. For example, for example, your book review is very passionate, but inside it is Buddha. It's a bit exaggerated to say this about the series, but once the introduction is different from the content, hopeful readers will be disappointed. For example, if a person likes a more passionate novel and gets in after reading your introduction, but the content disappoints him, he will most likely give up. Therefore, the fit between the introduction and the content (as well as the title of the book) is extremely important. To evaluate the quality of an introduction, these two points can be used to distinguish it. Let's take a look at the introduction of this book 1. Attraction (Let's talk about the issue of attraction. Is this introduction attractive? I think it is, especially the last two sentences. I want Tang Monk to return here. This sentence is very interesting. How to return? How to return? How will the protagonist enter the Great Tribulation of Journey to the West? What kind of story will there be? It will be very attractive. And then look at the last sentence "Wu Chengen writes and meditates; this Journey to the West is a bit weird" is also very interesting. Attractive, what's so weird about it? How does the protagonist survive in this weird Journey to the West? Or how does the protagonist make this weird Journey to the West? This will make readers have questions and start reading the book) 2. (Let's talk about the degree of fit. Although the degree of fit is not much better now, it can be seen that the degree of fit is still quite high. That is to say, the setting of the story is fully displayed in the introduction, and the introduction has some supernatural elements, and the content is also complete. It has a supernatural charm, and the last sentence of the introduction also fully highlights the title of the book and tightens the title. From what I said above, you can find that the introduction fits very well) 3. Based on the above two points, the quality of the introduction of this book is very high. I have to say that Loli's writing is really good. Come on Loli!                                     4                                                            ！ Don't stop updating! Don't stop updating! Don't stop updating!

The first time I read the first book of Lolita, it was an accident. I just clicked on the link under the girls' website of Qidian. I accidentally entered the boys' website, and then I saw Time Stop 499 listed in the limited edition. At the beginning, I didn't have it yet. I was too concerned about it, thinking it was just an ordinary online game novel, but after carefully reading the introduction, I discovered that it was a supernatural novel. I thought I was quite brave 😜, so I wanted to read this book, but I couldn't stop reading it. I have become a Loli fan. When Loli's second book Charm Value was released, I was a little confused. It was the first time I saw the concept of story type. Out of curiosity, I applied for my first role in life, Yuan Ziyi. However, the subject matter may be relatively niche, and Charm Value entered the palace 😡, for the son Yi's silent condolences 🌹🌹🌹 The third book, this Journey to the West, is a book with the popular theme of Journey to the West and a niche theme of stories. It has to be said that Loli has made progress and drags people into this pit, and he will not be able to get out. Back to the main text, the background of this book is Journey to the West. The protagonist Su Wuxin is the young owner of Sujiazhuang next door to Gao Laozhuang, and has a marriage contract with Gao Cuilan. He also obtained the seeds of living corpses through a mysterious story collection. If Zhu Bajie is ignored, it is considered a top match. And if calculated according to this time, Tang Seng should not have set off yet, after all, Zhu Bajie has not yet set off. After getting married to Gao Cuilan, the protagonist still has the opportunity to work hard and fight off Zhu Bajie. In the next few chapters, the original worldview of Journey to the West is gradually subverted. The story seeds are gradually becoming more and more important. Alongside them are the warriors. (A weak comment, the warriors in Journey to the West are so fantasy.) And the living corpses that attack people can actually rely on killing people to gather the seeds of the story. It really opened my eyes. --------Breaking line----Here are some of my reasonings-----The current plot is that the protagonist has basically solved the food crisis in Sujiazhuang, and the next problem is to deal with the living corpses. However, I think that after this is completed, the protagonist's living corpse seed will be further improved, and then have more strength to fight against Zhu Bajie who will come out soon. When Tang Monk and others come, he will probably be discovered by Guanyin and others, and it should not be a good thing. Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo 😭😭 It's only been twelve chapters, and I'm pushing the next thing. I feel like I'm going to get slapped in the face. Complete

I'm not looking for trouble. It's just a matter of pure wonder that people in this world have not been exterminated. In just a short time, the protagonist has encountered many things. If the protagonist didn't kill everyone, so many people would die in a year. How long does it take for a human being to grow from birth to adulthood? Not logical.

It is a food, but it still lacks some feeling of heat. The current plot and character positioning have always been fascinating. Before Chapter 193, the protagonist went back to the past and kept saying that he wanted to change the future. However, currently, what he did was done according to the historical trajectory, and he did it under known circumstances. It was a bit confusing (inexplicably I thought of some TV series as well, and I felt that I lost my wits every time. The plot was for the sake of the plot). I hope the content will be changed later. Maybe I have read too many fantasy novels and I am a little disappointed. Don't say such things if you are afraid of changing the future. The format of the novel is getting smaller and smaller, and looking at it now, there is a feeling that the protagonist himself is the source of all disasters in the world. If the protagonist does not cause trouble, people in this world will live a better life. Except for the monster race, which is a bit miserable, but the monster race has nothing to do with our human race, so it's miserable. The setting of immortal gods has always been a failure, with inexplicable hostility, helping the human race to eliminate disasters in the early stage, but not doing anything in the later stage. It didn't offend the human race anyway, and then they shouted to overthrow the immortal gods. If the protagonist is a demon race, I don't think there's any problem. But if the protagonist is a human race, I think it's a big problem. Have you really watched Monkey King too much? The buttocks are crooked. In addition, when I watched it before, the introduction did not consider the main character to be Sun Wukong, so I found it interesting. Looking at the format, he is going to be Sun Wukong, so I will catch up to Sun Wukong. The operation is lousy, it is a waste of the story and this setting. Obviously it can be manipulated in many ways and has great potential, something that can redefine the rules of the world. If stories can only be disaster horror stories, they should be called disaster stories.

I only read the beginning, and I would like to share my thoughts. The subject matter is good, and it has a bit of a Cthulhu meaning, but the author is not skilled enough, and what he writes makes me feel boring. The description of the characters gives people an awkward feeling, just like the dialogue in a mindless fantasy novel, which is a bit unreadable. If the writing style can be distinctive, such as funny, or More foreshadowing, or resistance to fate, etc., So that I still feel that there is hope for success, and there are also complaints about the characters. The protagonist's sister is called Su Xiaoyou. This style of name coupled with her innocent and overly innocent character is really confusing, and feels incompatible with the entire world. These are my thoughts after reading more than ten chapters. If you have different opinions, welcome to discuss.

The writing feels inexplicably true, and coupled with my rich imagination, it scares me, but this book is super good

No, it's too little. I saw that I didn't have enough and wanted to subscribe, but I was afraid that I would die from it, so I automatically subscribed to you. Come on, Lolita

I'm here, I'm here. Don't stop writing a book. It's pretty good.

Looking at the back, I found that the protagonist now relied on his golden finger to go back to the past, try his best to pretend to be cool, and make up stories, and then return to the present, relying on his previous pretending to be cool, and became more powerful. In short, it is a time loop. Go to the future to change some things and set up the scene. Then, go back to the future and it will naturally become amazing.

The writing is very good and novel. It explains Journey to the West from another angle. Now I like to read weird novels and a different world of immortality.

Recommendation: I've given you the monthly pass, come on! I really like your book and I will always support you!

Come on, the author writes beautifully. Come on

I personally feel that, first, the title of the book is not attractive. Second, is the protagonist Yu Sunhouhou in your profile?     ，😊😊😊😊         ，🤓🤓🤓🤓        But after traveling to the West, 😅😅😅😅 Who doesn't know that my grandson is cowardly! ! ! 🤫🤫🤫🤫                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         No matter how much I change, I can't get around them.

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The plot is good! I wish there were more head-on battles, but I always feel bad relying on bluffing.

To be honest. I quite like the style of this book. I finished watching it in two days with limited free time, and I felt it was not enough. Maybe I just like this kind of weird things, maybe it's because Mr. Ye loves dragons, but no matter what, I think this book is quite good. The world is a very big picture, but if it were to be written in more than one million words, I don't think it would be possible to write down so many details. I hope the author can write more, write more carefully, and express what he thinks as much as possible. I also hope that the author will not change the style of the work because of the words of some readers. After all, writing in this style can only satisfy the interests of a small number of readers. This book doesn't want to be a dud, let alone a eunuch. Come on! More sperm? ! Full order! My virginity is reserved for you!

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Why does every novel about Journey to the West boast about Zhu Bajie's fighting prowess? After reading the original work, you will know that Zhu Bajie is a fart character who is weak in combat.

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