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The creativity is quite good, but the main character has a problem with his IQ. Can he increase his strength, so why not use it earlier? You have to wait for the battle to be used.

Later, my luck changed and I was really persuaded to quit.

No one would think that adding luck is weak

The protagonist's performance really doesn't fit the character of a top student. He knew clearly that his classmate had killed him, but he didn't kill him right away. Instead, he gave the opportunity for his enemy to cause trouble for him again and again? ? And then it has to lead to a bunch of plots later! Tianzhu had a grudge against him, and he was often chased and killed by Tianzhu, and then he was passively chased and killed! I never take the initiative to cause trouble for others! Is this still a top student? ! I ordered a hundred chapters and couldn't stand it anymore!

It was okay at first, but later on the story line was grinding and the plot was a bit draggy. The conflict always had to involve the gourd baby to save grandpa, one after another. It is recommended to just stick to it

The emotional line is too naive, it would be better not to have it at all, and it would add a bit of character. Because the emotional line seems a bit watery in the novel, it will never be a big hit.

The female ghost He Xiaoyue was too discouraged. The protagonist actually let an uncontrollable female ghost who was a powerful ghost a second ago possess her, and even let her suck Yang Qi at will.

Are you sure it's fantasy, not romance or urban? It's a no-brainer to recruit people and give them experience, and all of them are for the female protagonist, and then the relationship between the female protagonist and the male protagonist is the same as a romance. If you don't say it, I won't say it. Please divide the category into urban romance.

Regarding the male protagonist's training skills: Why can't Zhao Yun's skills and the skills passed down from his family be practiced at the same time? They are exactly the two sides of water, hardness turns into ice, and femininity turns into clouds...

Maybe I would like to change the goddess's favor to teasing. In the novel, luck is equal to an extra half of Long Aotian or no talent (if you write invincible, it means that the later data will jump, and if you limit it, it means there is no luck)

This emotional line is too abrasive. The heroine is unclear. In contrast, the hero is such a waste.

The librarian persuaded me to quit, and I was jealous during that period.

Hehe, it's very well written. "The Growth of All Heavens and Worlds" is here to visit, please stay tuned! Oli gives.

Psychic energy is consumed at 100%?

I thought the protagonist was a mechanical type, but turned out to be a warrior, and I was disappointed.

Just don't be a eunuch. . . . . .

See the last chapter. . . See yourself a little bit. . .