I'm Really Not a Boss

Raising and Raising is actually finished, with fewer words than I expected 😭😭 It's been too long. . I almost forgot the previous feeling. Gotta make up for it. This book is really special, very good-looking and not watery. It's just that the emotion isn't written well. I always feel that Dong Mengyao got it very easily 😅

I kind of regret subscribing. I feel like it won't be interesting anymore.

The multi-cultivation system was well written in the beginning and contained a lot of foreshadowings. However, updates were interrupted and the writing was sloppy. The protagonist suddenly became a tenth-level cosmic level inexplicably. It feels like after defeating the divine weapon, you collect a wave of resources and sell them, and then buy a few thousand-year-old talismans, or a long-lived talisman comes out later and jumps directly to level 111 or 12. It feels like it is almost a brainless upgrade in the system flow.

Lin Qingqing is one of the many stunning beauties who like the male protagonist. What the male protagonist pursues is the supreme realm in life, and many of them find it difficult to keep up with the male protagonist's crazy pace. Without excellent qualifications, most people will be intimidated and sigh with excitement! It's a pity for the infatuated girl in a certain field who is eagerly waiting for her return.

In the first twenty chapters, before the entrance banquet, there was a feeling that the high-quality products on the shelves would exceed 10,000 yuan each. Later, the entrance banquet and the licking of the heroine were slightly flawed, but the flaws were not concealed. After all, the protagonist is an ordinary person, not a cultivator. He is a reborn, destined protagonist, with a mind. It's close to a demon, and the level of pretense and slap in the face is OK. The behavior of the children of the aristocratic family and the distant relatives of the nouveau riche can be considered intelligent, and then... Then don't you feel that it is getting further and further away from the topic, and further and further away from the classification... If the novel is classified as urban... .. I haven't mentioned the fairy grass seedlings... But this is fantasy... The world of high martial arts... The world view laid out by the author is also quite large... After all, becoming a god is a first-level entry (probably), why not leave the pretense and slaps in the face to the academy... If you want the protagonist to help the star, at least you have to pay an equal price... Not all plots are the same... But so far, there are no minor poisons... Only a few minor poisons... The above is my personal review. I hope the author can write a platinum-rated work.

Later on, the protagonist's character became a bit flamboyant, and he felt like he was deliberately teasing other people, which made me feel uncomfortable while reading it Maybe it's because of the plot But the previous part was pretty good.

I don't understand a bit. The value of that piece of land is very high in the eyes of ordinary people, but it should be worthless at the level of a singer. It is not a cultivation resource. Why does the protagonist still like Lin Qingqing? Lin Qingqing only uses it as a spare.

I just want to ask you, can you be longer? It just disappears when you look at it. Are you so short?

Fortunately, I am chasing 6 copies at the same time, but your output is low.

Welcome everyone to comment First of all, congratulations to Fast Food for trying a new style that you like. I am also glad that Fast Food is still persisting. Secondly, whether it is the style or the image of the protagonist, I personally think that as long as it is distinctive and unprecedented, it is worth trying. After all, it is just for entertainment. The setting of the final book is still very good, but it needs to be less xxxx, and pay attention to the speed of the plot and add more passion to the dullness. In short, I hope to persist

The book is really a good book. So far, in these more than 100 chapters, the background setting is good, the writing is good, and the story is good. However, the character setting is not well controlled, and details such as the emotional disputes of the characters are not handled effectively enough. To put it simply, it is more poisonous and more refreshing. Recommended, but be prepared to resist poison.

If you don't update it more, I'll send you the blade.

N Change it

Come on, come on, I will follow you from your first book to now. I will support you.

The book is a good book, but I just can't stand it. The main character's name is exactly the same as that of a classmate of mine. Every time I see this name, I think of him. That classmate of mine is still a fool.

I haven't read the rest yet, but I think the protagonist is very childish in the beginning. An uncle in his 30s is irritated with a teenage student. It's hard to tell that the protagonist is an adult who has experienced social baptism, and he has a middle-class air.

The characters in the book feel like they have the psychological level of street gangsters. This is a book written in 2020, and the psychological description is not even at the level of 10 years old. If you don't ask for old foxes, don't come here to bombard me.

Just say a few words, it's just a suggestion, I hope you'll read it. Let's talk about the advantages first, 1. There are no big problems with your content. Some minor logical loopholes are harmless. After all, it is an online article. The overall writing style is okay, and the pretentious part is not too stiff. At the starting point of these two years, no big mistakes are considered excellent. This is the advantage. 2. Start by pretending to be a boss. This is a relatively popular theme in the past two years. Although the popularity has dropped, there is still a wave of leeks to be harvested. This means that your development prospects are good and there is still room for you. 3. The theme of the heavens is a bit tired of aesthetics, but the idea of ​​​​matching the last metaverse is good. Although it is not a pioneer, it is not too backward. Let me tell you some suggestions 1. There is actually no big problem with your rhythm control, but the number of updates is not an advantage. This also leads to the consideration of book maintenance when updating, reducing the activity of this book. Of course, I can't blame you, it's just bad luck. If it was a few years ago, your updates would have been quite small, but in the past two years, you have been bitten by the beasts, especially the tentacle monsters that dominate the list now, which are quite hateful. 2. Climax. The excitement of the climax is not intensive at present, and it cannot give a sense of surprise, and there is less calculation. You must know that the boss starts out, either invincible or wise. Otherwise, there will be too many flaws. After all, some antiques that have lived for hundreds, thousands or even several epochs cannot all be regarded as idiots, right? 3. You can add some off-site remarks, that is, interact more with readers. If the author has something to say, you can use it at the end of the chapter. After all, if you want to copy a book review, you must first make the book review popular. Otherwise, why would you copy it? Moreover, popular book reviews can also increase reader stickiness. The above are all personal thoughts. If you like, can you add more details? I hope it will be helpful to you, and I hope this book will reach a higher level.

The author deliberately describes the protagonist's scumbag nature as slightly uncomfortable. As a reborn person, a person with a determined and ambitious life, is it really possible to go out of his way to become a scumbag? Even a little perverted! Is such a person suitable to be the protagonist? When a normal person has such an opportunity, he will only try his best to increase his strength, and even do whatever it takes. How can he pretend to be a scumbag and be a scumbag? The quality of a work does not lie in its originality, but in the setting of the process.

In the middle of the break, the starry sky power began to accelerate, faster and faster. There was a fight at the cosmic level, and the fairyland chapter was skipped directly. There were three or four of the Thirteen Forbidden Worlds. The unification of the universe depended on Yang Fan's wish. The original phantom of the final boss was inexplicable. The final ending did not achieve the highest level, indicating that the protagonist of the next book may have the same framework. Also, no more updates🐴

I didn't expect that the store manager's current writing style would become like this. Yes, keep pace with the times. Quietly: I grew up reading the store manager's books 😁😁😁

The writing is quite good, and it suits my taste, but there are few chapters, which is not enough to read. Still, this kind of casual protagonist is comfortable to watch. Isn't it natural to have the ability to have a few more women? Do you want to be a eunuch or a monk if you have the ability? Then why do you have to practice so hard?

The previous chapters were quite boring to read, and some of the plots didn't have any sense of normal thinking.

There are a total of 11 levels of cultivation in the main world, but the protagonist has only reached level 4 in Chapter 412. What should we do with the remaining 200 chapters? It sucks?

I want to ask, which consciousness came to the world, and which novel by Fang Han is from

Personally, I feel that Lin Qingqing should just accept it! After all, can you give this beautiful girl to someone else? At least he can be given the identity of a lover! Although her attitude towards the male protagonist is not very good, these can be solved later.

Although it's a bit white, it's really cool to be able to resist him. It makes me feel relaxed all over. I'll give you a 1,000-point reward. Come on, author, I'll keep an eye on you.

Why do I feel that this book is not too bad in terms of perspective? Is it because I have read too many villains and protagonists before?😠

If you don't agree with me, you'll drive. It's well written.

First of all, congratulations on being on the shelves! How can I put it this way, as an old bookworm, this is the most intelligent book I have read in the past two years! The plot is reasonable and fascinating, especially the forward and backward writings are logical, and the rare thing is that there is no hydrology. It is much better than those books that dominate the list by relying on hydrology, thinking about everything and writing without considering the logic before and after. There is only one word for a good book: reward!!!