The End of Illusion

Those who have seen it give a squeak... Squeak first as a sign of respect squeak...

Zhang San... The name is good...

La la la the third one, scatter flowers 🌸

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The author's imagination is honeycomb type. The problem is that you are having fun watching it, but your lower part is gone. Can you please grow it back so that I can cut it again 🔪

You may not like to hear my personal opinion. Why did you put those expressions in there? And why do you add so many suffixes? It can be added to the text. You have to believe that my editor will be disgusted when he sees it. You'd better change it.

No, this is not the type I expected... But I still read a few chapters. Overall... You may have some misunderstandings about the gags. Many of the gags are forced in and look very stiff, but in any case, the setting is not bad, and the anti-routine method is also interesting. Read more works by great masters, absorb the writing style, and if you write seriously, I believe you will get results. Come on!

After reading some, the problem is that the previous chapter has a tight word count, so it is recommended to divide it into small paragraphs, which is more suitable for readers and editors. After all, I have never read science fiction, so it's hard to comment on the content of the article. However, I saw some people saying that you were trying to block the story and it was too blunt. Read more about what the master wrote, read the plot content, and summarize how he wrote the whole thing. Then you can think about it, write it, modify it, and apply it. Once you get used to it, you can just pick it up and it will naturally look as smooth as Dove!

If you are interested, leave the character you want to create. The format is casual. After all, the flow is unlimited... There are few people now, so the author is likely to join the article. There is no need for the template character of the protagonist, try to be a secondary character...