Assistant to the Manager of Winter Village

It still feels like a style closer to that of Evil Girl, but it's not very exciting. The free student exam at the beginning was quite speechless. I spent so much effort to get the result, but then I just ran away to the focus and was spoiled by the little shoes. I wasted so much on the description of the results. Moreover, it seems to be a bit of fun, but it seems to have a general feeling. It's not exciting, but it's still okay in daily life.

After reading more than 100 chapters, I was really tortured by the depressing feeling in the book, so I wrote a book review. First of all, book friends who want to read cool articles should not come here. This is not a book that mainly focuses on cool articles. If you want to see the main character pretending to be *, you can't come here. You will be very disappointed. Second, I do not recommend this book to be read by people with weak hearts, weak psychology, and very emotional people. The style of this book is rather depressing. Take me as an example. I usually read books very quickly. Unfortunately, I persisted with this book for more than 100 chapters, and I just couldn't stand it anymore. I needed to write something, complain, and change my mood. Okay, the above is what I want to say. I am really depressed and need to rest. The biggest ability of this book is to make readers feel very bad. It is very suitable for reading when you are getting carried away. In order to avoid being deleted by the author, let me finally praise the author. Well, this is a novel that makes me very unhappy, but I will continue to read it! ! ! 😆

Although not many people have read it, the writing is really good. I just don't have any recommendations. I just accidentally saw it on the book list last week. Look at the title of the book first, then the cover. Well, although it doesn't stand out, after reading so many novels, I have already become a bit cold. I clicked in and looked at the introduction, then looked at the table of contents, and it was okay. Looking back at the first few chapters, well... It's out of control. Now I want to say something: The author will give you a few more chapters. Finally, I hope the author's performance will get better and better.

Choose to borrow money when you already have a burden, and trust others easily. Everything will not be like this after more than ten years in this world. Or I tried to write it more realistically, but unfortunately, the integration of reality and light novel elements was not successful.

There is a problem with the logic above. Let me ask, would that man with some backbone be like this, not to mention that he was also a college student before time travel? Just go somewhere? Can't even find a younger sister when investigating her parentage? Do students who have just finished junior high school doubt this or that? Those who save the world are all high school students, while the old social bastards just want to destroy the world. This is not a matter of whether the writing is good or not, it is a matter of the plot being contrary to common sense, and even a bit far-fetched, as the people in the book are dead and led by the author.

The author should write according to his own ideas. The readers are just suggestions, and the bad guys are just opinions. You can adopt the good suggestions (it will not affect your own style and the original plot direction, of course, you can write better). You can make corrections based on your opinions (some bad guys really hit the spot). Many books fall apart because of changes here and there.

There are a lot of poisonous points, but the flaws are not hidden. If you can ignore the poisonous points, it will be a cup of good coffee (early stage) and a bottle of refreshing drink (mid-late stage). Even if you don't ignore the poisonous points, it is just a whole delicious roast goose. There will always be unpalatable parts like a neck with more bones and less meat. Do not write a stereotyped protagonist with unique characteristics (referring to character/luck), a distinct but not stereotyped character, a setting like "virtue value" that is both a plug-in and a restriction, and excellent writing. Except for the protagonist and a few characters, there is almost no sense of peace, and a strong sense of reality. What is not good enough is that almost all of the protagonist's "friends" are women who are too one-dimensional and are indeed a bit of a playboy (they fail to clearly refuse Hana's submissiveness to her). Almost all the men of the same age depicted are villains or passers-by. Currently, the only possible good friends are updates. Speaking of updates, I don't know what the meaning of the world is? The conflict between the male villain and the protagonist who used Lao to provoke the exam? After the conflict was resolved, her sense of existence was very thin, and her role was pitiful. When she entered the Dongzhuang, it felt like she had not interacted with the protagonist and other people. Poisonous words: 1. The protagonist is too omnipotent. If someone asks him about the source of his knowledge (agriculture) (computer technology) (cooking), he won't even be able to explain it in a book. If he plans to confess later that he is not Yuichi, he will pretend that I didn't say it. 2. A small part of the plot is not very good (the arrogant male villain, the music teacher, how can ordinary rich and powerful children be so arrogant and mentally retarded) 3. Is the Yuuki family a gangster who can kill people with no more than a nod (even if they are enemies)? This is a civilized society after all. Moreover, the average number of girls is the king of boxers. This setting is too much. It is not the queen of protein ✊❤️✊ in biology textbooks. 4. No matter how abnormal your profession is, you must consider reality (reasonableness). Music can indeed infect people, but I have never heard of any music that can scare people into hallucinating, going crazy, not paying attention to the position of the window, or even falling. If Asuna knew the specific details and asked about the male protagonist who did it, how would he explain it? People are already dead before the song is finished. Isn't this some kind of fantasy or fairy tale novel? 5. Due to a brain problem, Oo-chan is only a dog in learning I have more shortcomings than advantages. I hope the author doesn't mind. My attitude towards this book is indeed a fan rather than a black one. I am not saying this to give pointers or criticize the author. I am just giving my impressions and feedback on the book as a reader. I hope these can be useful to the author and make him better, so that I can see better books.

Great book, I love it. The only bad thing I feel is that the limit on the virtue value is a bit harsh. I can't even fight back when I'm being hit or scolded. It's so frustrating! I hope the author will come on, come on, come on

What the previous author wrote was not bold enough~ From the perspective of a game player, if you invest a lot of energy, time and money in the early stage, you will not be so strapped in the later stage. Tongshengka probably has branches as writers and painters. The library is full of children, and you can also take care of your studies and earn virtues> open buffs and draw writers/painters> submit articles to get royalties If it is not a forced theme, after becoming a student, you can apply to the school to work part-time within the scope of students, and get more money than becoming an administrator Although it is to echo The theme works as an administrator's assistant, but there is no need to worry about money. Regardless of the misunderstandings caused by the conflict of subjective consciousness of the characters, at least the style will be a little more sunny Full board and lodging, paid employment, this is the basic employee welfare. I don't see much care for the protagonist by the so-called aunt, the remaining relative. Instead, he keeps fussing over everything, which is a bit disappointing. Well~ I haven't read it for free yet, so this is my personal opinion. Don't accept arguments, just scold others and get out.

It's a bit delayed, and I feel like the author is deliberately dragging out the plot to make up for the content.

Very good novel, I like it very much

This book is one of the top light novels in the list. Unfortunately, there are too few recommendations. Finding it depends entirely on luck. I can only say that the score is not worthy of the strength of this book. I gave both the recommendation vote and the monthly vote to the author. Before I found this book, I gave it to the book "I Really Didn't Remove Spirits in Tokyo" because the score of that book was worse than "The Abnormality of Qi Ya-kun". I hope I can continue to finish it.

What's going on with these comments? When the protagonist was weak in the early stage, they thought the male protagonist was useless. Now that the protagonist has exploded, some people say this is a poisonous point. In daily life, some people think that cheats are useless for the plot. When there is a plot, some people say that cheats should be downplayed and written in daily life. . . I think the author should write according to his own ideas. Everyone's opinions are different. If you blindly agree with some readers, you may lose more. Anyway, I think the current ones are pretty good. Good luck, author💪

I think it suits Hana very well😏

I saw this for free, I almost missed it haha, I haven't seen such a good-looking daily show in a long time (Ye Qing is back... Come on, the author, write well, I have already paid for the full order and rewarded 100,000)

I don't know if it will become popular, but I have read almost a hundred chapters, and I always feel that it is very frustrating, and the overall atmosphere is still a bit depressing. I think this can persuade most people, after all, people who read novels are not just looking for trouble for themselves! This is just my personal opinion, I hope no one criticizes me! Haha🤫

After saving for a while, it suddenly came to an end and was cut in half. Now that the book is finished, let me share my humble thoughts as a reader. If the author still wants to write a book, I hope it will be helpful to the author's next book. 1. The overall coolness is not enough. It's a difficult start and life is difficult. Realistic stories are easier to relate to than fighting stories. It's much less exciting than worrying. Life is already difficult. Reading a book makes you worry about how to retain people! ? 2. The protagonist has been "killed" by the plot too many times. It's okay to have difficulty getting through it, but it's uncomfortable to have a happy life with inexplicable plot killings that increase the difficulty of life. And it happens several times in one volume, which is uncomfortable. It's bitter at first and then sweeter, and sweet after bitter and even more bitter. 3. The protagonist's growth potential is not high. The protagonist's personality, reputation, status, and money all the way to the later stage change too slowly and too slowly, and there is almost no growth. Other protagonists have obviously evolved from 2-star white cards to 6-star orange cards. The growth of the protagonist in this book has been jumping repeatedly between 3 and 4-star blue cards. The initial stage is good, but why don't you let him evolve? This leads to the core attraction of the protagonist being insufficient.

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Author, you are really good. I read the book happily, but now I feel like there is a stone on my chest. The key point is that your description of female characters is outstanding and vivid, but it makes people not like it, even a little disgusting. The writing style of the light novel has a depressing flavor. I would like to respect you as the first person...

That... Because of my lack of experience, I applied for "Complete", but as a result, I couldn't upload the extras...

The big poisonous point is at the beginning...😅 What the hell is foreign debt...? 😥 It's already 1202 years ago... Promise readers, please don't do any more plots about legal illiteracy...? 😅 Basically in all modern countries, inheritance rights can be given up legally. That is to say, when the inheritance is judged to be insolvent in the short term or even in the long term and permanently, the children (heirs) can choose to give up the inheritance rights and leave debt-free (of course, the assets registered in the name of the parents (decedent) must also be abandoned together, and there is no option to retain the property or debt). Besides, the protagonist of this book was a minor at the beginning, right? Then there will be no situation where the identity information is used as a behead by the parents. People with limited behavioral capacity can neither be used as guarantors nor be thrown as legal representatives. If the parents want to cheat this child, it is better to abuse them physically or psychologically...😅 Let's stop showing off this kind of ancient garbage that tramples on human nature and use it as plot material...? 😅 Even Japan's Yakuza, who are on the fringes of debt collection, don't do this anymore as long as they break away from family ties (e. G. Divorce or sever parent-child ties and separate)...

In the early stage, torture was for the sake of torture. In order to create conflicts, the intelligence was deliberately lowered. It was uncomfortable to watch. Moreover, even if there was a moral value, there was no way to retaliate. Moreover, a time-travelling person who graduated from university got money by borrowing from others or relying on scholarships. The borrowing was small and the interest was high. Far water cannot quench the near thirst. I don't know what I think. Anyway, it looks very weird.

Is this the end? ! ! ! Is it the same as my girlfriend being a voice actress? ! ! A fairy begins but ends badly? ? ! Anger! ! !

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I've only seen part of it now, and I can't help but wonder. The predecessor was so pitiful that he was indirectly forced to death by his so-called relatives. Even if he had a weak character, it was not the reason for such harm. And because the protagonist is there, the indirect murderers are not aware of it at all. It is estimated that the protagonist will not fall out with those people because of this later... There is also a little doubt that the protagonist does not even have the memory of his predecessor, let alone feelings. Why does he have such deep feelings for his predecessor's sister? Responsibility, pity, and love are all normal, but the emotions described in the book are simply the same as those of the predecessor.

Intrusion and deletion

This moral value is set like a brainless person, disgusting himself and others, Confucius, Mencius and Laozi call him an expert

Intrusion and deletion

Why are you still raising this and then it will be ruined? It was a good day, why did it suddenly fall apart?

What the hell? Wouldn't he be good if the previous plot progressed? Even if you speed up the progress, you can still get it from the system. How about wasting ten years of life in exchange for three days? Do you really want your sister to be written to death? If he didn't ascend to heaven and finally regained health, wouldn't the protagonist's life have been wasted? Who gave them the qualifications to undergo surgery without informing their relatives? If the sister really dies, how can the male protagonist be so innocent? Maybe they will turn against each other...