Xiaofeng Suixing

It's okay. I've read the first 11 chapters. The writing is quite fluent, but the colloquial language is inappropriate in some places (confusion). Most of the first 11 chapters are about introducing the setting and writing about the initial awakening. By the way, a contradiction is forced (funny) Let me do a brain test, this should be It's a system novel, and the male supporting actor has a lot of roles, so I have to suspect that he is the second male lead () I haven't seen anything that makes people watch it yet (are you killing the cute newcomers)? Of course, this is just a starting point. The author probably doesn't want to write something funny, but a traditional development flow. This kind of thing is a bit unpopular now, because it is easy to become ordinary, the contradiction is not prominent enough, and the plot is not attractive enough. Well, the main reason is that readers are more anxious now, and they often cannot read the later chapters. () The seemingly peaceful world view set by the author aggravated my uneasiness (then here comes the problem, Where is the girl that everyone likes to read?) Write well. The first book can even be used as a training. Great masters often start to get better at the second book. No one cares about the first book (disordered) As you write, you will write. When you finish, you will know how to start the second book ()

After reading it, I only have one feeling. Third Young Master of the Tang Family Come on, haha . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

Come on! I hope you can become a great god!