King of Architects of the World

Rational book review (personal feeling): 1 First, let's talk about the title and cover of the book. They don't feel right and are not attractive at all (newcomers can understand). If it hadn't been recommended by others, I probably wouldn't have clicked in, because within the fantasy framework, such a cover and title can easily turn people off (personal feeling). I hope the author can work hard! 2. The previous point is not enough, let's talk about the second point. The setting of the article is very interesting and eye-catching, the characters are okay, and the protagonist's personality is very interesting. There is nothing wrong with the author's writing. If it were calm, the book would lose a lot of fun. The writing is okay, not particularly awkward, and it seems to have the potential to be a good book (there are few words now, but it depends on future development) 3. I still have to talk about the issue of zoning. It feels like a light novel, with a little urban feel. It is the setting that gives it a fantasy feel, but fantasy fans don't read the setting! They watch the plot! If you put it in a light novel, there is absolutely nothing wrong with it, and maybe because the setting is eye-catching, it would be perfect within the framework of a light novel. 4. That's it. Finally, I just want to say that I rarely write book reviews (this time I feel that I have come across a good book, but the author is getting farther and farther on the road to review), I won't reply to trolls, and don't say I'm a troll. (Will an author who doesn't even bother to promote the book when publishing the book have the energy to do it? Manually funny) Break 0 book reviews, author, come on 😜😜😜

If nothing else, what's going on with you at the beginning? You, the heroine, are inexplicable.

I always feel like there's something wrong with the protagonist's character, and I feel like the protagonist is agitated. After time traveling, I thought I had a world's cultural heritage that I could copy. I was too conceited and despised every aspect of this world. I never thought about learning the knowledge related to the structure of the world, I never thought about understanding the common sense that I lacked, and I spent all day talking nonsense and joking around. Even after experiencing some crisis events, I still have an ostrich mentality, pretending that nothing has happened, doing nothing, not working hard, and not making progress.

But wouldn't it be bad to praise yourself with the imprint of an author? But I scanned this deserted book review area, and I guess no one would pay attention to me just bragging here. Well, I just read the author's article, and it impressed me. You can ask the author, did you grow up eating cute things? The article is excellent! Wait, there's a knock on the door? What kind of hospital is this? Stop making trouble! It's scary to be like this during special times, okay? Oh, Department of Psychiatry, Beijing Anding Hospital, oh, okay, I'll leave with you after I finish posting.

Logically speaking, the writing level of this book will not be low. The author obviously did not consider who will decide the starting point. Men between 23 and 35 are the main consumer group. If they have time to read and money to reward, will they watch your dog-licking daily life? This is like a TV series. If you magnify the macho TV series, how much profit do you think the TV station can make to survive the daily life in the early stage? The lack of people in the mid-term Zhuxia is also a big poisonous point. Although you have emphasized several times that it is not China, there is a sense of inclusion. The Chinese are famous in the world for protecting the calf. Let a bunch of fledglings face the crisis, and all the older generations are dead? For example, the unit I work in has certain risks. The protection for juniors is from top to bottom, not to mention those who are relevant. People who can bring honor are dared to risk their lives to protect them. So it really made me spend money on this book, but the author's logical reasoning and plot are very interesting. But I beg the author to consider the sense of immersion and the sense of bringing food and clothing to you in the next book.

I feel that the author has completely wasted a good idea. I believe that everyone who reads this book likes to see the setting of building a world. What we want to see is to build a unique world. Then the article uses a lot of ink to describe the daily life of the hero and heroine. In such a large space, we are not here to read these daily life, it is bland and boring.

Too much nonsense, self-justification, inexplicable, and confusing. This is my understanding after reading Chapter 30. In one sentence, I felt a little dizzy after reading it.

Heavenly dog, the protagonist is really a dog, Lululu

The idea of ​​the structure is great, and the writing style is okay, but the author talks too much. In order to portray the characters, he changed the book from fantasy to an emotional drama on a female channel, which is very boring.

I just watched the category, Fantasy, Gaowu, Where is Gaowu now? If it weren't for the constructed world, I would have almost read it as Romance City.

I don't know why, I'm very tired from reading this book

The protagonist is really stupid, so the female protagonist has a high IQ which is interesting. Your average IQ is better than the stupid one, and the male protagonist is the stupid one.

I can't stand it anymore. The protagonist's character is really good. I can only say that it's fun.

The main line of this novel is the emotional story between the male and female protagonists! Looking at the paid plot from the beginning, at least two-thirds of the plot is the dialogue between the two of them, but the plot of building the world seems too simple. The sudden appearance of the heroine at the beginning was not well written. Although the interaction later was well written, it would become boring if it was written too much. I feel that the overall plot is a bit indifferent, and it is barely okay when viewed as an urban novel. 😴😴😴

Just kneel down and lick the heroine when you come up, okay?

Funny, to put it nicely, it's called making others happy, but in fact it's just pretending to be stupid and acting crazy.

What's going on with your heroine? Why did you just join in without even introducing me? It's baffling, brother. I don't understand your heroine. Who is he? What is his relationship? What role does he play? Why did you invite him in? Is it to show that the protagonist is stupid or to do something? I feel very puzzling about you as the heroine. I just watched a few pictures.

If your writing skills are not good, try not to write about emotions. Your emotions give me the feeling that you are force-feeding an ori to me.

The character dialogue is really watery. Dancing does not affect the development of the plot at all.

The author went back in time and pretended to be awesome without doing anything. He even created the world without even understanding the basics. I really can't stand the character of the protagonist Erbi.

Interesting setting, but in terms of plot, I can only say that what I want to see and what the author wants to write are not in the same direction. I was very interested in it at the beginning, but as I read it, it just didn't feel right. It is said that there is a system, but the system has no sense of existence at all. It is said to be a world structure, but it is basically a "I Xunsi" structure, which always feels a bit uninteresting when watching it.

Also, your world view is really rubbish. It really feels like you are forcibly feeding me shit. Such a good setting is really a waste.

The subject matter is good, but the way of expression is a bit wrong.

I don't know why, I look so tired

Take your ignorance for granted

The setting is great, this setting can definitely be a masterpiece. But the plot and character setting are too poor. The male protagonist is okay, but don't write him as a loser. If you pass by, you don't even have basic knowledge and don't learn it. Especially during the thousand years in the picture, when people used force to force them to make choices, they still didn't realize the importance of force and didn't think of ways to save themselves. So sad, such a good setting

Two million words and just over 70 comments. Can I read this novel?

The performance of the protagonist is completely suppressed by Li Qingyuan, and as soon as the protagonist constructs the world, he wants to stand out. It is better to say that he is the protagonist than Li Qingyuan is the protagonist. The system still has a sense of existence at the beginning, but it becomes less and less present as you get to the end, making people unable to remember that there is a system. It can be said that this book is really not good except for the novel creative setting. Also, this book is so exhausting to read!