Shield Ninja

I have never felt so tempted to complain while reading a book! I really admire the skill of writing fan fiction into a bloody romance novel. Nothing more than that I paid money to read it and it felt dirty to my eyes, so I just wanted to complain about it! If you don't accept it, just hold it in for me!

To be honest, the original setting was very good. I guess the author was afraid that poor daily writing would cause the plot to change and collapse later, so he added Naruto's emotional interlude, which would not affect the plot direction and could replace the daily word count. It was perfect. Hey, this little clever guy 😅. But the author got it wrong! The writing about emotions is unbearable, so it's a good fan writing💩Jiamo. . . . . . In fact, it should be okay to post a female video. For a male video 😅, what we want to see is dancing, you know? It's enough to accompany my wife and parents to watch palace battles with mother-in-law and daughter-in-law every day, but why do we come here to watch this thing? Thoughts before giving up, don't complain if you don't like it.

What should I say, I have read more than 400 chapters. Overall, this is a novel that focuses on emotional description. I really haven't read this type of Naruto fanfic very often. It is quite fresh. Moreover, the author's emotional handling and description are really good, especially Naru Sakura's emotions. To be honest, when I watched Naruto, I liked Hinata more. Of course it was partly because of 77, but then my opinion gradually changed, and I felt that Sakura was actually better, which can be regarded as a change. In the past, my ideal type was Hinata, but later I found that girls like Sakura are actually more relaxed and happy to get along with. So I quite like Ming Ying's emotional scenes. Next, let's talk about the shortcomings. The biggest shortcoming is the serious collapse of combat power. Correspondingly, if your protagonist cheats too much, the supporting characters will look stupid. I believe that many people's views on Naruto are very similar to mine, so I will just give a few examples. 1. The Fourth Generation. My personal understanding of the Fourth Generation comes from Orochimaru's Konoha Collapse Plan. Uncle Snake used the dirt to reincarnate and channel the first and second generations. Only when channeling the Fourth Generation, the Third Generation said that he would never let Orochimaru succeed. It can be said that it is full of force, giving people a mysterious and powerful feeling of the Fourth Generation. Although the AB directly slaps the face later, it is not to say that the Fourth Generation is not strong, but it is not as cool as the first generation, but this does not affect the initial impression of the Fourth Generation. However, in this book, the fourth generation's signature Rasengan and Flying Thunder God have become the main characters' techniques that everyone can use casually, which is outrageous. This makes the originally mysterious and powerful fourth generation look like a fool. 2. Jiraiya. Jiraiya's importance to the protagonist Uzumaki Naruto in the original work is self-evident. As the spokesperson of Mount Myoboku, he was quite impressive when he appeared in the original work. "I am the Toad Sage of Mount Myoboku, Lord Jiraiya." This line can be It is said to be quite a classic, and it also shows Jiraiya's status. He is the first immortal to appear in the original work. However, here, the Rasengan has nothing to do with Jiraiya, because everyone knows it, and celestial beings are also bad, and they can be learned casually, so Jiraiya directly becomes a sidekick. 3. Kai, Emperor Kai, don't say too much. His comment of "I, Madara, would like to call you the strongest" also makes countless people yearn for him. You must know that Madara's evaluation of Erzhu, one of the protagonists, is just "a mere piece of gravel, not half as good as me." Coupled with the memory of Kakashi before Kai opened the eighth gate, he directly gained countless fans in the Kai circle. However, here, first I was tricked by the protagonist, and then the eight gates were still a piece of shit, which left me speechless. The above three are my favorite supporting characters in the original work, but in this book, they are hard to describe. Next, let's talk about the problem of the collapse of combat power. As we all know, the final boss of Naruto, besides Kaguya, is the Golden Grape. Not much to say about these bosses, let's break down the protagonist's combat power. 1. Naruto, at first thought that he could not learn to fly the thunder god, but it was okay. Although the fourth generation flying thunder god's stunt was also a magical skill, to be honest, Naruto did not really need the flying thunder god, because the speed of Naruto in the nine-tails mode was comparable to the fourth generation of flying thunder god, and the flying thunder god was not that useful. But the resistance setting is too strong, and with the power of the six paths, you want to have thousands of hands. The eight doors are combined with the setting of crazy fighting. Who knows how high the attack power is, which is equivalent to invincibility. 2. Sasuke, after reading this book, you will know how abnormal the two-pillar kaleidoscope is. It will be more effective when used in conjunction with the eight gates. In addition to the Rasengan, it is estimated that there will be a Black Lightning Rasengan in the future. That thing is more violent than the Black Lightning Chidori. Let's not talk about the Flying Thunder God for now. After all, the two pillars of the Samsara Eye have the power of the sky and can take off directly. 3. Brother Ying won't say much about the various heroines. All of them are forbidden arts. The eight spiritual transformations of the Flying Thunder God are all at your fingertips. They can also activate the nine-tails mode, which is simply outrageous. Hinata Hanabi and Flying Thunder God are just trivial. They just straighten the Tsengigan. I don't know what the author thinks, but I believe everyone who has read Naruto knows that the Tsengan is the product of the collapse of Naruto's combat power. In front of the Tsengan, the three major pupil techniques are nothing. In the end, this book gives you two of them, which is outrageous. In comparison, Ino looked like a human being. After such a list, I found that with this lineup, everyone would be pinned to the ground and rubbed against me. The author even told me that the boss would pin him down and rub against me. I don't know if it's him or me. I suggest here that the author invite people from Dragon Ball to come over and destroy the earth as the boss so that it still looks like a boss. Of course, I am just a suggestion.

The Naruto fanfic was written as a love story, and it is not a pure love story. In the early stage, it was a love triangle between Naruto, Hinata, and Sakura. In the later stage, it was released, and there was a harem. Inexplicably, Sakura knew clearly that Naruto and Hinata were in love and still had sex with each other, and she still wanted to be a mistress. If she wanted to open a harem, she would act like a scumbag and do it. If she wanted to be dedicated, she would always be dedicated. What the hell? It's written about being a bitch and setting up a memorial arch, it's written like Qiong Yao, the author feeds shit there at every turn, the latest update, inexplicably Naruto is neither a boy nor a girl, and his combat power is broken. Everyone can learn the Eight Gate Dungeon, Flying Thunder God, Spirit Transformation Technique, etc. It's all about romance, it's all about women's videos, and there are palace fights. You should change your name to Romance Ninja. I really vomited.

Watching it made me feel like I was not like Naruto. The characters' personalities seemed to have changed. It felt like I was watching a large-scale emotional show.

I recommend a book called My Naruto. The protagonist travels to Naruto's harem, but it's much better than this. But don't read the book reviews. There are often spoilers from 234 bosses (including me 😌).

1. It's called Shield Ninja, but it's actually a Konoha love story 2. It felt okay at first, but after a while I looked at the catalog and found that the love story is a bit long 3. Hinata ➕ Sakura brother ➕ Ino? This is hard to support

Ever since I discovered that this novel started to spread throughout the harem, I decided to give up. This may seriously affect my third view (personal feeling).

It seems to be a book about Naruto's escape to the end, every second of the day and the earth. But it is actually a romance novel with a battle attached. When the author started writing romance, he was out of control. The more I write about it, the more exciting it gets. It's completely about romance and fighting. But readers seem to like this set quite a lot. At first, I refused, but she gave too much. I want to shout with a decadent voice: "It smells so good!" Overall, it's not bad and worth a look.

The following is my personal opinion, I believe there are other book friends who support me. The harem is actually not the most fundamental issue we are concerned about. What we care about is the random collection of harems without emotions. It is really impossible to read this type of book. However, only a few of the female protagonists described in this book actually have emotional foundations and rich emotional lines. If a single female protagonist is suddenly chosen, it will be a bit unacceptable. This is unnecessary. Finally, I hope the author will not write a single female protagonist. If it is a single female protagonist, then please do not write such a full emotional line. Of course, the author cannot go back. Most book friends have already seen the three female protagonists Hinata, Sakura, and Ino. I read the article about choosing the number one heroine. I don't know whether the number one mentioned by the author refers to one, or one, two or three, hahaha. At the same time, I took a look and estimated that more than 90% of people support the intention of including several female protagonists with rich love lines. Here it is, I hope you can support me, thank you.

Free trial only, contains spoilers. This book is interesting, but the content is too crude. The young prince attracted Sakura lightly. In order to compete with the prince, Sakura introduced Inobo and her sister-in-law to try to achieve a balance among the four corners. After the prince's cross eye was achieved, other women of the right age who had physical contact with him began to gradually change. Give two examples. Fuji Kazuee: I wanted to run away, but the prince threw me into the sea and still didn't admit it. He must like me. Temari: He drained all my chakra during the Chuunin Exam. He even made friends with my brother. He must like me. To be honest, this book was still readable until the prince faked his death and tricked Sasuke into opening a kaleidoscope. The effect of Sasuke's opening was Izanagi, which can be used on others. When the four of them sleep together, the plot becomes a bit awkward.

I've been reading it for so long... I've also ordered it in full. Let's rename this book Shura: Ninja. The ending of the harem is very good. I'll give it some thought.

I just went through an emotional experience similar to that of Naruto in this book. I had a girlfriend, she was very virtuous, but I fell in love with her best friend, and I told the truth, but she was rejected. The reason was that I couldn't compete with my friends, or else. To be honest, I may now understand Naruto's entangled mood, and the hesitation between telling and not telling. The author's writing style really has no choice in the emotional aspect. Come on, author!

There is no shortage of this book for those who focus on fighting, but it is different for those that focus on emotions.

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The more I watch, the angrier I get! If Hinata is the heroine, if you portray Sakura so much in the early stage and then intervene even though you know they like each other, aren't you committing evil? What about filming a TV series? Moreover, the male protagonist's straight behavior only needs to be done once or twice, and it's really annoying if it's done too much. Forget it, let's go. I'm feeling aggrieved.

The best way to write about battles and emotions at the same time is to write about Dragon Clan, for example, although Dragon Clan is disgusting at the end. In fact, it is not a good thing for Naruto to be too defensive. The tone of the harem story is that the male protagonist is bleeding and seriously injured and the female protagonist has to compromise. As long as the male protagonist is seriously injured and dying, those women will not be in the mood to fight.

By the way, there is too much procrastination between Naruto and Sakura, right? Regardless of whether you accept both or just one, it's best not to delay 🙂 After all, Naruto is written too well. Even if there are various reasons, it's not like you still can't understand it now, right? We don't know if the author is just trying to make people want to be appetized or if they don't know how to reconcile it. In short, it's best to resolve the problem between these three people as soon as possible, otherwise it will be too disgusting. It's so obvious and you can't see it, especially in which chapter of the wrong house, can it be resolved in this way? If it's meant to whet people's appetite, it's best not to whet your appetite, otherwise readers will run away. If you don't know what to do, tell us whether you want to be the heroine or a supporting actress, and we will help you 🔪

I don't know if the author has read the book review, but I have some suggestions. The main plot is not attractive. The previous romantic plot of the childhood sweethearts is also watchable. It would be boring to add more plots.

This book is mainly about emotions, not just a single female protagonist. The emotional drama is pretty well written.

The heroine is Sakura? I really can't accept it

I thought it was fine when I first read it, but I really couldn't stand it anymore. Personally, I prefer to watch one with a single heroine, or two. But I really can't stand this one with Naru and Sakura together. When I read the review and said that Ino also joined in later, I gave it up and continued reading.

I'm not used to it personally, there are a lot of emotional dramas, third parties and four parties get involved, and they attack children for the sake of love.

The first one is the friendship with Ino. Friends who have read flashbacks know that Sakura was often teased because of her wide forehead when she was a child, so she developed a character of low self-esteem and was very unsociable. But at this time, the only one who stood up to help her was Ino. With Ino's help, Sakura gradually became cheerful and made friends. But the two of them fell in love with Sasuke at the same time. From then on, the two began to become incompatible. It was really inappropriate to turn the friend who had saved them from the darkness into an opponent for the boy they liked. If we look at it now, it would be a typical case of focusing on sex over friends. The second one is the evaluation of Naruto. When he was still in the ninja school, Naruto turned into Sasuke and wanted to meet Sakura. When Naruto asked Sakura how he was, Sakura's answer chilled Naruto. Later, Sakura met the real Sasuke, and the two talked about Naruto. Sakura believed that Naruto had not been cared about by his parents since he was a child and was an uneducated child. Sasuke was very angry after hearing this, and bluntly said that Sakura was very annoyed, and said that "real loneliness cannot be understood after being scolded by parents." Although Sasuke's attitude was very decisive at the time, what Sasuke said really relieved his anger. I believe what Sakura said here was really irritating. The third one is Sakura's attitude when Naruto learned that Jiraiya had died. At that time, Tsunade called Naruto to the Hokage's office and told Naruto about Jiraiya's death. It was difficult for Naruto to accept it for a while, and he even lost his mind. Naruto then began to question Tsunade, "Mother-in-law asked him to go, right? If the lustful immortal was Hokage, he would never let you go, mother-in-law Tsunade." These words undoubtedly pierced Tsunade's heart like a knife. As Naruto's teacher, Kakashi should have stopped Naruto directly, but Kakashi knew Naruto's mood and just told Naruto that Tsunade had the same mood. But Sakura told Naruto not to disturb Shizune when Naruto left. She really didn't understand Naruto and it was heartbreaking. The fourth one is that Sakura obviously likes Sasuke, but she has always relied on Naruto and even asked Naruto to help recover Sasuke. This fully exploded during the Pain Incident, when Konoha was destroyed, Sakura kept calling for Naruto. But when Naruto was controlled by Payne, Sakura seemed to disappear. Only Hinata rushed out regardless of life and death. This was in sharp contrast to Sakura. At this time, all fools knew that Hinata liked Naruto, but after the battle, it was Sakura who rushed up to hug Naruto. She looked like she was completely seeking hatred. Even if Hinata wasn't a Naruto fan, she felt quite unhappy. The fifth one ruined a good marriage. Everyone knows that Naruto and Sasuke cherish each other and are in love with each other, but in the new era, Sakura married Sasuke. In desperation, Naruto and Sasuke could only end up with a regrettable result. Sasuke could only maintain correspondence with Naruto when he was away all year round. After Sasuke came back, he went to find Naruto immediately instead of going home. Finally, I'm joking with everyone, but everyone thinks so.

Harem post, if you support the harem, can you support it?

Sakura is everywhere. It's rare to see a book that describes Sakura so objectively. Yes, it's really good!

How many people did Sakura persuade to retreat? Come and check in

Isn't the author no longer writing about transformation?

Dear author, can you give some hope to Brother Sakura? If you continue to write like this, Sakura is still in unrequited love, and everything she does seems to be helping Hinata. Naruto has no idea of ​​pursuing Sakura in the original work. This makes Brother Sakura feel even more pitiful. Whoever he pursues is unrequited love 😅

I came here from the new book comment section. I heard that the first person on the list here was poisoned to death? Can anyone tell me what's going on? Let me eat a melon