Immortal Dynasty Divine Catcher

Starting from Chapter 50, the ninth level of physical training to the 200th chapter is all physical training.

I came here based on the word "Shenqiao". I thought that as a "Shenqiao", at least the logical IQ should be online. It is a book worth reading. The result is exactly the opposite. Not only is his logic poor, but his IQ is also poor. At the beginning, the detective traveled through time and was given a big golden finger, but in the end, it was all in vain due to his brainless operation. You said you went to a gang casino to kill people alone. If you didn't kill the concierge, couldn't you knock him out? He also had a dog's nose. Couldn't you have smelled them one by one, or thought of a plan before killing them? Normal people wouldn't do this. The most disgusting thing is that he keeps mentioning the decades-old detective. If the detective is so stupid, then he should just go to sleep! You have been smearing the detective.

It looked good at the beginning, but then it started to make nonsense. How could a country with stable sovereignty allow a force like the Peace Inn to exist? Even if you want to arrest fugitives quickly, you have to pay to enter the store! You're kidding me!

Great, come on 🤓🤓, the writing is good. I hope you can take a look at mine and give me some suggestions.

I read this book very well before and saved about 100 chapters to read. As a result, I didn't read many chapters before I came to ask for help. Let your child become a teacher to someone you have only met for less than half a day. You don't know everything about other people's situations. That's when I started to take care of myself. It was also very powerful and a little bit poisonous.

It's poisonous at the beginning. I have practiced a bad martial art. There is a system and novice benefits. Instead of choosing a peerless magical skill, I have to choose a barking dog's nose. Even if the protagonist is a detective who wants to track down the prisoner, isn't the protagonist a decades-old detective? In the early stage, they were just some trash fish. Having decades of experience as a detective is enough, but he also has to have a dog nose. As long as you have the strength, you can do whatever you want. I'm really speechless. Disgusting and not at all intelligent.

Author, tell me what is good and what is evil. With your background, how can there be any good or evil? You are a hero and I am an enemy of bandits. You kill sheep and eat their meat. To sheep, you are the most evil person. To people, it is just to satisfy the appetite. Tigers hunt animals to survive. Can you say evil? You go to the casino to kill people. The protagonist is doing evil. Casinos are illegal now, but it was normal business behavior at that time.

It's better to add some writing to make it more interesting. Tasks and lottery draws are both poisonous. When there is nothing to write about, the author sets a task to forcibly splice the plot. If there is an erasure penalty or something, it will forcefully feed Xiang to the readers. If you get a few draws in the lottery, you will feel that the golden finger is useless. If you get good things in the lottery It feels like the author is giving the protagonist a halo again. If the good things obtained in the lottery are used immediately in the following chapters, it feels that the routines arranged by the author are too rigid and deliberate. If they are of no use in the future and have been kept in the "little vault", it will feel like there is nothing that can be used to occupy the manhole without shitting.

After spending so much resources to build the acquired holy body, it is still so weak after a breakthrough. It is really intoxicating.

Not bad, come on! The new book issue is guaranteed to be updated twice a day, so it is not difficult to sign a contract and put it on the shelves.

To be honest, I didn't even survive the free chapter. The system draws a small return pill? I'm already a badass, but I still don't use some garbled skills to add talents to myself?

Poisoned! The article is too wordy and the main character is full of nonsense.

You couldn't draw any skills at the beginning, and you drew two useless magic skills that can only be used in the mid-term. Xiao Huandan's twenty-year-old skills will become useless in your hands! Just look at the fan list and you will know that this book is extremely poisonous!

He can't protect himself, so he takes in his younger brother. To eradicate all evil forces in the county, wouldn't it mean that 70 to 80 percent of the warriors must be killed and imprisoned? According to the narrow judgment of good and evil, no warrior is a good person who takes human life in his hands. And the first task, the 15-day deadline, you took too long to write.

Is it really okay for Pig's Feet to keep killing people? Is there not one good person in a gang of hundreds of people? To destroy a gang, shouldn't we kill the top brass? If the top brass dies, the rest of the gang will fall apart. Dozens of people die every day in a county.

An ancient county generally had a population of 5,000 to 20,000. Just take 20,000 as the number of men and women out of 20,000, and 10,000 men minus the old men, men, and children would be 3,000, which is not too much. There are 7,000 young and vigorous men left. If you destroy a gang and 300 people are all evil people, it depends on your setting that the evil people must have at least killed people. In a county, dozens and dozens of people die every day and within a few months, they will all be dead.

I am also speechless about the name of this directory. It is definitely a new author.

What do you think you are, a detective who has been a detective for twenty years? If you ask for food for twenty years, you will become a sperm! You also have the ability to solve crimes at the beginning, so you might as well think that others can't kill you if they are found by you! Or should I say that once you become the protagonist and have an aura, all kinds of natural miracles will come with you. You should also bring some logic to your book. The other world is yours, so you can make water to eat and drink! ! You can't get enough of yourself! 😥😥😥

Just follow the trend and beat someone else 😰