Harry Potter: the Alchemist

Water, real water, to be honest, I have read all the comments in the comment area and the author's posts about psychological activities, but after reading it myself, I still found real water. I feel that the author is not very good at summarizing the main content, such as some trivial things such as Frozen and Snow Queen. I personally feel that there is really no need to write about it. I will read it and express my understanding without copying Harry or other things. But there is really no need to explain things like Frozen. When I read the post, I felt that it might not be the author's intention. The author also explained why he did this, but the first three chapters of this book really caught the readers' hearts. The first three chapters of this book are used to explain various troublesome things in the protagonist's background after time travel. I think it may be better to write it throughout. Better I hope the author can see it. There are really not many hp fans written now, and high-quality products are even rarer. As a hp fan and a reader, I sincerely hope that there will be more and better fans of this series. I hope the author can write better and better plots, and I also hope that the results of this book will get better and better 😃

It's said to be a complaint, but it can't be all complaints. After reading more than 30 chapters, there is no actual content at all. Why is it still so stupid later?

It's so annoying. In every Harry novel, there are always people saying that the heroine doesn't want Hermione Barabara. Emma is so beautiful in the movie and Hermione's character is so popular, so it's normal. No longer the silent majority, I love Hermione so much.

The introduction is poisonous: Comes from the sense of dissonance and low! 1. Everyone has their own original character in their heart. This is the first impression that the original author brings to the readers. First of all, as a fan, let the protagonists of the original text from different eras and even different countries speak such modern brainwashing advertising words ~ the sense of dissonance is too strong! 2. Very rustic! It's not that I look down on you because of how tall I am, it's just that I feel alienated! 3. The interactive and complaining dialogue between the author and the protagonist is very dramatic 4. From the above situation, we can judge an author's writing style. The first impression is that the author's writing style is not good. The second impression is that the protagonist is likely to be shaped by the author into a very "low" person. Let's talk about the importance of the three golden chapters. These three chapters of yours are very good! (From this, we can roughly judge the author's writing style, writing style, and the general character of the protagonist) Believe me, if it weren't for the good reviews in your book review section, and if I am really short of books, I would lose interest after reading your introduction. After reading the three golden chapters, I already want to close it! The writing after that is pretty good, I like this type. Every book will be liked or disliked by people, but according to the author's introduction and three golden chapters, it can really filter out some readers! ps: I'm the one who complained about the introductory introduction before and then ran away There is a serious book shortage today, and your book review section has so many good reviews that I won't stick to it. The writing behind it is really good

Come on, brother I admit that I am just greedy for Hermione's body😁😁

Hmm

I haven't read many Harry Potter books, but it must be unprecedented for someone to see the Sorting Hat at the end of Chapter 62, right?

No wonder there are so many chapters and the results are so poor. I can't even get into the topic even if I'm talking about it. I've read more than fifty chapters and I'm still on the train.

Luo Li, I haven't enrolled in school for thirty chapters. I really don't know what good opportunities there are. If you want to be in school, can you do it in Shui?

Briefly comment on this book: I will just say a few words 😎 The more you read this book? The more you will have a feeling, what does it feel like? It's so sweet that you want to kill the author! Separating line dividing line? Am I here to read a book and enjoy it, or am I here to learn about your science? Chirping, nagging! Annoying someone to death! If I want to see the principle of magic, should I go to the official website to see it or what? Originally, the second set, or fanfic, was just like this, just to watch the protagonist have fun. What kind of dividing line are you trying to draw? What kind of popular science? If you have two assumptions, then you have two assumptions. You are a ghost in popularizing science! Wunidie, those who make me so angry can't even speak! By the way, I feel like if this comment is posted, there will definitely be some kind of second-guessing you-do-you-do-you-do-you-do-you-do-you-do-you-do-you-fuck-you-fuck-you-fuck-you-fuck-you-fuck-you-fuck-you-fuck-you-fuck-it comment.

After reading Chapter 10, there is no problem with the writing logic, but the entire chapter is the inner monologue of the protagonist, which is crazy. Just one person received an owl letter and the professor came to his door. He finished 3 chapters and still hasn't finished it. It's all a pig's foot mentality.

I don't know if it's because the author is not good enough or if it's because of the word count. I feel like the author has written down every thought and thought of the protagonist, regardless of whether it's useful or useless. I read the author's explanation, but I want to ask you whether you wrote this book to satisfy yourself or to make money. If you are doing it to satisfy yourself, just ignore it. If you really want to make money and get popular, I really advise you not to write it.

This book is poorly written, has too much nonsense, and is poorly paced. Even the writing technique is very speechless, can you imagine? From the beginning of the third person becoming God's vision, after more than 20 chapters, it is almost written in the first person. Does the author want to go to heaven? The eunuch is right. If you don't have this level of eunuch, you're just wasting everyone's time.

￣^￣゜ Too much nonsense leads to discomfort.

You are the only one who can write such rubbish about Harry Potter.

After reading about twenty chapters, my mind is full of inner monologues similar to oops, which is seriously watered down.

I took a look at the latest update time. It is indeed a daily guide.

. . . . . The plot is too draggy. . . . When I saw Chapter 55, I didn't even get off the train. . . . .

It's too watery, it's too watery, and I can't hold on in Chapter 5 The protagonist's inner monologue and the author's useless explanations are mixed with water.

(Personal opinion) The introduction is very toxic, I don't know why, but it just makes me feel uncomfortable watching it😖. The first three chapters are too watery to persuade me to give up, but the golden three chapters still make some sense. I have been reading this novel for a long time, but I have never been able to survive the main character writing Harry Potter. Because I really like the idea of ​​​​HP Alchemy Flow, so I calmed down and read it yesterday. After adapting to the author's writing style, I felt that it was quite good. I think it is food. I was reading a long article about The Alchemist before and ended up with a garlic necklace (I didn't finish it). This should be a relatively pure Alchemist article. I originally thought that the protagonist took so many notes before the start of school, and after using the system to analyze the Marauder's Map and the Sorting Hat, he might have the idea of ​​making a smart notebook, but the Sorting Hat was not analyzed... , I saw that many people in the discussion forum are discussing the heroine issue. I feel that considering the protagonist's style of painting and the actual situation, only Hermione and Luna are more suitable. Hermione can learn with the protagonist, and Luna is the opposite of Hermione. She can give the protagonist a lot of inspiration in alchemy (not reality, but the heroine must have some sparkle, the vase is worse than none.)

The first thing that comes to mind is what the incantation is when casting a spell. In fact, according to the translation, the incantation recited by the wizard is the desired result of the spell. For example, if you say "Petrify Everything", the opponent will be petrified. Instead of petrifying the talent by saying words that no one understands. Then I thought why? Where did the first magic come from? What is the first magic? Is the first magic sound or silent? Under what circumstances did the first magic occur? In Harry Potter, wizards must have magic first. This thing is innate. Then you can imagine that a long time ago, a group of people were born with magical powers. They couldn't cast spells and didn't even know they were different from others until the magic ran wild or the orphans became Obscurials. But they definitely still don't understand why. Until one day, a person encountered an unexpected situation, such as food falling to the ground without holding it. At this time, most people should be thinking, stop, don't drop it, come back. Ordinary people's words will definitely be useless, but if it is replaced by magic, the result may be that the food really stops falling. Like Harry staring at the glass in the snake exhibit at the zoo and wishing the glass would disappear. Or a person points at someone else and shouts "go die" because of anger. If this happens to a wizard, the result is that the other person is really dead. Then the first killing curse is born, which is "go die". This is an idea and a wish, not a word. So even if it is changed to French or Russian, as long as it says "go to hell", it can become an effective spell. Of course, you must really think so in your heart. I think magic is idealistic. The emergence of magic is also about realizing the wishes of people with magic. Later, these people who can cast spells became a group of wizards. However, people's thoughts are very divergent. If you want to imitate other people's spell casting, it is difficult to have a sense of substitution, and you will not be able to concentrate and successfully cast spells. Then there are mantras. Language is an extension of thought, and accurate language can strengthen one's thoughts. This also led to the development of magic, studying context, body language, and the psychology of spell casting. I guess the origin of the wand is not to increase power at all, but because the wand has a directional nature, similar to a gesture, and then the power is increased based on this. The combination of language, body parts, and magic wands also allowed idiots with magical powers to cast spells, which lowered the threshold for wizards and increased the number of wizards. No matter what you learn in wizard school, it will never leave behind language, body movements, wand usage, and spell-casting thoughts. I think a truly powerful wizard should be able to cast spells without a wand, cast spells silently, or even cast spells without movement (body movement), that is, you will die just by looking at you, or even without looking at you. (For example, the real-time version of curse) To sum up, wizards who only study spell-casting language, body movements, and wands are fools.

Chapter 4, I was speechless after reading it, it was too dumb. Others at least put it on the shelves. I didn't have much creative passion before I started to write about it. The author was right from the beginning. If you want to be a thief of royalties, at least trick people into it first. After reading the comments, I thought it would be fine after the golden three chapters, but it turned out to be nonsense. Who can believe that the unlucky protagonist went to open the window to get the acceptance letter and talked for a long time without getting to the topic. Don't the people who took the money feel heartbroken!

Can your chapter not require the last two chapters to be explanations? The text is only five and a half chapters Zhen Shui

The protagonist feels very earthy. He is always stuck in his own thoughts and thinks about things between men and women. Apart from being a bit watery, the protagonist is always unfaithful and makes people feel like he has never touched a woman in his previous life.