Harry Potter: the Potions Professor

A little suggestion 1 Cockroach pile is not really a pile of cockroaches, but a snack unique to the Harry Potter world. It is made to look like a cockroach, and its name is called cockroach pile. Dumbledore loved sweets, and cockroaches were one of them, but most students didn't like them. 2 Snape was actually a member of the Order of the Phoenix. He was later sent to Voldemort as an undercover agent, and then was sent by Voldemort to Hogwarts as an undercover agent and a teacher by the way. Hope it will be helpful to the author.

The writing is okay. In fact, you can travel back in time to when they were in school and change Snape's life. He was bullied on campus by James Potter since he was a child. The beloved woman was also snatched away. In the end, they have to sacrifice for their children. Why!

Severus Snape, whom I admire, is a typical tragic character. 1. Girls who liked each other when they were young married their mortal enemies, but they were pushed over by themselves. 2. When I could only love unrequitedly and humbly, I once again directly killed her because of my own reasons. I even lost the chance of unrequited love, and I was burdened with the torture of killing my beloved. 3. Compared with these, domestic violence and parental neglect in the same year are insignificant. 3. However, Severus Snape still lives strong, not to protect a boy named Harry Potter, but to make up for his mistakes, and more importantly to see his lover again, even if he only has eyes, even if he sacrifices his life. 4. I always thought that Severus had died on that thunderstorm night, in Godric's Hollow, at Potter House, and next to Lily. All that is left is the rigid body and a trace of obsession. 5. So I chose this time to replace the dead Severus Snape, save a pair of eyes, kill someone, and preferably see her again.

I immediately backed out when I saw it was two female leads.

The biggest flaw of this book is that Zhang Jin is endless, and it is painful to watch if the names are not changed. Most people are interested in reading this book because they want to see a Snape who took another path, not a Chinese who has traveled through time.

To be honest, I feel that this book is more suitable for female fans. The writing is good, but as a straight man, I always feel that something is not right when reading it 😥. And if there is a female protagonist, let's make it clear. If there is no female protagonist, don't write any emotional lines. It will be bad for both ends.

It's hard to see someone from the same era as Harry Potter. As a result, he was so young at the beginning. The strangest thing is that people living in peaceful times are actually less happy than Snape? The country owes you? Let you live in hell?

Celestina and Gwen won't be the heroines, right? Can you please let the professor go? In the hearts of the Sri Lankan religious party, it is better for the professor to remain single.

I was a little happy to see some different voices in the comment area this morning. After all, there were not many people in the original comment area, so those who were willing to type in the comment area had at least read my work. This shows that my readers have increased a lot. I don't mind everyone having different opinions. Everyone has different ideas. This is normal. It's just about seeking common ground while reserving differences. Those who are willing to watch at least have something they like. The author is already an old man in his thirties. The person who can compose himself to write here at this age is not just a whim, nor does he have too much temper. Moreover, the author himself has said that it is my first time to write, and I don't know the original work very well, so it is normal that there are problems with the design of some plots. As for the procrastination problem that everyone is talking about, it is of course due to the low number of words. I only have more than two hours a day to code words. If I did all the main lines, my brain would explode. Even so, if you are busy at work and short on time, some chapters will be written in a blur, so please forgive me. Moreover, I use my mobile phone to code words in Pinyin, and there are often some typos. If I have time, I will look back and take a look, but most of the time I post it right after I finish writing it🤣 So the most important thing is to ask for recommendations. Once you have results, you will be more motivated. At least you will be able to show it confidently when you are discovered!

I haven't watched it for a long time, but I read the comments and it turns out that I can't stand the two heroines and quit. Goodbye.

I hope the author will not assign a female protagonist to the professor

Come on💪, to be honest, I loved Lion Academy the most when I was little. Now that I am getting older, I look back and realize that this academy has gathered all the bad qualities, including recklessness, jealousy, stupidity, poor students, lack of cultivation, cliques, xenophobia, intolerance, etc. There are many more that can be found in this academy. Yes, although there should be such students in other colleges, in the description of the book, each of these supporting characters has a good highlight, and each one is also very self-aware. Think of the childhood memories of the protagonist Harry at the beginning, and then become more and more familiar with this protagonist

The writing is superb. There are very few fanfics with Severus as the protagonist that don't break the character. This one has none so far. The latest chapters have some small suggestions. It doesn't matter if the protagonist is not deeply affected by the professor, but if it has been integrated, it seems inappropriate to have a female protagonist. Snape's love for Lily can almost be said to be a huge part of him. If the protagonist is at least half a professor, it is almost impossible to truly fall in love with someone else. If you don't like your personal opinion, don't comment. The author's writing is really great. I'm happy whether you adopt it or not. Come on, don't be a eunuch 💋

I don't like Ron very much.

Can you change the name of the main character? It would be very funny.

Those two female students must be the heroines. If this book has a female protagonist, can the author tell us about it? I have only read chapter 145 so far. I still have time to abandon the book.

The writing is quite good, but the protagonist has too much inner drama... Good news

I sincerely hope there can be a female lead author. Otherwise it would feel too boring

No matter what spell you see, you won't be speechless... If nothing works, is there any point in wearing Snape? Speechless...

HP is pretty good among fics, at least it's more interesting than some of the nanny stories I've read. Why did you start being a eunuch so easily?