Rebirth 2200

Deep and addictive

Hello, I'm here with you from the perspective of a writer's assistant. I read your book and only saw the first chapter. I have some small suggestions, if they are offensive, please delete them. I only read the first chapter, so I'll just talk about this chapter. First of all, the writing style is okay and the writing style is also very humorous. But you laid out a lot of setting at the beginning of the first chapter, which seems to be a taboo in online writing. It would be better if the setting could be integrated into the plot, such as a conversation between two characters, or reading a history book. Then after the settings are completed, your access is a bit abrupt. The first sentence is about how the times are, and the next sentence is my name is Lu Fei. . . Well, it should be much better if you add a few ellipses. Hmm~ There seems to be a wrong name in the first chapter. The male protagonist is called Lu Fei, right? You were written as Luffy. . . A bit of a show-stopper. Finally, the title and introduction of your book are a bit interesting. . . How should I put it? It's too popular. It seems that most online articles are like this. Although they are selling, they are not popular... Well~that's all. I have some free time at home due to the epidemic, so I have to talk too much. Please forgive me. I wish your book will be signed as soon as possible and become a big hit.

I beg you for a return visit and collection! Great support for the author＾0＾~

Come on!

Come on Wuhan, I wish all readers happiness and health.

This is the first time I have seen such a hard-core book. Come on, why are you following me? Can I ask for a return visit? (Weakly)

The writer's assistant is here, come on. Then I would like to make some comments. Your introduction is not attractive enough and should be changed.

The writing is very imaginative. I like it very much. The more I read it, the more I want to read it. It is a very good work. Very good

The author's ideas are very attractive. The more I read, the more I want to read. It is a work that I like to read.

Obviously the protagonists are all in their thirties, so even if they are reborn, why do they still feel childish? Although I have only read a few pictures, overall the writing is still very good. Come on!

The author's books are getting better and better, the imagination is rich, not bad, I like your work, keep up the good work.

The author's book is great! Please return for a visit!

Works, love it. Come on big

This book is very well written and very imaginative. The more you write, the better and the more you read, the more interesting it becomes. The author is great, looking forward to it.