Anyone Named Potter, Stay Away from Me

I was deceived by the author, the title is completely inconsistent with the content, and I am very disappointed. And the damn emotional scene with Hermione was too abrupt and blunt, too sudden. The Hermione described above doesn't have any sparkle at all. I don't understand why I fall in love with her. Is she just another damn pretty girl? Such feelings are too superficial, and readers cannot feel the true friendship at all. Generally speaking, wouldn't she be annoyed to death? Who would like someone always trying to compete with you? After reading so many fan stories, she was very unconvinced as long as the protagonist performed better than Hermione. She thought that the first place would always be hers. She really couldn't afford to lose. It was really childish. In fact, wouldn't it be good to make progress together? Why do you always think about overpowering others? Oh, I really want to read a story about pursuing the true meaning of magic without CP. This is really cool! Isn't it wonderful to swim in the ocean of knowledge? Because I only want to see the wonders of magic when reading HP fanfiction, and because I don't like any of the main female characters in HP except Luna. Hermione's character of always striving for first place is simply my nightmare. If you don't mind this, you can try reading it. However, the protagonist was deducted a lot of points in the first grade because he was too impulsive. He was tricked by Malfoy every time and could only have points deducted. He didn't think of a way to beat him in private or directly silence him. I don't think Yazi is very smart either. Furthermore, the first grade does not have any original content, the protagonist's own life and whimsical thoughts about magic, but the author also said that the first grade basically follows the main line. I hope the author can write more about the protagonist's family and friendship, which should be more pure and touching than love. As far as the few chapters after the Forbidden Forest that I have read so far, the author would be better off writing less love scenes for the time being. It's really embarrassing. This is the first time that the author writes a text to encourage you, but I can't praise it, I can only say that the writing is smooth. And the most important thing that matters to me is that the character of the protagonist is not outstanding. I always feel that he is just a tool and only serves the author's plot. He is really without personality. The routine of being with Hermione is also annoying, and having to accommodate her is really irritating. I would rather the protagonist be single for the rest of his life than be with Hermione. I've almost finished what I wanted to say, I'm out of the trap, goodbye. I'm sorry that your mood may have turned sour.

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Does your introduction have anything to do with the content of your book?

After seeing some book reviews, I started to panic a little. The author should follow his own ideas. I think we just need to read the book carefully. The most important thing is that although I will read books with Hermione as a heroine, no matter how bad they are, there are some books that even people who are not Hermione will read such as this one. Well, that's it. Of course, some CPs may really not be able to accept it. Bring on the author!

It's really well written, and it's pretty good among HP books. I hope the author will try his best and not kill himself.

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Where can I stay away from people with the last name Porter? . . 😐😐

Stop writing emotional lines, you are not suitable. I think the scene you wrote where the protagonist and Hermione are together is extremely awkward. There is absolutely no need for you to forcefully write an emotional line. There are too many people who are single these days just for strength, not to mention that they are very open nowadays. There are many non-marriage advocates or people who don't fall in love. Either write the emotional line when you can finish it, or don't write it in the first place. It will lower the quality of the article.

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It doesn't match the title of the book. I'm talking about staying away from Harry Potter, but I'm doing it again at the same time.

Can the heroine be Hermione? The author is great

The overall writing is good, but what does the content have to do with the title of the book? I can't see the relationship with the title of the book at all. If this is the case, it would be better to change the name.

By the way, if I kill Hermione later, will you beat me to death?

I didn't dare to read it when I saw the update interval.

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However, I think the first part of your writing is better. What's the next part?

I hope the heroine is Hermione and the emotional line is written a little sweeter

The first book is well written like this, the plot is quite smooth, and the author keeps writing well. But there are also some problems, such as the emotional line Now that I have read Chapter 16, I feel that Hermione will be the heroine, but this is far from the title and introduction of the book. Since they said they want to stay away from Harry Potter, they should not have too much contact, especially the relationship with Hermione. I started reading it because of the title. I originally thought it was a book dedicated to exploring the mystery and unknown of the magical world. I'm a little disappointed, I hope the next chapters will get better and better.

The name tricked me into entering, but Chapter 16 persuaded me to leave.

The title of the book does not match the content at all. Participate desperately in the plot.

I don't know if Potter is far away from you, but the eunuch has already found you.