Extraordinary Creed

This theme is really good, but the most amazing thing is probably the background setting. The story was set in the late Qing Dynasty, an era when heroes emerged one after another, and it was also in a period when the new dynasty had not yet risen and the old dynasty had not yet fallen. There were too many things that could be told. I am looking forward to the appearance of big bosses such as Sun Wen and Song Jiaoren in the future. At the same time, the performance of Kang and Liang in the fictional world is also worth looking forward to. So far, the writing about the real world is quite good, especially the description of people's motivations. It can be seen that he is quite influenced by the leader. He has a bit of a murderous and decisive temperament, but he has a little more human warmth than the leader. The only problem is probably the part about the Blessed Land of the Earth God. The overall narrative is weak and the plot progress is slow. It feels much more delayed than before. I still suggest that the description of the battle should be more accurate and faster, so that the overall look and feel will be better. Having said so much, I'll give you some tips.

Not bad, not bad! It has the potential to be a fire, so please give it a try!

The author's writing style is good and level, and he doesn't look like a newcomer.

I read the one that was blocked just now. . . . In the end, it depends on the law rather than the conscience of the capitalists.

The author is definitely not a newbie, tell me what your previous book was, 😏😏 I want to read it

I always feel that... The author has misunderstood the ancient army, especially the combat effectiveness of the late Qing army that you used. The most capable army in the late Qing Dynasty was Beiyang, and even Beiyang was much worse than the fighting will of even a small soldier who became a gangster in your book. There is a famous saying in the late Qing Dynasty, fleeing when you hear the wind is a bad courage, fleeing when you see the wind is a medium courage, and fleeing when you see the enemy is a superior courage. Although it is an adaptation, not a copy, and although it is a game reality, every time I see these low-level minions working hard, I feel... A sense of time travel, I don't know how to put it.

You finally live like a dove that updates every day.

Is the prose style... I can't read it? There are too many messy things! I just want to relax and enjoy myself by reading an article and a story! This feels like watching a New World TV series... I can't see it in the fog... There are so many good reviews. Is it because my cultural level is not good? Self doubt

Is the author so proud of the profession of trader? Although it doesn't affect my reading, I still want to complain about it

The writing is quite good, but you don't need to always emphasize the character of the trader. When I watched it smoothly at first, I suddenly felt like I was in a drama when I saw this. It's just my personal opinion 😊

This book is okay. I'll get excited after reading 10 chapters. I just don't know why there are so few people reading it. . .

Didn't the "Kanli Water Fire Sword Qi" that the protagonist cultivated be found in ancient ruins in his previous life? Compared with the previous explanation to the embassy that it was left by his father, does the Jing family also have this inheritance? Also, how did the protagonist develop superb swordsmanship despite having a difficult life in the past? Don't Xinhan and the Jing family doubt it? I feel there is a little problem, but it's still good. Come on 👍

The writing is good, but there were too many traders in the early stage, which makes you feel proud of this profession 🙂

The plot is well written, but could you please stop popping up as a trader all the time? It would destroy the immersion too much.

This writing style should not be from a new author...

It has the style of a leader, the setting is good, and the writing is excellent. There are only three poisonous points at present: 1. The setting of an invincible trader. Is it difficult to directly write the protagonist who is good at making decisions and knows how to advance and retreat? 2. Awkward emotional drama. The combination of an adult's experience and a teenager's attitude toward relationships is too awkward. 3. When the protagonist first arrived in Xinhan, he reported directly to the national leaders, and then the leaders were shocked again and again, showing no clue. In Zhuxia, it was limited to officials of the fifth and sixth grades (middle-level), but in Xinhan, the top leaders attached great importance to it. Although there are reasons, the progress is too fast, and the power struggle is extremely cruel. To be honest, after arriving in Xinhan, I felt that the political level of the head of the Jing family was not as good as that of Zhu Xia's bureau chief. Even if they understand the general trend, how many people are willing to let go of their rights and struggle to the end is only human nature!

Author, although you are a newcomer, your writing style is very similar to Jing Keshou, and you are better than the leader. In order to support the great writers who have not yet made a fortune, I will receive 14 recommendation votes every day for a month. Do not be a eunuch.

I received a notice saying that Sanjiang is difficult to schedule, and I can choose to put it on the shelf. In the end, I chose to wait. It seems that the word count will have to be reduced for updates in the future 😭😭 Please vote and follow up 😭

The writing is pretty good, but it's too long to explain! It describes the scenes in large lengths, and even the main characters are painted in the background. It seems boring. Maybe you can refer to Wenzhao Gong's writing rhythm and push it all the way.

A novel that I thought could confer gods has disappeared again

The rebates for the new book investment have not been used up yet. This is because my investment failed 😥😥

It's a pity. I wanted to keep it for a while, but by the time I wanted to watch it, it had already been discontinued.

The writing is good and the subject matter is good!

The system is a bit messy. I feel like I'm going to collapse sooner or later! The author should start a new book

What a pity, what a pity. A book about chasing the leader directly

Alas... The plot progress is slow...

Are you still writing it elsewhere? I feel like the plot and creativity are quite good. It would be a pity not to finish it.

Are there any new books 🙂