Captive of the Whole World

I heard that the author is going to write 1 million this year. Who can tell me the rumor?

I really liked the last one. You always write half-assed books like this. It's better to take a rest as soon as possible.

I was confused after seeing the author's new book

According to the current plot, the protagonist wants to experiment with nuclear fusion on the second earth. But the problem is that the protagonist wants to use players to conduct experiments. How many of the players understand nuclear physics? The protagonist is set to be the person with authority on the Second Earth, but how to draw players in and out is all passive and cannot be controlled by the protagonist. And even if the experiment is successful, the results belong to the players who came out of the experiment. How can the protagonist apply it in the real world? Is it investing in new energy? Not to mention what form the protagonist uses and what reasons the players have to help. There is also the issue of magic and internal power. If it can be used on the second earth, it can be used in the real world. By then, the order of the real world will be out of control. Didn't the protagonist expect it? The hook is huge, but the setting of the protagonist makes the plot extremely difficult to advance. If one day someone told me about the creator of his world, but he couldn't even speak Chinese, do you think I would believe him? Not to mention people like Watcher and Ancient One. Judging from the current situation, it is better to cooperate with the state from the beginning or the author simply makes a dent in the protagonist's IQ. This kind of hang-up is simply not something the protagonist can play with in a setting like this.

To be honest, I have read several chapters, but I feel like I just can't understand what you are writing (ﾟoﾟ; Am I too low in IQ?

A hammer in the east and a mallet in the west. The writing is really messy. If you want to write about creating a world and introducing players, write it carefully. Why is it Marvel and Ancient One? It feels like there is no outline at all. I just write whatever comes to mind. After reading 50 chapters, I still don't know how the protagonist Goldfinger uses it. It seems that if the plot needs something, just take out that part and write it. Then one world is not enough for you to write? It's from Marvel and it's from Dr. Quantum. How many people understand something as difficult as the two states of photons? Not even extraordinary, just quantum theory, why? Are you planning to cultivate quantum immortality to all people? After reading 50 chapters, there wasn't even a theme, so I gave up and gave up.

Author, please be careful not to include any harem, women or the like, otherwise, the book will probably be unfinished.

I just read the comments in detail and found that many people have the same feeling as me, that is, the author really handles the details very poorly. Some things are vague and not clear enough and popular. I feel that the author himself understands it very well, but we can't understand it.

Stop writing, several eunuchs in a row

There are fruit on the tree, you and me under the tree.

Why is there no update today? I have an ominous feeling 😓

After all, everyone has high standards for authors. I think some comment sections that are worse than the author are very harmonious.

The author's new book makes me confused. I haven't finished the previous book and now I'm starting a new one. I'm afraid it won't be hundreds of thousands of words again, but I hope the author can exceed one million words.

Listen to the introduction: Feeding All Humans

The author does not handle the details well. Some places are ambiguous and incomprehensible. The author is completely self-indulgent and hopes to improve the handling of details. Some places cannot be understood without being detailed.

To be honest, having a second earth is already very exciting. It can be written like the mastermind behind the scenes, whether it is a game flow or a spiritual revival flow. But then you come up with a bunch of Marvel, Watchmen, and Swordsman, which are completely different systems. They hit one thing with a hammer and the other, and it feels like the book has been ruined. Go read the popular books. Which one doesn't have a clear setting? Magic is magic, and immortals are immortals. This is Guan Gong fighting Qin Qiong. It's both internal power and magic. It's so funny.

I feel that the author's books are not bad in terms of creativity, but he just lacks the determination to persevere. The author says that no one can subscribe and stick with it, but the stickiness of readers is low until the work is completed, and it is basically impossible to have long-term readers. [Except for Conferring Gods in One Book] I hope the author will persevere, even if it's very uncomfortable.

I'm so confused, I've seen more than 40 pictures now.

The cool night makes me miss you like a river

If you want this subject, you need to have your own characteristics. You are not the first to write it. I think of the book All Mankind, which is full of bugs and relies on creativity. It is messy in the middle and mid-term, but there are many recommendation votes in the early stage. Reading the introduction of this book, I feel that the protagonist is a selfish person. It makes people shine. The character must be good and don't violate the rules.

There is no outline in this writing. It is scattered and half-hearted. I don't understand what you are going to write.

I have read more than seventy chapters so far The first ten or twenty chapters, the research on space is quite smooth. The thirty or forty chapters in the middle, about players, about the three-layer world, about nuclear fusion, are a bit scattered, and it feels like I wrote them wherever I thought. It's a bit confusing to read. The next ten or twenty chapters are about the various changes between players and the 'game'. This may be because there is only one main line, which is smooth and comfortable to read. It is recommended that the author should keep the order in order when writing.

One chapter a day, unable to retain readers

Now that I have seen fourteen pictures, I am a little confused. This is a lot of foreshadowing.

I still really like this book. I finished it after reading it for a few days. But after seeing the outline, I think it's over. I hope the author will work hard!

Why are the world parasites gone?