The Target Is Lord Xianyu

One word "chaos" The characters are chaotic, the story is chaotic, and the background is chaotic. . . It is impossible to see what the main line of the story is, and the protagonist has no idea what he is doing. There are too many characters, which makes the story a mess. There are too many pits dug in the early stage. How many can the reader remember when filling them in later? Moreover, there are too many pits and it is confusing to read, so they will basically give up. If there are too many pits, the author does not know whether he can persist until filling them in. . .

I watched it all in 20 minutes, not enough 😂😂

It's okay, I just hope that the protagonist can be a bit like a master and have some leadership...

The book is good, but it has too much foreshadowing and is too mysterious. It makes people feel like they don't know whether to continue reading or not. It makes people feel itchy.

It's worth reading. If you're short of books, you can read it. The biggest problem is that it's a bit messy. There are ten heroic spirits at the beginning. The author's writing power is not strong enough, so he can't express the feeling, which makes it a headache to read. The characterizations and descriptions of events seem quite detailed, trying to create a mysterious feeling, 😅 but there are many unfamiliar and inexplicable things that make it difficult to feel immersed in the story. Now that I have read about thirty chapters, I feel that the author's outline should be okay and his ideas are good, but his writing style is still not enough. It is difficult to retain people in this situation. It is best to polish it at the beginning.

Yes, I was amazed at the beginning!

The subject matter is really what I like to read. Pig's feet can build all kinds of fantasy buildings in other worlds, summon various heroic spirits, and build incredible cities. However, the unpublished chapters are really messy. If the author improves his writing skills later, I will see if he can change the previous chapters and optimize the writing. It will definitely improve the performance of the book. Because the unpublished chapters are so messy, I really don't want to subscribe to the published chapters, but I also like this kind of subject matter, so I left a message. There is no other meaning.

Is this author so pitiful? He has over two hundred chapters with few recommended votes and not even a single monthly pass

Let's hide good books from each other, hide each other's books, support each other

Collected, the flame of the end came to say hello

I just want to ask, have you digressed from the topic? Have you tried poison?

I didn't explain it clearly, and it feels like there are a lot of pitfalls. I wonder if the author can fill it in later.

I don't like this kind of novel that relies on summoning for everything. The whole system is broken.

Is there a map? I just read this book. This kind of novel does not have a map, which makes me feel bald.

The depiction of women is a bit exaggerated

It's so confusing... When I listen to the book, I feel like I don't understand much of the content... I don't like to re-read or skip reading, it makes my head hurt... 🙂

The biggest highlight of this book is the cities that can be upgraded. The biggest disadvantage is also that the cities have too many functions. You can get whatever the pig's feet want. I only make one suggestion, for example: the Hall of Valor only has functions such as defense against evil spirits, evil spirits, and demons! But it's poisonous if you can summon it

Oops, found a treasure author. 😊

Author, I want to see the protagonist bring out Lowell, Kamikaze Castle and the new Babbage 😰

The author's writing skills need to be improved. Although he doesn't expect any gorgeous language, just ordinary vernacular writing will be enough, but the plot description must be organized so that people will have the desire to read on. It is a pity that a very good setting is a masterpiece of a god.

In addition, in fact, there are only two female protagonists that I have a better impression of, Ottilia and Anrith. . I would like to ask, how many books can describe the mysterious and mysterious destiny?