Assassin of the Dark Era

The hierarchy is not clear, and the plot is quite jumpy... And why did it first say that Pig's Foot was ten years old, and then his master said that he had raised him for sixteen years?

By the way, it would be better to write a book in the third person, right?

Come on, follow and collect

A first-person novel? There are new ideas. The worldview construction is also good. I am looking forward to it.

After reading 5 chapters, let's briefly talk about my opinions 1. The writing is relatively smooth, except for some sentences that are not very fluent, the overall look and feel is still good 2. The world view setting is very complete, and the conflict at the beginning is also interesting, but the handling is a bit bland, maybe it can be processed a little more 3. The overall feeling is quite good, the main line is very clear, if more details are enriched, it will be a good work 4. Come on

Fellow Taoist, the concept is quite unique and it is a good book.

I have collected a lot of works and encourage each other.