Ghost Apartment

Although this is the author's first work but I have to say that it is very thoughtful. Moreover, the author is not a writer by profession, so it is not easy to find time to publish a novel in his busy schedule, but one chapter a day cannot keep book lovers satisfied. The output is not high, but the writing style is very good. According to the summary of the introduction, the author has many scripts in this area. With the systematic update and the assistance of scripts, the books written will not be too bad no matter how bad they are. During this period, we also paid great attention to the performance and behavior of the characters as well as the details of the environment. The horror atmosphere was created very well. After savoring it carefully, I still feel that the bloody "scripts" in it are more delicious delicacies. However, I still have some suggestions that I would like to make. I personally feel that some parts are a bit unreasonable. Although the personality of the characters is fully reflected (I think it is very good, even the character images provided by insiders have been painstakingly integrated), but sometimes I feel that it breaks the rationality. The character in the appropriate time and space is sometimes too prominent in the image, and some thoughts are more real if they are buried in the heart. Also, I suggest you add some psychological activities, people's desire for survival and human nature. I think it wouldn't be bad to add more. The work is very good, it can highlight the thought-provoking nature of the word in blood, such as: What should I do, how should I survive. After all, it is sometimes difficult to calm down and read a book or play Scary Words. Emm, it would be better if it was stronger. emm, Mr. Luo Yan, since there is a word about blood, why don't you update more every day? ! ! ! (▼ Plate▼#)

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Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

—————————————————————— "Meow——! Meow——!" The original room was packed into a computer room. This was the first day that Shanna moved to the study room on the north side to study. At about 2:30 in the afternoon, mixed with the characteristic whining wind in winter afternoons, several cats meowed outside the window. The sounds were rapid and even a little heartbreaking. Someone is bullying the stray cats. Shanna hurriedly got up and lay down by the window. The window sill was a little high and a little wide, and she had to step on a small stool to see below. Looking around, she could see that the cow she had seen was sitting downstairs in the building opposite, with her head raised and anxiously circling back and forth. Shanna looked up along the cow's raised head and saw a ball of something falling swaying down. Above it was a rope bent by the wind, extending all the way to the balcony window on the second floor, in the hands of a little girl who looked similar to her age. The cat's meowing stopped. The little girl opposite her was lying by the window in a similar position to her, contentedly watching the cows and cats feasting She seemed to be taller than me, at least, she didn't need to step on the stool... Shanna was lying on the window sill, staring at the little girl and thinking wildly. …… Suddenly there was the sound of a key being inserted into the keyhole at the door. Shanna hurriedly climbed down, set up the small stool, sat back at the desk and picked up a pen. The next second, the study door was pushed open, a stern look fell on Shan Nai, and after a moment he closed the door and left. —————————————————————— I have been looking forward to it but I am not worried about producing my own grain. I don't really like writing because I can't express the feeling I want, but the feeling of popping and exploding countless pink bubbles hidden in my heart is so itchy that I just want to be happy! All settings are made up and any similarity is purely coincidental. Well, yes. When will it be released? It depends on when Sister Luo Yan updates it. ———————————————————— Shanna is not a resident of this community. She only rents here because it is close to the school. Her parents are very good, very busy, and very strict. "Shashasha..." Looking out the window again, Shanna continued to do the exercises with a slight smile on his lips. Watching the girl in the building opposite feeding the cat has become a rare moment of relaxation for Shanna every day. The most amazing thing is that after school started, the cows appeared earlier with tacit understanding, just when Shanna was packing her things to go to school after her lunch break. The girl opposite was also neatly dressed, carrying a schoolbag and putting the food plate down from the window. She lay by the window and watched the cat intently, while Shanna lay by the window and watched her intently, as if it was the most solemn ritual before departure every day. …… In two years, Shannai has grown taller and no longer needs to step on the stool to look downstairs. Occasionally, she would see the cow cat in the community, which would circle around her feet affectionately. And recently, she became pregnant. The afternoon before the winter vacation, Shanna took the papers and homework from school and went home. The cow cat was lying at the gate of the community, facing the end of the road motionless. Shanna walked over and lowered his hand to touch its head, but was suddenly scratched by a paw. Shan Nai retracted his hand and watched blankly as the cow bounced off the ground and dodged. After looking at her for a few seconds, he dragged his big belly and turned around and got into the green belt of the community. After her parents finished their initial accusations, they remained silent all the way. Shanna watched the nurse disinfect her wounds. The rabies vaccine was very painful, more painful than other injections, but she still couldn't understand why the cow suddenly didn't like her. In the afternoon of the next day, the cat meowed as usual downstairs. It meowed for a long time, longer than usual. Shanna also waited for a long time, but did not wait for the girl from the balcony on the second floor opposite to appear. A few days later, Shannai went home to live with her parents. Outside the car window, she saw a cow running across the road and into the grass nest, holding a small cow that had not yet opened its eyes and had the same beautiful coat as its mother. When Shanna came back at the end of the vacation, she could only see the cow and the cat. Its cubs did not survive the winter. Shanna never saw that girl again. … "I'm just here to say goodbye to you." "Goodbye…" In the live broadcast room, Mu Mo's voice was suppressing tears as she said goodbye. Shan Nai's hand shaking the gift trembled, and before the live broadcast room closed, he sent out the last barrage, "I'm here to find you!" … How could I make you disappear again. It's not okay to say goodbye! ————————————————————

Not bad, not bad, not enough. I have never watched horror and supernatural genres, and I discovered that it can be so good-looking. Looking forward to it and looking forward to the subsequent development. Come on, come on!

After reading it, I found that the text is good, the characters are vividly portrayed, and the plot is not too slow. It is the kind I like. However, there are too few words at the moment. Please support it first and give the author a boost

Yo, where was that cover from before?

What? Just throw some bricks and mortar. I really can't draw. Just be happy, right? Let me go.

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Luo Yan, why did you join the Illuminati? (Suddenly broke in)

Sister Luoyan is awesome! Open-minded and heart-warming

Come and cheer, Miss Luo Yan is awesome!

Is it difficult to have a demon king-level blood character?

Bai Muching: Me? ? Luo Yan? ? ? Hahahahahaha

I have read this book. The writing style is exquisite, the subject matter is novel, the rhetoric is gorgeous, the language is fluent, and the writing form is even more eclectic. Especially for the layout and rhythm of the novel, he has his own unique understanding and processing, which makes people feel comfortable in one word after reading it! Although it only has a few words now, it still has the style of everyone. In time, this book will definitely become a hit! The suspense channel has been silent for a long time. I believe that once this book is published, it will definitely bring about a new suspense craze and allow more authors to devote themselves to writing suspense themes. By then, the suspense channel will definitely shine! However, we will never forget the pioneer of the new era of suspense - Kazama Jueyin. It was he who, step by step, broke out new ideas in the suspense world and opened a new door to the suspense world! Come on! God Kazama! ——Sincerely, Mengye Sisi!

I'm worried about whether the book will be a eunuch I just read it and I still feel a little bit excited about the book Love it, love it