I Am Playing a Copy of the Game World Two Thousand Years Later

The main reason is that Pig's Feet likes to recruit younger people too much, and it is useless and has no characteristics. Is it a free welfare? There are also too many "this" words. To be honest, such words are too disgusting. Furthermore, the entire plot is too bland, the main line is unclear, and it feels uninteresting.

The subject matter is good, and the three golden chapters are also very attractive. It has the potential to be a high-quality product. Unfortunately, it is too eager for quick success, the plot is too tight, and the rhythm is wrong. In addition, the introduction does not indicate whether there is a harem or not, so it will not attract the harem party. And with the introduction of women at the beginning, it is easy to dissuade a lot of people who are clamoring for a single female lead. So to sum up, it is basically definitely a newcomer, or a newcomer to Dianniang (although I collected it in Chuangshi and went back to Dianniang to read it). Looking at the comments on the launch, I guess the Chuangshi one is also average. So I would like to make a suggestion, don't be too impatient in the plot in the future, and don't be afraid of water. When you see Shui Yu, Shui Yu was so shocked that no one said anything. What readers really care about is whether the book is interesting, not whether the plot is fast or not. If you write something interesting, many people will follow it every day (refer to Dark Destruction). On the other hand, if you write something boring, the protagonist will not be unattractive even if he reaches level three in one chapter (refer to this book). So, let's look at the pace of the plot. This book is too fast. The pace of the first few chapters is good, but it is wrong to start with the protagonist entering the hospital and threatening. Various conflicts are created too quickly. The leisurely study and experience shown in the introduction are not reflected, and the sub-career is not reflected. Instead, various fights are still the protagonist's unilateral evil Long Aotian style fights, which are full of the plot. Generally speaking, for a good novel, it is best to have a 7;3 in daily life and fighting in the early stage. In this way, the world view and the character of the protagonist can be established, instead of like the current situation, which is like a running account. Except for fighting, no character, including the protagonist, is established, and even the world view is hasty. In short, I will pay attention to you in the next book, but I hope you can learn the lessons from this book and control the rhythm well. The above is just a family statement, I hope you get better and better.

Great author, come on 👍

I finally understand why it is said that the game section is easy to top the rankings.

Is there any book that the big guys read? I'd like to read it after reading the name and introduction.

As I wrote earlier, a good warrior should fight with his body. How many years have you been writing about swords? Are you tired of aesthetics? Oh, so tired! ! !

I'll make another post

The protagonist's younger brother is too speechless. You might as well just create a force.

The author's proficient driving skills are quite something.

GKD increases efforts