Us in 2003

You must work hard, Dad! Come on together ❤

I'm a little anxious to write, so why don't you just write it once and scan it and send it out...

A dual-protagonist system? I hope there will be less plots of lowering one's intelligence and slapping one's face to show off. The core idea of ​​the system article is to have a goal. Just to show off and slap one's face is a routine from 10 years ago that will definitely lead to failure. Please refer to the black technology system of Xueba. It is for reference only. Thank you.

I had a very hard time these 10 minutes

Receive it, it's a pity that there is no investment opportunity

It is indeed an online novel, hahahaha

Opened the collection, please vote

If you persist in writing 30 chapters, the number of recommendation votes will gradually increase.

Big: 1: Unit reversal is already very high, a bit off the charts. Please add a description before each turning point. Otherwise, the transition is abrupt and easy to skip. 2: The characters cannot keep up with the plot. It feels like the protagonist is like a puppet. He does whatever the writer tells him to do, without any emotion. —————— Small: (Advanced) 1: The fragment at the beginning seems useless and can be easily removed. And so on. Rest assured, careful description of turning points will significantly increase the word count, possibly doubling your current word count. (Introduction) 2: It's still a character. It doesn't matter if the supporting characters react monotonously, but the protagonist must be different. —————— Last sentence: Stories happen to people.