The Ancestor Takes You Leveling Across the Heavens

I hope I won't revert to youth again; and then I'll bring up a lot of love between children

I don't understand, why is martial arts inferior to cultivating immortals? You said it's still understandable to be downgraded to a low-level martial arts world, but downgraded to a martial arts world? Don't just be so careless and artificially distinguish high and low, okay?

There is a reason why this book is not popular. It has no depth and cannot capture the emotions of a certain fragment. Just like I write a diary, get up in the morning, eat at noon, and go to bed at night. The next day, I went to the toilet and climbed a mountain at noon... I could just skip going in and out of the Jianghu world and see what you gain every time you go there, because every world you write about is not interesting.

Nice idea. But the biggest problem with this book is that the main character doesn't look like an old man at all! There is not a single sentence in the whole article that expresses the demeanor of an "old man" who has read all his grace! Especially the impetuous aura of young netizens in the information age, which they don't even try to cover up! Not to mention having no life experience or anything like that, a truly good author is a real old man when he writes about old people, and he is a real child when he writes about children!

You can write more about the main world. I don't want to read any of the other worlds you wrote, including Swordsman, Sword of Heaven and Dragon Slaying, Tianlong, and Legend of Two Dragons of the Tang Dynasty. They were all written badly.

Is this writing too childish? A person who lives in modern life and then travels back in time can kill people at will? Especially the Tianlong part made me sick. While making myself look so superior and awesome, at the same time killing people casually, I wonder? What plot has the author arranged? Even though I made a mistake, it seemed like I was trying to make someone happy, which was very awkward.

In my personal opinion, Xuanyuan is a big failure. It should not introduce such a high-level character attention in the early stage of the work, destroying the balance of the work and reducing the role of the protagonist. There are many ways to gain skills, treasures, and upgrades. Relying on such a high-level person to focus on the upgrades brought about by initiation will only make the protagonist feel low.

Deleting the book, the protagonist who has lived for more than a hundred years still thinks like a keyboard warrior in the 1770s and 1880s.

There is no need to write fanfics about Jin Yong and Gu Long's novels. They are too bad to write anything new. Recommend some famous martial arts novels and martial arts dramas. "Princess Wushou", "Snowflake Goddess Dragon", "Devil Sword Chess of Life and Death", "Nineteen Sisters of Gan" and "Dragon Ball of the Demon Realm". If the martial arts value is higher, there is no need to write "Wind and Cloud", "Water Moon Cave Sky" is also acceptable. Furthermore, instead of writing "Zhu Xian", it is recommended to write "Legend of the Emperor" or "Mysterious Weapons and Mysteries". If you write above, "Sea Tiger" is also quite good.

I was ready to give up. I couldn't write well about spiritual practice, so I wrote about science and technology. If you want to express too much, it will end up being neither fish nor fowl.