Ancestor Will Take You to the Heavens to Practice Leveling

What are you writing about? ? Killing people as soon as they disagree with each other, and hurting others before saying anything, is so senseless. . . This ancestor looks so brainless and has no strategy at all. . .

I can't stand it anymore 😅😅😅 I saw the Jiuding chapter in one glance and ten lines. Apart from pretending to be B and grabbing things, there is nothing interesting about it. . . He always grabs things and beats others up 😅😅😅

Alas, the author's final remarks are right, but the rhythm is not good. Although I thought the plot was a bit fast at first, I still felt refreshed. Later, it was not fast, but skipped a level. Technology came to join in the fun again, so I was not ready to continue.

I hope I won't revert to youth again; and then I'll bring up a lot of love between children

I don't understand, why is martial arts inferior to cultivating immortals? You said it's still understandable to be downgraded to a low-level martial arts world, but downgraded to a martial arts world? Don't just be so careless and artificially distinguish high and low, okay?

There is a reason why this book is not popular. It has no depth and cannot capture the emotions of a certain fragment. Just like I write a diary, get up in the morning, eat at noon, and go to bed at night. The next day, I went to the toilet and climbed a mountain at noon... I could just skip going in and out of the Jianghu world and see what you gain every time you go there, because every world you write about is not interesting.

Nice idea. But the biggest problem with this book is that the main character doesn't look like an old man at all! There is not a single sentence in the whole article that expresses the demeanor of an "old man" who has read all his grace! Especially the impetuous aura of young netizens in the information age, which they don't even try to cover up! Not to mention having no life experience or anything like that, a truly good author is a real old man when he writes about old people, and he is a real child when he writes about children!

You can write more about the main world. I don't want to read any of the other worlds you wrote, including Swordsman, Sword of Heaven and Dragon Slaying, Tianlong, and Legend of Two Dragons of the Tang Dynasty. They were all written badly.

Is this writing too childish? A person who lives in modern life and then travels back in time can kill people at will? Especially the Tianlong part made me sick. While making myself look so superior and awesome, at the same time killing people casually, I wonder? What plot has the author arranged? Even though I made a mistake, it seemed like I was trying to make someone happy, which was very awkward.

In my personal opinion, Xuanyuan is a big failure. It should not introduce such a high-level character attention in the early stage of the work, destroying the balance of the work and reducing the role of the protagonist. There are many ways to gain skills, treasures, and upgrades. Relying on such a high-level person to focus on the upgrades brought about by initiation will only make the protagonist feel low.

Deleting the book, the protagonist who has lived for more than a hundred years still thinks like a keyboard warrior in the 1770s and 1880s.

There is no need to write fanfics about Jin Yong and Gu Long's novels. They are too bad to write anything new. Recommend some famous martial arts novels and martial arts dramas. "Princess Wushou", "Snowflake Goddess Dragon", "Devil Sword Chess of Life and Death", "Nineteen Sisters of Gan" and "Dragon Ball of the Demon Realm". If the martial arts value is higher, there is no need to write "Wind and Cloud", "Water Moon Cave Sky" is also acceptable. Furthermore, instead of writing "Zhu Xian", it is recommended to write "Legend of the Emperor" or "Mysterious Weapons and Mysteries". If you write above, "Sea Tiger" is also quite good.

I was ready to give up. I couldn't write well about spiritual practice, so I wrote about science and technology. If you want to express too much, it will end up being neither fish nor fowl.

The protagonist has traveled through time and lived for so long, and his tone of voice is no different from that of a child. Isn't it just that he has grown older but not more caring?

There are a lot of articles like this recently, but they are basically written by people whose IQs are not online, and they are all considered ancestors, and their behavior is like someone suffering from chuunibyou. The quality of the writers is getting worse and worse at a certain point. I can't find a book that lasts 10 chapters.

Why are there so many articles recently about old people traveling through the heavens and pretending to be cool? Could it be that the young people who read such articles back then already have grandchildren?

Nowadays, all the Tianliu are the same, starting with Xiaoao, Yitian, Tianlong, Datang, then Zhuxian, Zhetian, perfect... I hope the author will come up with something fresh.

I think I have also been wandering around the starting point for several years. Not to mention I am an old bookworm, but there are not only 1,000 but also 800 books that I have read. This is the first time I have read the catalog. I gave up the book after reading the first three chapters. Three words: I can't stand it.

The author is big, breakthrough to and breakthrough are different. Breakthrough to master is a grandmaster, and breakthrough to master is a great master. In order to avoid confusion, the author recommends that the author use breakthrough to 🙂

This fucking guy is a man who has lived to be 150 years old. His speaking level is worse than that of a ten-year-old child

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I feel that the writing has new ideas and is not as poisonous as the book reviews said. If you look at the starting point rankings, some of the top books are even more unbearable 😰

You really caught me off guard😅

In the dead of night, people look around. Hey-hey! No one! (Smiles evilly), stare down, his gaze is sharp! With the knife in hand, he lived a happy life

Half-step to the peak of the later stage, is this the case?

Some people are talking about immortality and martial arts in the comment area, so I will just give you my personal opinion. First of all, I haven't read the book, it's just for those who argue about immortality and martial arts in the comment area. I believe you can check my book age from my information In addition, I read and write books. Although I am not popular, I still write about fairy tales, specifically classical and fantasy fairy tales. Getting back to the subject, I am the Immortal Party! Let's talk about immortality first. It feels handsome and noble. Each move is an ethereal fairy sight, and every move has magical powers. (I know some people want to argue that the immortal way does not cultivate the body, but the close martial arts is invincible.) Secondly, here is the key point! Immortal immortality! Although most of them are ordinary immortals, at most they can live as long as the heaven and the earth. They cannot achieve immortal life, or the immortal life where the world will be destroyed but I will not be destroyed. But, no matter what, Changsheng is awesome! Don't talk to me about the idea that my relatives and friends are dead and I have no interest in immortality. This kind of idea is only for children. We are all adults. You can have the idea of ​​​​sour grapes when you can't eat grapes, but if you think about it from another perspective, when there is such an opportunity, if not all of the ten people are heartbroken, 7.8 Will definitely be heartbroken! (Some people's brain circuits may be unusual, so I'm not sure 100%) Let's talk about martial arts, it feels domineering and fierce. One move after another opens up the world, and every move moves mountains and seas. Secondly, here are the key points! Life in martial arts is limited! Whether you admit it or not, most of the so-called martial arts are advanced versions of martial arts seeking trouble, just a magnifying glass-like increase in power? Finally, I have no so-called summary here. That is to say, it is a relatively neutral view, which may be a bit biased, but there is nothing you can do about it. Apart from the question of immortality, martial arts is purely about physical sanctification. This concept is common in almost all martial arts novels. But in Xianxia novels, becoming a saint in the flesh almost never ends well. (It's not that he died miserably, but his achievements were not good) For example, the monkeys in Journey to the West, Three Eyes... Another example (this one is a bit cruel), the prehistoric Pangu, the Witch Clan... Of course, you want to talk about covering up the sky, even in a perfect world, I can't help it. This kind of physical combat power is indeed a bit unimaginable. But when talking about the above examples, you should remember that these two novels, or other similar novels, have a premise, that is, this is also a world of immortality! In terms of returning to one's original nature, that is also the way to immortality! Change your mind and let's talk about fighting. It may be useless to argue and say anything I say, but a hundred words will kill me. But one thing is that the world of immortality has a very important core, which is cause and effect, which can also be called fate. If it is too general, I can extend it, then you will know that this is a calculation! This thing is too evil. The saints in the prehistoric world have all kinds of calculations. This kind of bug belongs only to the world of immortality. It also exists in the world of martial arts. It feels like a child's play house. In a real fight, Immortals will not end the fight personally, they will just hide behind and make various calculations. In the world of martial arts, those who defeat ten masters with one effort are not awesome, but they feel too martial. Finally, let me say one more thing. The description is not very accurate... A more rigorous version, for five thousand years in China, it was always the literati who plotted to kill the warriors! In a lighter version, Lu Ya is determined to target you with a straw man, no matter how powerful you are!

Even if you finish the book, you won't finish it, which is a waste of investment.

I didn't even click on it when it was finished, which was a waste of my investment.

Is it really good to grab the anti-inflammatory Golden Finger? Will you lose fans in this way? You might as well return it to him after using it up. After all, you are just learning about elixirs.

After raising it, I entered the palace

The book is finished, why don't you finish it?