My Brother's Name Is Uzumaki Naruto

It's a very good book, and it ranks among the top five Naruto fics I've read. First of all, in terms of plot, the protagonist does not have the memory of Naruto. I think this is a good setting, because there is no need to have the limitations of the original Naruto work. But in my opinion, the author still has some flaws in the plot. The first one is in the country of water. Obito left a gift, and the protagonist felt panic. In my opinion, the protagonist wanted to kill Obito immediately. When he heard that Obito left a gift, he should not be panicked, but should not care. This conflicts with the protagonist's personality. There are also some minor flaws that I won't mention if they don't affect viewing. The protagonist's character is also good, calm, cold but not cold-blooded, with things he cares about and goals. Also, the subsequent plot is a bit confusing. It probably started when Uncle Snake came back with the letter. Come on author! Hope you can write better.

That, the author is great, I will make a long story short. . This book is a very clear Naruto story with profound logical concepts and good foreshadowing. The content of the story is also very impressive. I look forward to a wonderful story in the book. . Therefore, don't rush to write a book just because you are rushing to finish the manuscript, causing you to accidentally write poorly. In fact, when you are exhausted, you can take a break and explain it in the comments. I believe everyone can understand it. . Finally, support you, Xigua

There are more than 100 pictures in this book of pure abuse of the main character, and the pig's feet are beaten so hard that they run away every time! It was very depressing to watch. It doesn't feel any better, I just can't stand it anymore! 😅😅

I have read 120 of this book, and my personal feeling is that the most basic ones are the protagonist, the pros and cons, and the IQ. Everyone's position is valid. These two points are rare in Naruto fan fiction. As for the abuse, it is not enough. At present, I feel that it is a cool novel, but it is not the kind of brainless cool. At least from the beginning, I felt that I couldn't beat Orochimaru. I saw the author talking about blowing up Konoha. I decided not to watch it then! I don't like to chase after what I like, I just want to fatten up, and it's satisfying to read it all in one go🪖🪖🪖🪖 The author will update soon. ! ! ! Modify and send the blade 🙂! !

A very good novel, the emotional characters are not like a fast food novel. The plot arrangement is very in-depth, and there is no brainless pretentiousness. The first hundred chapters are very good, I hope the battle power will not collapse and the character description will not be confusing later on. For example, the Immortal of Six Paths is a bad guy? ? ?

I have read more than seventy chapters, and I feel it is well written. Good luck, author.

I can only say that the front is fine. After all, the protagonist does not know the plot, and what should happen if he is not strong enough will happen. Some details are not grasped well. The protagonist's only goal is to kill Obito. In fact, he can join the Akatsuki organization, get inside information, and can do his own research, close to the Rinnegan. The plot is basically messed up, and the rest depends on the author's imagination, and the subsequent plot should be about getting the Samsara Eye, the finale of the filth, and then reincarnation or other magic to resurrect the parents, etc., And then there is the world war story, or getting the approval of Otsutsuki Sage who thinks he can unify and eliminate the war and give him the strength to fight Kaguya. However, the power system exists in the original world. So far, most of the protagonists are fighting and talking, and they have not been mentioned in detail. There are many contradictions, I think it will collapse, maybe eunuch

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The plot of this book tends to be dark (the author said it is a cool novel, but it varies from person to person) I have only read about a hundred chapters so far. The plot is not as cruel as the comment section, so I dare not read it. There is no blackening (your heart is still in Konoha). If you think this is unbearable, then stop chasing it. I will talk about other things later, such as those in the comment area. I feel that it is not as cruel as everyone said. I am not the Uzumaki Naruto next door (don't hit me, I came from the post there). Naruto there has been bullied and monitored since he was a child. The Minato couple have also been watching. The description makes Naruto more helpless, and his parents are watching inside. Being unable to help, seeing one's own children being bullied, and often being misunderstood and feeling frustrated is quite abusive, so coming from next door, I can completely accept the current plot Finally: This book is well written, and it is very smooth to read. It is not embarrassing at all when dealing with parents, and it is also very warm. I also have my good friend Itachi in Konoha. Everything seems so harmonious, but it is more uncomfortable not to be able to escape the difficulty of the Kyuubi. (It's the climax, it's more sadistic.) It feels very sad, but Naruto has had a better childhood, right? Kabuto will be there to take care of Naruto in the future, so everyone is looking forward to the next plot of the search for the Uzumaki tribe. Let's see what other bonds and developments Pigfoot will have, and how he will confront his dearest brother PS: The author is responsible for writing according to the outline. Maintain the current writing style, and naturally retain high-quality book friends (book friends who spend money to subscribe)

Six sixty-six, well written. Well written. Your novel does not have gorgeous language decoration, but it impresses readers with plain and true feelings. The sentences are smooth and coherent. The psychological portrayal and detailed description are very successful, giving people a sense of aftertaste! From a literary point of view, the selection of materials is very novel, the angle is clearly visible, the language is plain yet elegant, and simple. Clean and full of meaning, it can be called a model of modern novels! This novel shows extraordinary literary skills despite its plainness. It can be said that every word is a pearl, and it has reached a height that is elusive for us. From an artistic point of view, this novel still needs to be improved, but its significance is far greater than the success itself. As the saying goes: "- Horse galloping, shooting eagles and drawing bows, the world is in my heart!" It is truly a breath of fresh air in fan fiction! After reading this novel of yours word for word, my heart cannot calm down for a long time! How can there be such a wonderful novel in this world? I can't believe my eyes. Since the reform and opening up, I thought that no novel would ever touch me again, but I didn't expect to see this exquisite novel today. You made me deeply understand the saying "There are people outside the world, there is a world outside the world". After reading the novel, I dare not comment easily. I am worried that my vulgar language will tarnish this rare novel in the world. But I still commented because I felt that if I could not leave my own footprints on such a wonderful novel, it would be a lifelong regret for me. Please forgive my selfishness! No matter how gorgeous the words are, I can't describe the brilliance of this novel, so I just want to say one thing: Please don't stop writing!

What can I say~ The first chapters are not very well written, the plot is flat and the writing is not good, but I still hope you guys will read it, the rest of it is still good.

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All those who think Naruto's childhood was miserable have never read Naruto comics. Apart from being coldly beaten by adults who participated in the Nine-Tails Rebellion, what else could be miserable about Naruto? Pranks tolerated indefinitely? Graffiti prank on Hokage Rock? If this is considered miserable, then what is Kakashi? Who is Sasuke Uchiha? What is Gaara? What do Zabuza, Haku, etc. Mean? Don't judge Naruto's world by reality. Your child goes to the battlefield to kill people at the age of seven? During peacetime in your family, you became a ninja at the age of twelve and started killing people? How could someone who was mentally unable to bear it, such as Hatake Sakumo, commit suicide?

While the male protagonist swore to protect Kushina, the author wrote about the death of the Minato couple. It is true that it can be explained by the lack of strength of the male protagonist, who has not watched Naruto and does not understand the plot. Then there is no need for you, the author, to exaggerate so much family warmth. I wonder if it would have been impossible to write this book without the Kyuubi Rebellion and the death of the Minato couple. Anyway, other fans tried to save a lot but saved the Minato couple. I gave up the book and wished the author would become a god soon.

Here I would like to share my thoughts on watching Naruto. First of all, Naruto was bullied first, and it can be said that it was the entire Konoha Village. Yes, although Sarutobi ordered it to be banned, in the final analysis it is the fault of the entire Konoha. Even if one villager said to Naruto that your father is the Yondaime, it would not have caused Naruto's miserable childhood.

I don't want to say anything more. It's a bunch of garbage. The writing is okay, but it's still garbage. It's my personal opinion. If you don't accept it, come and criticize it. .

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Seeing that Chapter 30 is gone, I won't complain. It just feels very strange. The writing and writing style are okay. The protagonist's personality is slightly problematic but not serious, but it is very uncomfortable to watch (depressed? Aggrieved? Inconsistent?) I don't know how to describe it 😥

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The author's life experience may be a bit lacking, and I feel that the characters are written too lowly in some places, and the plot has obvious bugs Let's start with Fugaku, the leader of the Uchiha clan, a very proud person In the original work, this man was ambitious, turned on the kaleidoscope, and inherited the Uchiha. There is a clear description in the comics that he wanted to find a balance between the village and the clan, and he also persuaded the clan to give up the mutiny However, it doesn't take a day to make a difference. Konoha began to exclude Uchiha from the second generation. After he took over and fought three battles, the relationship between Uchiha and the village was already very subtle. Coupled with the Nine-Tails Rebellion and the Sharingan in the Nine-Tails' eyes, the conflict between Uchiha and the village increased. The situation has reached a point of tense situation. Whether Obito seizes this opportunity well, he can easily provoke the two to the point where they have to take action. In the end, Konoha's distrust and the tribe's stupidity led to the genocide of the Uchiha However, the book clearly points out that Yue caught evidence that Uchiha did not participate in the battle during the night of the Nine-Tails Rebellion, and also provided Konoha with evidence that someone was secretly sowing discord In this case, neither Fugaku nor Sarutobi is a brainless person. As the largest family in Konoha, Uchiha's military power can almost compete with Konoha. As the Hokage, Sarutobi cannot give up such a force And Fugaku, who deeply understands that his family cannot defeat the village, cannot possibly be encouraged by his clan members to go against the village even though he can prove his innocence So the first unreasonable point in this book appears Since Uchiha can prove his innocence, Konoha will not take the initiative to give up such a powerful force, so no matter what kind of deal Danzo reaches with Obito, he will not be able to shake the Hokage's will Even after Sarutobi and Fugaku reached a consensus, Danzo did not dare to attack Shisui behind his back Then the second unreasonable part of this book appears The person who can become the Hokage and the patriarch of the family must not be a fool Will they fall into the trap if someone sows dissension? Unless Sarutobi is controlled by illusion, then Fugaku can only suffer, but is it possible? Impossible! So you tell me how to exterminate the clan? Fugaku and Sarutobi became mentally ill at the same time? Or is Danzo too good at deceiving people? In the original work, genocide is a historical necessity. Because it cannot be adjusted, it will be exterminated. Then the genocide in the book becomes genocide simply because the original work was annihilated. Isn't this feeding flies to the readers?

Naruto is just okay to watch. It has tons of bugs. Kishimoto is a cartoonist who doesn't know much about Naruto. The factory door is full of loopholes. If he really likes Yahiko so much, he can reincarnate himself and exchange Yahiko's life.

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Naruto's older brother, this is the first time I've seen him in this capacity. But the protagonist doesn't understand the plot. The Watergates are definitely dead.

All booked! The scene where Naruto looked at the photo album made my nose sore. A good story can move people and will always support you.

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