A Fallen Hero and a Girl with Animal Ears from Another World

The author is awesome, come on, support 🙂

I cast my hundredth recommendation vote?

Your book is very similar to the game I used to play. . . . Tsk tsk tsk Both girls seem to have the same name. . . I still have the link to the game. . . .

I feel like I have discovered something... One day I was bored and downloaded a game from Bika...

The author still needs to think more about the language. It is best to read it to yourself after writing to make the language more vivid.

Let me say something that may offend: I don't know why, but the beginning looks a bit like... Like... Like... A game I played... Played... 🤤? Also, support the author, come on!

Yeah, yeah, there are only so many people reading such a good book.

Faster

My investment is all used up this month, I feel so sad

This... The audience is very small, and the author's writing is very depressing. I felt aggrieved watching it. If I want to wear a crown, I have to bear its weight. But if your temperament does not match, who will let you wear the crown (personal understanding), and reading novels is supposed to relieve stress... If you just want to write a novel that you want to write, you can ignore what I said above.

This male protagonist is really too cowardly

If a villain represents the Demon King and can only sustain the scene by himself, that would be too much, right? Just because his companion dies, does this kind of life-or-death character deserve it? Isn't this orc slave incident caused by pig feet? You killed the devil and ran away, and then the kingdom thought you were dead. Are you calling me low-key? Is he worthy? This is a coward! Since there is such overwhelming strength and such a dramatic follow-up, the author seems to be too realistic. How on earth can such a cowardly hero survive to defeat the devil?