Zhuge Dali's Overpowered Boyfriend

The original plot is very good, and the character of the male protagonist is also very good, which deserves recognition, but to be honest, I feel that the character of Dali is not right... Dali should not be the kind of normal girl in love. She is quite slow about emotions and has an absolutely rational feeling. It does not mean that she cannot be shy, but her shyness in the book is too ordinary... Not so ordinary as Zhuge Dali, so she is no different from the Mary Sue heroine in other romance novels, and it does not fit with the character. My personal opinion is that I hope this book will get better and better. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.

It's my personal feeling! Chen Nuo can elaborate a little more. As the boss of a listed company, the protagonist can still be outside for six years without absolute controlling rights. When he comes back, the company will be stable. This secretary is absolutely loyal. Don't forget that the boss of a listed company has not been seen for six years. If it takes more than a year, the stock will decline and the directors will make a fuss. The protagonist has been away for so many years. To be honest, Chen Nuo's value has been proven. In this regard, Chen Nuo can also be regarded as a friend! After all, even if you are the author's friend, you can't guarantee that he won't be moved if you put tens of billions in front of him, right? So while Chen Nuo's character remains unchanged, you can change the way you get along with the protagonist, or if your writing is good enough, you can highlight Chen Nuo's difficulties. Although he is a secretary, he has helped you accomplish so much, just like Pepper and Tony. Try not to make the characters so simple and crude. If you are sure, you can try to add a conversation between two people to prove their friendship in turn. Readers will not like the current state. Personal suggestion, the above!

Collect and recommend this chapter to talk about it, etc., Give me more motivation. Now I update it about twice a day, and one chapter is about 3,000. In fact, my coding speed is quite fast. The results are pretty good. The popularity may have something to do with it. I thought someone was collecting it and it scared me. I hope everyone likes it.

，， The consequence of incorporating lines directly into the novel is that there are too many dialogues between the characters, making the whole article look like a running account. But the author's original plot of this book is eye-catching. The overall reading is very smooth, and it still retains the charm of a love apartment, which surprised me. This kind of re-arrangement and re-creation of the character stories that everyone is familiar with (those who read this book should have read Love Apartment) is a very difficult but necessary thing. I hope the author can continue writing, and I will definitely support you. 😁😁✊✊

Seeing it now, it is undeniable that, as the male protagonist said, I seemed to be able to feel the will of the whole world, asking me to get close to that girl. Of course, the male protagonist did not refuse, but tried to accept it. No matter what Hu Yifei said, she is Hu Yifei's number one! Not only Hu Yifei's second best, but also the charm displayed by Zhuge Dali himself will make the male protagonist feel that she is different from other girls. To be fair, there are many girls who are more beautiful than Zhuge Dali and have good figures. Needless to say, why many people still like her is probably because she has light in her eyes, a vast starry sky, and a sea of ​​stars. It is a paradise that the male protagonist has never seen. She is rational, she is sensible, and now, Zhuge Dali is not a straight woman in movies, but a straight woman of steel. She will be jealous, but her jealousy should not be unreasonable. It is her own way of jealousy, just like when she acts coquettishly, it is unique to her. So the male protagonist said, I am testing, I will pamper you to the sky, but Zhuge Dali will not go too far. She knew what she had to do, and it was just right, just like being a human being, and it was pleasing. You should be emotionally attracted to the male protagonist. Sweet love, when the relationship is confirmed. This is when Zhuge Dali's plan to capture was successful.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​The original characters of this book are actually very well drawn. To be honest, I can't tell that it is a novice novel at all. I don't know if the author has written novels or something. The writing style is very good. At least I feel comfortable reading it. After reading novels for so many years, I can still tell which novels can only be read roughly and which novels should be slow. Read slowly and carefully, because only those who can withstand the taste will read slowly, and if the subject matter is interesting but the writing is not good, you can only read it roughly, otherwise it will be too confusing. This is the way I read novels. When I read novels, no matter whether I am a novice or not, as long as the subject matter attracts me, I will definitely read it until I can't stand it I actually quite like this book, but I also understand that I can't continue writing it. This is not the kind of book you want to write. This is inconsistent with your original intention. How can it be written in the right way? Although I have never written a novel, I have thought in my mind that writing a novel should be a story that I wholeheartedly devote myself to, think about and be willing to write, so that I can write a good story, so I support the author to restart the original work The purpose of life is to reduce regrets. I believe that your writing will succeed sooner or later. Don't seek success or fame, just seek no regrets.

In fact, I jumped out of the love apartment. If you only write about the people and things about the love apartment, you won't be able to write about it for long. Two ex-girlfriends, one Chen Nuo, and the unspeakable bond with Hu Yifei brought the book to life and escaped the dead end of the original love apartment. Adding something of their own to the character cores of Zhuge Dali and Hu Yifei makes people feel brighter. Some people complain that the author writes romance, which does not exist. If you look at the title of the book and the character of the male protagonist, you will know that the female protagonist is strong from the beginning to the end. Doesn't writing about the emotions of the supporting characters also enrich the image of the male protagonist? Moreover, it is written that some people even came up with the idea of ​​​​letting the male protagonist have a harem. The portrayal of the supporting characters is not bad. To sum up, there are two roads in the forest, and this book just chooses a road not often taken. People who come here purely for Love Apartment and Zhuge Dali may not like it, but some people who don't usually read fanfiction and accidentally click in will find the highlights of this book. I don't know how this book will end, but I will still praise it for being well written.

I'll open a post to explain, a little bit of character spoiler, and it has nothing to do with the plot. In fact, there is a gap between Dali in the article and Zhang Wei's. This gap comes from the personality gap between Zhang Wei and the protagonist. One is Dali's chosen intern boyfriend. At best, he is very rational, but after screening, he is actually very casual, as if Zhang Wei just passed the exam and has no emotion. The protagonist's character is Dali's ideal goal, just like the theme of the first volume, the encounter between two mountains. Zhuge Dali is also a human being, and he will fall in love at first sight. The heartbeat at the beginning is just a normal human reaction, and Dali is not a normal person. Her special handling method and way of treating love will be reflected later, which is worth looking forward to. Nowadays, boys feel that falling in love is too tiring. It is rare for a girl to be as proactive and independent as Dali, with a rational and good outlook on life. So don't worry, the heroine will be Dali who is more worthy of liking, she just has a little more heartbeat.

The original plot also fits the characters, awesome.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​            Off out of my mind, there are some small parts of the plot that are a bit unreasonable, and the traces of artistic processing are a bit heavy. It's just a little unnatural. But it does look good, and the minor flaws do not affect the brilliance of this book at all. What makes this book different from other iPartment fans is that the protagonist's personal personality is very full and the process of integrating into the apartment is very smooth. And it does not feel limited to the framework of an apartment at all, but expands into the daily lives of various characters, breaking away from the limitations of TV series, and satisfying readers' desire to understand more different aspects of each character's life. Moreover, the author's writing skills are still very good, making it very comfortable to read.       ，，，，，， 😜😜😜Finally, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง