Start with Mashiro Shiina and Win

It seems that the author is going to make this book eunuch. I just want to make a few suggestions, maybe with the benefit of hindsight. The most important point is that this book is so similar to the Life Exchange Game. The author has obtained the approval of Shakuma. Using this same system, I don't think there is any problem. But the innovation in the plot feels a bit lacking. The first one, Mashiro, and even the second one in the real sense is also a stray pet. It makes me feel like I'm watching a remake. Different people will have different choices under the same system. Furthermore, I have watched the anime The Pet Girls of Sakurasou three times, read the novel, and played the game. So I feel that the author may not have done a good job in describing the character of Mashiro Shona. There is also the mutual dependence and conflict between Rita and Mashiro. The conflict between these two people was resolved by the male protagonist in an almost training way, which I thought was quite ridiculous. In the original work, Kamoda Shichi's portrayal of the contradictions in the characters is very realistic and outstanding. On the surface, she is an incredible young lady who lives in the incredible Sakurasou. But Kamoda Shi put fairy tales into reality, and various contradictions emerged and were resolved. There is also the characterization of the characters. Other supporting characters, including the main character, felt like they all had one-dimensional personalities. Humans should be quite complex creatures, right? It's not something rigid like a character. Of course, I really like this kind of plot with a main line in the lighthearted ridicule. At the same time, I really hope that the author can take it to the next level. But! I think the author must not be a eunuch! Even if it is given a very hasty ending, it must have a beginning and an end. All in all, I look forward to the author's new work.

Why is your profile so sexy?

I'll just leave it here. I will still be a eunuch when I write the next book.

My wife Yuno died like this? I'm also looking forward to what will happen next.

Emmm, I won't give you any rewards now, I'll wait until you confirm where to sign the contract.

Sure enough,,,,, eunuchs only have 0 and countless times,,,,

I've been fooled by you, I'll never touch your books again

Quick! ! ! !

8 Tickets per day. Zhenbai praised it. You must write it down.

Every book is either a mess or a eunuch

When I first arrived, I saw TJ's declaration? ! What are the situations promoted on the starting day?

It seems that you have three books. If you have cut off all three books, you are really in charge.

I don't dare to read it until I finish it. Who knows when the chief chamberlain will come to the palace?

People live just for Shiina Mashiro

I'm just busy with my studies, haven't I read a book in a few months? Why are you gone when I come back? Author, the book came here early in the morning, why is this one gone? Oh my god, my mentality has collapsed 😭😭😭

Fortunately, the author's performance is not good now. There are not many people and the works are not signed. We don't pay for the author's eunuch, so he is just a eunuch. If the author's performance is a little better and he signs a contract, and we subscribe, if the author is still a eunuch, I guarantee that the author will be scolded like a dog 🤫🤫🤫

It's a pity that I just came here and the book is already cold.

What a eunuch again? How many eunuch books do you have? I lost

Dead eunuch😡

Women's clothing! Women's clothing! Women's clothing! ! !

Let the author open a small account. Don't write with this number

Does the author no longer write books? I read your book a long time ago

👿👿👿 You are a pigeon. . . . . . Dove again. . . . . Waiting for your new book. . . I'll wait for you. . .

I'm still waiting for your follow-up development.

Alas, it's been a year😒

Ah ah ah, give me an update if you're still alive