It Turns Out to Be Heian Kyo

It's so well written, why don't I have such writing style?😥

It's very well written. I've read it twice. I feel like I'm reading "The Tale of Genji". The writing is clean, not draggy, not boring... So please hurry up and update more (￣∇￣)

Basically, the writing style is passable, but there are still many flaws. The background of the text is ancient Japan, so in addition to the protagonist, the way of speaking needs to be careful to avoid too modern words. In addition, the novel is not a comic, and some scenes that are obviously inappropriate are redundant (for example, in the third chapter, the protagonist was so shocked that his face was drooling, and it would be better even if he swallowed the saliva)

The protagonist feels so silly to me. Even if he has just traveled through time, don't normal people first familiarize themselves with everything around them? Just like the knowledge of Onmyoji, if you don't know it before, you won't understand it. What are books used for? It's a bit unacceptable for the protagonist to be so salty all the time.

The protagonist's character is too soft. . . And the Holy Mother

I feel so embarrassed that I already have cancer. Was the protagonist around 13 years old before the time travel? Let's be honest, he went to elementary school. If not, then it should be that Nao Kuo got brain cancer when he traveled through time. He is really too childish.

Hey, no, I can't stand it anymore! It's not considered poisonous. But I just feel that the protagonist is too stupid and has a bit of Mary disease.

Have you traveled through time and become a weak person? Behavior is very abnormal

You have come to the wrong section. You should go to the light novel section, fantasy cool videos. If you read light novels, your collection will definitely increase dramatically. Maybe it will be level 5.

Starting with 4,000+ updates per day. So difficult QAQ

Hhh（hhh）       ，       ，， Every world has its own values, and many things cannot be changed by one person's efforts. As for what everyone said about the protagonist's IQ problem, hhhh, it may be because my writing is too weak, hhh. (After all, it's my first time to write a book, so I'm really not sure.) In my opinion, Jhiji Ono suddenly came to a completely unfamiliar world. Anyone's first reaction should be to hide themselves, slowly figure out the world, and survive! Live according to the "him" that people are familiar with, rather than suddenly becoming maverick and starting to show how different you are. Because once his identity as a time traveler is revealed, death is the only thing waiting for him. Actually, specifically, I don't know why many people say that IQ is not online. So I would like to ask everyone to tell me if they have any complaints. It is best to give some examples so that I can modify it. Finally, thank you all for reading this book. Each of your opinions is the motivation for me to move forward! I love you (⑉• •⑉)‥♡

On the surface, it looks like a Heian Kyo fanfic In fact, the content has its own values ​​and settings, as well as its own innovations. This way readers who don't know Heian Kyo can read on. The plot connection is also good, nothing is too blunt. There is too little content at the moment, so I am very curious about the follow-up development. Come on! Awesome!

It feels a bit like the Holy Mother. My hands were just a little stiff, so I started to worry about them. Isn't this just worrying about eating carrot eggs?

I really like the world you wrote. But I hate NetEase's money-making attitude and its ugly appearance.

Crazy call🤭🤭

The protagonist feels like his IQ is not online. Although Haohan is a time traveler, he must not be so naive. He still has a system and is afraid of ghosts.

The protagonist's character and IQ are not quite up to par. It doesn't feel like a time traveler. It's more like his own memory loss combined with some of the game memories of the time travellers. By the way, were they both disabled when they were fighting for their souls?🤔🤔

It feels like the main character is too stupid and doesn't know anything. If you say it's a civilian, that's nothing. But you have to know that you are a member of the family system, no matter how much you think, you can't know everything.