The Truth of Spellcraft

Here are the rules for time travel. As long as you reply 666 below, you can time travel. There are still tens of thousands of places available this year, and you will get various cheats such as attribute panels, AFK systems, exchange shops, etc. For time travel, on a first-come, first-served basis. There is no middleman to make a profit, you just make money when you sign the contract!

Heroine Ⅹ Thigh dad√

Thousands of years ago, you were my admirer and I was your evangelist. Thousands of years later, I am your admirer, and you are my guide. In the broken and blurred memory, the indelible figure is hidden in the light and shadow of time. I am willing to use everything to make you safe, I am also willing to give up everything to find your lost traces. "I will come back, at the node where we will eventually meet." "You will wait, in the vastness of time and space."

1. It's understandable that there are many settings, but the rules have been added, but the plot has not been written much. In the end, the rule eunuch was completed. All the pitfalls have been filled, and there is no follow-up plot. I am very speechless. 2. I didn't understand why the author talked about writing more female characters but the protagonist had to be a man. After seeing it, I understood that it was to open a harem. But to be honest, if you want to have a harem, then you should write a love line! If I don't want to watch a beautiful girl poke her eyes out and follow the loser protagonist, shouldn't I withdraw it earlier? 3. The protagonist is strong because he is hanging on the wall, not because he really has any strength. Without those plug-ins, he is just a passerby who may not even have a name. 4. It is basically a data article. The plot that should be included in the later period has not been written, so the main plot can be omitted. There is nothing in the fighting process, it is just calculation. If you don't want to see the calculation, you can just omit it. The characters are not very fleshed out. There is only one real supporting role, Antinoya. After the others appear, you can treat them as passers-by with names. What do you want me to say about advantages? The main plot is quite interesting despite the fact that the author did not write it in detail later. In fact, the most disgusting thing for me is that the author made the male protagonist seem quite normal in the early stage, but in the later stage, he was not satisfied with the secret LSP and pretended to be a human being. There is just one word to describe this character: hypocrite. I am speechless. I saw the comments on the previous chapters and I didn't give up. I saw the comments on the later chapters and I still didn't give up. I've finished reading it, and I've finished reading the extras, so I'm here to write a lightning protection complaint. What made me insist on watching it was just because I wanted to see the later plot, but it took so long to prepare for it, and then that was it. It's my fault that I'm still too young. I will definitely read the catalog first and then carefully appreciate the comments made by my seniors. 🙏

Novel that advocates knowledge and pursues truth eventually reaches the end of Cthulhu, which makes me feel very regretful. The essence of Cthulhu is agnostic, and it does not admit that humans can transform things that are originally unrecognized into things that can be recognized through practice. Agnosticism is so prevalent that all the creations dedicated by the scientific pioneers of past generations seem to have become a joke. The Cthulhu system constructed with adjectives such as absolute, total, crazy, and twisted, does not know which side of modern people's hearts are shown. Is it because I am escaping from the reality of my own incompetence? "It's not that I am not capable enough, but that this thing cannot be understood." With such a reason, the inner shame seems to have been reduced a lot!

Although I have never played DND (I only found out about it after reading book reviews) and similar games, because I like game writing, I was fascinated by it in the early stage. But the more I read later, the more strange it became. Settings, settings, settings. 80% Of a chapter is settings, 5% is punctuation, and 10% is punctuation. 5 Is the name of the character, and the rest is the plot. After seeing more than 300 chapters and not traveling through time, I thought that I would write one or two thousand chapters, but it turned out that it was finished with only more than 600 chapters. I looked through the book reviews and it turned out to be a eunuch. I spent dozens of yuan to read a bunch of DND rule books. The author's content was almost 0, and Shennong had been killed in battle.

The selling point of this book should be "human beings around the world are in trouble in another world, and the protagonist comes to the rescue and shows off"! The early stages of this book are good. The protagonist relies on the knowledge of his past life to continuously accumulate strength, and he is miles ahead of other ordinary players! Actively prepare to save the world, making readers look forward to it! But after the time travel, it kept falling apart. It had been accumulated for so long in the early stage but there was no big achievement. The plot does not focus on how people on earth adapt to life in other worlds and rebuild order. On the contrary, the protagonist is running around inexplicably, and the plot jumps around! The protagonist does not look like the leader of a force at all, but more like a lone ranger. If you want to be Merlin, then at least train a King Arthur! So after time travel, many readers are no longer interested in pursuing it! This book is also a mess!

I hope the author pays attention to the plot with the players, it always feels a bit inconsistent. Second, foreign countries should be brought in. It is a global journey in itself, so where does the prejudice and suppression come from? It's too petty, half a year is too exaggerated

Character Building If readers want to DIY their own characters, they can leave a comment below. Name: id (Earth is casual, Arthur's name must be formal, both East and West are acceptable) Category: Arthur/Earth Professions: Warrior, Mage, Priest, Druid, Rogue (Rogue), Ranger (Ranger), Monk, Warlock, Paladin, Wild Barbarian, bard Gender: Required Level: Optional Character: Optional Characteristics: Optional Ability: Optional Plot requirements: Optional Optional means you can make the decision yourself, if not, I will make arrangements. Fill it in as you like, you don't have to follow the format, just type a paragraph. Create freely and as you please, don't ask me if it's okay, just write it. Don't worry, I will try my best to arrange it once it's written, but the plot hasn't come yet.

Why do you have to rush to throw out all the settings? 20 Chapters are all settings. It's not finished yet. I don't know how many chapters it will take to get through it. I always talk about the future, one mouthful of future, one chapter of water and one chapter of settings. I came over to look at the settings. Damn, I'll take a look if I have the time. Chronicles of Warcraft doesn't work, I don't understand why it can't be expanded bit by bit, and then slowly add settings bit by bit, as if it can't be added in the future, madly add settings, shape the world view, can't the protagonist complete the settings during the adventure? The free chapters that should attract readers most should be used to adjust the settings. The key is, can readers buy it? No matter what grand plans you have later, what excellent outlines, or even exquisite plots, you can't retain readers. What do you plan to do to retain them? What are your settings? Let's talk about future development. In my eyes, these are not as good as letting the protagonist truly master a skill, so that we can truly understand what magic is through your writing, instead of just telling stories like crazy, talking about how many levels, how many levels of magic, how many batches, what's the use, what's the use? You just say, what we bring in is the protagonist, not the chronicle. Your narration is a thousand words, which is not as good as the protagonist's own experience. When we read the book, we feel like we are reading the narration and settings. Who are you making things difficult for by writing so many things? If you have enough writing skills, you should work more on the storyline instead of torturing the setting all day long. My personal opinion, I can't say it's a suggestion, but I hope you can take a good look