Coffin into the Wilderness

With the coffin at home, I can only read all about it! Nice writing, keep it up (ง •̀_•́)ง!

It's not bad. I hope the author can increase his writing style while maintaining the same level of writing. Already invested!

What the hell are you writing, with a great name?

It's pretty and pretty, just my type! Big cheers for the author!

The science fiction novel "One Stone, Five Birds" is here for you!

Maybe it's because the writing is really bad! No one is reading it, but Qiwu is still here to thank all the book friends who came to read it. If there are any shortcomings, please criticize! After all, Qi Wu is now trapped in a strange circle, and the authorities are confused. Please wake up more! Sincerely hope for more criticism! Thanks again! ! !

If you just write "The Tea Ceremony of the Ancient World", it won't be finished. There is no need to delete the previous ones directly. . .

Update soon. Very well written. Wait

Leaders of Tongtian Cult and so on. It can certainly exist in the past, present and future. You must be able to know the protagonist. Unless the protagonist carries a secret agent to cover it up. Otherwise, the protagonist will be a tool in the future catastrophe. Fight for hegemony over the world. Fight for hegemony over the world. What is the purpose of cultivating immortality? The picture is of a long mountain, and the picture is of eternity. Immortal and invincible. Pursue your own passion. What is Tao? It's fair to say, but it's all bullshit. I think so. Bells and whistles. Assume this is just a false story. Everything in it was compiled by me, and everything in it was compiled by me. The Tao thought here is just what you think. There is no Tao at all. This is what I want to do, so I do it. Not at all.

I'm here to comment. In fact, the novels you wrote are much better than mine. My comments are not very pertinent. If I were to criticize, I would probably be said that my writing is worse (face covering), So I will talk about it. I wrote these based on the Chinese mythology system. Most of them are about the city and the fairy world, and then make profits twice. There are few novels with serious participation, and the subject matter is very novel. But writing it is difficult. The main difficulty is that people will criticize it, because those myths are all fixed, and the author will be criticized if he does not take good care of it. Therefore, he should read the classics extensively, so that if someone makes a mistake, he can say back: What I wrote is well-founded.

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This is the first time I have seen such a novel. The plot settings are quite novel. The writing is not too problematic, it is considered excellent. I haven't seen it yet, let's talk about the previous comments. There is no problem in bringing in the previous plot, and the setting is also attractive. I just want to mention that I may have missed it because I read it quickly. Your settings at the beginning are a bit too abrupt. You didn't explain some settings very well, and you didn't express them one-sidedly. If readers don't bring in the settings in the author's mind, they usually don't know what you are talking about. If the term "setting" suddenly appears, they will be confused and think that they have missed it. Then, the protagonist's state of mind becomes a little blurry, that is, what kind of person the protagonist is and where his survival indicators are. Then the world view is not too clear. But fortunately, your article is quite easy to understand, and the things you substituted are also things from Chinese mythology, so there is no big problem. The overall feeling is quite good. Come on.

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Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

There is no problem with imagination, but how do you put it? You should also pay attention to civility when writing. If it is not to express emotions, there is no need to use swear words.

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Eunuch author? ? ? Eunuch, let me tell you a little bit about this.