Return Sword

As a bookworm who has been reading novels for 14 years, I have been pursuing immortal literature since my journey to Piaomiao. What I like most are novels that transcend ordinary people and break through myself. The first few dozen chapters of your book, yysy, are really well written. The protagonist is very good at portraying the protagonist who is not good at words but has a delicate mind, is tough, and is calm and calm before the overall situation. However, after entering the sect, his personality started to change. A child who grew up in a bandit den became at a loss in how to deal with the world. It conflicts with the previous characters. I think this is not worth it. Some people may want to say, do you have to be the kind of person who treats human life as trivial if you want to practice immortality? If you don't have any humanity at all, what kind of immortality is there? Let me answer your question head-on. There is no conflict between cultivating immortality and maintaining humanity. This is handled very well in Jian Lai and Bai Xin Xun Tian. When facing mortals, you can use some extraordinary means and scheming to solve the problem without harming them. However, in order to promote the plot, you force the protagonist to blush and be speechless in front of mortals, and that's it. You even have to do it secretly, which is what many people mentioned in the comments. Therefore, what is important is not human nature and immortality. It is not that cultivating immortals means cutting off the seven emotions and six desires. In the final analysis, the author did not do a good job in arranging the plot and handling the character of the protagonist. The behavior of the protagonist is considered too cowardly by many readers. Finally, I hope that the author can learn more from the processing methods of some excellent works. Details determine success or failure. Only when the details are handled well will more readers buy it. Wish you better and better

I finally found a good book! It's not easy to find such a chivalrous book in the current Qidian atmosphere! Congratulations on the successful signing! Watch until the clouds open and the moon shines!

After becoming a spiritual master, I finally started to get a little bit into the meaning of sword cultivation. Although the writing is a bit immature and the climax can never be repeated (every time I reach the climax, I can't always reach the highest point), but the overall readability is very good, the writing is excellent, and the characterization is remarkable. It is really a good book hidden deep in the sea of ​​​​Qidian books!

Although I don't have more than 100 chapters. I don't know what the protagonist's character in this book has to do with the introduction. The early stages of the book are good, but after experiencing so many lives and deaths, why is the protagonist still so childish, virginal, and idiotic?

It's a pity that the first few dozen pictures are okay. What is written in the back is incomprehensible. It's not that the writing is not good. I feel that starting from the place where I killed someone or something, there are a lot of logical illogicalities. The logical illogicalities can be covered up if you write more comfortably. But no, let's not talk about the small places in the back, especially the mines. It's too imprudent for two people in the foundation-building stage to plan a major event for so many years. You have even killed a colleague in the foundation-building stage. Are you still afraid of killing another Qi practitioner who will kill you casually? And you don't dare to go back and look. It's about being afraid of powerful people. Even if there are powerful people, they will kill you for no reason? Moreover, the protagonist and his party could not guess that it was these two who were causing such outrageous things. You are the ones in charge of killing ghosts here. Let's not talk about the sudden formation failure. When it failed, I didn't even see the two of you. Isn't it just saying, "We did it, we did it." ? In order to make the protagonist leave, Taiyima forced it. Let's not talk about the spider. A person who wanted to kill you just a second ago, just because she is too pitiful or insane, forget it. You are justified in saying that keeping this spider is useful, but it is useless. Just because she was pitiful, you let go of the person who almost killed you a second ago. Let her go. Stop writing, you should be a screenwriter for Naughty Dog. There is also the plot of threatening the owner of the territory. I am the same, bah, not to mention the lawless environment of this interface. You, a person who has lived for so long and established a power in such a dark place, still treat the protagonist with a friendly attitude towards a person who threatens you to live in peace. Moreover, when the protagonist refused the marriage, they have only known each other for a few days. If you trust the protagonist so much, you are so silly and sweet, so you are the heroine. Moreover, you have been unable to kill the protagonist for so many years, and you have found so many people to kill spiders. Isn't it simple for you to find a few people to kill the protagonist? Is the protagonist your mistress? It doesn't bring you any benefit. Just because he has something in his hand that threatens you, you can develop peacefully with him. As a normal person, if someone threatens you with something, you would probably find a few people to kill them. To be able to establish such a big force, with your IQ, there must be many men out there. I haven't read it later, so I won't comment on it, above. The author should put more thought into the plot.

Call Shennong! What's going on? From the perspective of passers-by, is it fairy food or slightly poisonous?

Shen Nong is dead, a poisonous man is on his way! It's too poisonous. Let's change the name to "Wimpy Cultivation of Immortality"

I suggest you learn from the pre-processing and writing style of Shi Fang Wu Sheng. The writing is messy, and some places can be brushed off in one stroke. For example, you have to deliberately emphasize the qualifications of the protagonist, and then silently write something extraordinary. Ordinary people are poor and have not learned the essence. They do not rely on adventures and treasures to support their writing, but on their cautious nature, think twice about everything, and act with encouragement. Instead, you use a lot of writing to highlight the excellence of others, and then you raise your hand to the protagonist and look high on it. It's fine if you put it in Sha Giao Wen. But if you put it in your style of writing, you only need to adjust it once. If you adjust it too much, it will become a mess.

Shennongliu: The immortal cultivator was oppressed by the gangsters in the village and had no choice but to perform the spiritual victory method, and died of poisoning.

The introduction and the content are two different things. I didn't see a sword for a sword, I only saw the villain killing the protagonist without dying. Not only did the protagonist not take revenge, but he also took the initiative to be the villain's dog. He was still a dog for free, so cheap! ! !

A person who is being chased by the top forces actually wants to cultivate steadily and doesn't run away when he is discovered. It seems that the top forces are no longer top.

I wanted to quit after reading more than 80 chapters. It was not to my liking. The front one can absorb the Yin spirit's transformation mana and still accept it. The rear one can directly generate it or directly initiate it without any need for self-penetration and practice. If there is danger when you go out to play in the wild, you will also receive an active early warning. The protagonist exists like a tool, and if he had a pig, he would probably become an immortal.

Shen Nong has already tested the poison. The first thirty chapters are very novel and amazing, but the following chapters are full of ancient routines, both zombies and dragons. I'm not a swordsman, don't be fooled by the name. Basically, a poor family was suppressed and turned into a demon.

It's extremely toxic. I deserve such bad grades. It's a waste of my time.

A good cultivation article. If the author is just starting out, it is simply above the standard. The logic is also strict, and the description of the exercises in the article takes up a lot of space. Although it is all nonsense, there are no obvious flaws. If I have to pick a nitpick, it's just that it's a bit less refreshing. It's not as exciting as a novel, but a compact plot that creates events and big scenes, but it doesn't affect my emotions as much as Pig's Feet's daily words, deeds, and choices. It is the so-called description of human nature. But it's not like spilling blood. I don't know what to say, so I'll just say it.

It's poisonous. Rice ears grow on arbor trees. The cultivators of the sect managed the spiritual field and removed the bone piles but were contradicted by mortals. They didn't teach the evildoers a lesson. They finally compromised. The writing is not bad. This realm of cultivation is a bit poisonous. Spirit disciples, spiritual masters, spiritual masters, levels 1 to 12, it just makes it feel like fantasy.

I feel that there is something wrong with the protagonist. He has no obvious rules of conduct. People drive him away like a dog. He also laughs and laughs with his mortal enemy Long Ting, looking like a good old man. How awkward!

I'm a bit confused as to what the title of the book has to do with it, and I feel like the whole plot doesn't flow together.

It's a boring book. It's bland and not very exciting. It doesn't have the indifference of classical immortality. It doesn't fit the title. I still don't know what to write. From the beginning when I was hunted down until now, the supporting characters are almost all women. Women all have a crush on her. It seems that apart from love, there is no brotherhood. Good brothers last a lifetime and only a few friends. It's so tiring to read.

The writing is quite good and the details are well described! It heats slowly, add more oil (✪▽✪)

I feel that the author pays too much attention to the writing style and neglects the plot. The plot is dull and the characters are bland. No matter how good the writing is, it is difficult to attract people to read. Why do so many cool articles have good grades even though their writing skills are not good? It's because they can write plots, create characters, and know how to stimulate readers' interest in reading.

It's very bland, very plain water. It seems like I'm either reading a novel, or even the classics have more story-telling than yours. It's really outrageous. Every time I read a paragraph, it seemed to challenge my patience. To use an exaggeration, every time I read a chapter, the veins on my brain bulged. It's so outrageous that it makes me even more upset when I write in my diary. . . . . The author really has a problem with his technique and the story, it's too bland. If writing is compared to painting, those junk novels are like ghost drawings, and the hands are stained with ink when painting. Author, your novel is like tap water in an ink sac.

I read this novel for me. Slap yourself a few times and waste your time. Bland and tasteless. Like tasteless.

The writing is very good, and I read it specifically for the author♥️It has the feel of classical martial arts that I love to watch. Because I couldn't wait for the book to be updated, I casually read other immortality novels on the ranking list. Although the plot was okay, the details were really hard to describe. The protagonist could only sneer and sneer at every situation. This book is much better than those that only pursue plot without details. Tiger 🐯 keep up the good work

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It's really disgusting to mention ancient mythology in this article. If you're not from one world, don't mention the mythical characters from another world, okay?

The writing is okay. The story is just bad

Fighting monsters and upgrading, writing a game-type novel

Hahaha, hahaha, hahaha

The author is seriously irresponsible! His cultivation has not reached the top level, he has no wife, and no children. What about below? No more...