Yukinoshita Wants Me to Confess

The writing is really good, but there are too few basic fans, but fans are gradually accumulated. I hope the author will persevere and I will always support you!!

Originally, it was written as a daily series that I couldn't understand. The plot was too big, with hammers and sticks here and there, without any sense of detail.

Come on, author, there are no comprehensive comics at the starting point 🙂🙂

The second chapter makes people lose motivation to read on. There is a little bit of poison in the story.

I'm almost finished reading it. First of all, this is a good youth daily anime fan novel with online characterization. However, the pain of being born in the apocalyptic world all the time is very annoying. I didn't want to read it for a while (I wanted to give up the first time I mentioned it). There is no depression in the introduction, and the previous chapters are not depressed. It suddenly comes out so disturbing. Then there are the few chapters I just read. I reunited with my wife and was in a bad mood and went out for a run. I didn't read other people's messages but my phone was crushed by my wife's car. My wife wanted to see the protagonist but deliberately couldn't see it. Due to various coincidences (I said I didn't write about the scene where I happened to be taking a shower because it was too deliberate, but in the end I wanted to think of more deliberate plots), my blood pressure increased. Among the youth daily anime fanfics I have read + found, this one is probably in the top 20 in my mind (5-20 in no particular order). I like something a little more relaxed, and everyone probably has their own hobbies. The main thing is the introduction and the tone of the beginning of this book, which suddenly comes to me.

Harem or stock trading? I won't watch the stock market, what's the point?

It was a super mixed bag. The only wife who was on base had amnesia. The key protagonist did not take the initiative to see her except for a phone call. I felt unworthy for my wife. The further we go, the more I feel like the protagonist is a walking zombie without a soul. He clearly knows the information that Sao can kill people, but he continues to play with Erina heartlessly, and the time is also messed up. I really like this kind of harem-themed variety show, but I can't watch it anymore even if I watch it without thinking, so it was removed from the shelves.

It's as long as Yukinoshita's mother, it's smelly, long, and has a very poor viewing experience. It's a running story with dozens of chapters, but no one criticized it? Did the author control the review? There is a saying that I will not open this book whenever someone mentions it. What the author writes is based on the defense.

Wedding Dress Yukinoshita

If you haven't recharged the small account, please support the author by switching to a larger account. As a new author, the author's writing style is really good. However, the emotional lines and progress of each heroine's affection make me a little worried about how the author will write in the future. At present, it seems that a harem is definitely needed, otherwise I will be scolded even worse for being irresponsible with so many female characters. The author can read more books of the same type to learn how to deal with emotional lines, and don't hesitate when it's time to recommend. After all, if there are many female protagonists who are hesitant, they will easily be scolded and the book will be abandoned. I personally will point out typos when I see them, but other readers won't point them out as much 😂. Then, for new authors, it may be difficult in the early stage, but please don't be like eunuchs. Eunuchs are bad for their character and fans. The first part is finished, and I can at least accumulate some fans, and the subsequent books will be smoother. Come on, author, may the fire be great

I am a person who keeps my promises. 19-Year cosplay of women in black skirts and glazed pictures (I am a male)

First of all, the protagonist is really unattractive. I don't hate the slightly wretched protagonist. I really like Sato Kazuma and the Milk Dragon Emperor, but I feel that this protagonist is not well-developed at all and is a bit awkward. 5 main female characters appear in Chapter 6? Moreover, the original plot is really awkward. There is no comparison between the characters of the protagonist and the great teacher. Do you want to replace them? Do you want the fluorescence of rotten grass to compare with the bright moon in the sky? The charm of spring things lies in the great teacher, how could the core character be deleted 🙂

The protagonist of the time traveler had no friends before time travel, and without friends, he didn't know anything about the second dimension. Qiongmei didn't know, Chunwu didn't know, and Sword Art Online didn't know either (all of them appear or have appeared in the article). I haven't paid attention to the second dimension, but I should have heard something about it. Is he an old man?

Has anyone really been watching? I have already picked out a villa area. In some places, they were forced to pretend, which was a big shock. 🙂 The poison occurred in Chapter 40.

After reading a few chapters, I found it to be of the same quality as those legendary web games. What a refreshing Akaashi!

The author has mixed up too many animes. Isn't it confusing to write so many? Personally, I think the two worlds of Harmono and Passerby are enough, or you can just concentrate on writing one world. Like the hodgepodge now, you almost have the characteristics of those authors who rush to the street. The reason why some other hodgepodge authors don't jump is just because of their strong writing skills, otherwise they would have to fight.

Very Poisonous, I thought it was a daily love story, but unexpectedly it suddenly popped up and I traveled to the end of the world to fight monsters.

This episode of amnesia is really outrageous

This and the plot of the wife's copy directly made me have no expectations for the subsequent plot.

It's such an embarrassing character design. Can you please stop emphasizing the original person's emotions and feelings? The character falls apart too easily, brother! You can slowly write a withdrawn character into a sunny and cheerful character. There is no need to be punched by Hiratsuka Shizuka in the early stage and spit out sour water. The next sentence is to praise others for being cute... I feel like vomiting... Go write Tomato, there will be more people to criticize you.

Don't say anything else. As long as you accept your wife, I will send you my black stockings. I will do what I say and you can put it on the top.

After reading ten chapters, let me share my personal opinion First of all, it is a relatively big problem. There are endless typos and incorrect sentences. It is recommended that the author check the chapters he has written before updating. Readers may help you correct one, two or three mistakes, but when the mistakes reach six or seven in a chapter, a large number of readers will only be persuaded to leave Then there is the problem of the female characters in the book. I would like to ask if the heroine has four female characters, Qin, Yui, Miura, and Shizuka Hiratsuka, because I have not seen their character cards. If they are not the heroine, what are you doing, teasing and creating plot? What's the point? If the heroine is not the heroine, this is a super poisonous point Then there is the problem of the character of the protagonist. The protagonist has nothing special and his personality is not likeable. The protagonist does not have a clear goal. What is going on? As a protagonist, it doesn't matter how good the character is, but the goal must be clear. Whether you want to become stronger, flirt with girls, or fish, whether this goal can be achieved, or whether this goal will change, there must be such a reason And your protagonist here has no main line at all, no A little initiative, let's talk about studying, the protagonist is not working very seriously, let's talk about picking up girls, the protagonist has no idea of ​​paying, and I don't know what will happen next, but this is something that needs to be explained clearly in the early stage In short, that's it for now, I will continue to pay attention to this book, and hope that the author can correct the shortcomings in the future, and the more he writes, the better.

After reading a little bit, I always feel that the author wants to sew up every element (not just the characters). In my humble opinion, the description of daily love life should be as detailed as possible, instead of piling a large number of classic storylines on top.

The more I read, the more boring I became. After a third of the way, I couldn't stand it anymore and skipped to the ending. This novel is not worth reading for free, and does anyone really like this kind of protagonist? What a waste of money

No Asuna? ? ? Writing about SAO without Asuna? What is this? Then the scene where the protagonist gives medicine to Yukino... Another way to write it is to lick your face and take money to support a poor person who needs the money. However, you are questioned about wanting to support yourself. At the same time, it turns out that you are not supporting yourself. After the money is spent, you have to find out whether the money is legal...? What a mess😅 Author Is your protagonist a dog-licker?

Rubbish novel😒wasting my time

It's a super hodgepodge, all put together, right? The novel is too jumpy, and the author has no ideas of his own. It's just pure copying, right?

Brother, I don't ask too much from you. Even if you come up with an outline assembly line, just fill in the holes.

I'm tired of watching it. The main character is too angry and young.

When will the new book or extras be released?