Hang up at the End of the World

It's my favorite type, cultivating immortals at the end of the world, and it's different from the routine. It is said that the protagonist will eventually become an immortal. The cute girl currently appearing is also very cute. The protagonist seems to be a beautiful boy, he is so immersive 👍 I looked for a picture, it seems like this? Then there's that female friend, maybe like this?

Do women in the apocalypse still dare to dress up? 😁... Stunning? ?

It was a little depressing to watch, and the plot felt a bit draggy.

Do you want to cultivate yourself when you read the introduction?

The subject matter is good, but two lolita persuaded me to quit. What about you?

Good book, but the update speed is slow (○ﾟεﾟ○)

Does the author like cute little girls? There are a lot of descriptions of this aspect in the article 😏, but I feel tired after reading too much. I suggest the author describe more in the apocalyptic world and not focus on the supporting actresses.

It seems that you can only hang up and practice until the foundation building stage.

When I came across this novel, the heroine persuaded me to quit, because the protagonist is only at level one. If she can survive and get out of the foggy city, she doesn't necessarily have to bring a bottle of oil with her. I really admire it.

I originally wanted to watch the apocalypse, but you are a supernatural being wearing the skin of the apocalypse.

Haha

The certain thoughts described by the author in the book are already poisonous. If you write more, it will be considered an evil book. It is recommended not to write about the soul. It is nothing, but what you write is well-founded. The description is too detailed and can easily teach immature young people.

Come on＾0＾~Write the ticket carefully and you will get it

Author, I suggest you take a look at how great masters describe scenes, character actions, and psychological dynamics. You have learned so verbosely and in detail. Why would you write some things that are completely unnecessary, such as the paragraph about drinking hot water at the beginning of the chapter, or the paragraph about getting up and washing up? I know you want to express the scene in your heart, but you have to do a good job of subtraction and get rid of useless things.

I was persuaded to quit by the emotional drama, and the dialogue environment is very stiff. If you don't know how to write, you don't have to write it. You don't have to humiliate yourself and write more about fighting. Now Qidian book friends can basically accept no heroine.

"By yourself, we can go to the end of our lives together." They all plan to die alone. Just don't write jokes about having sex with a certain woman, it's really annoying to watch.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

If you're busy, just cut it. You'll lose your appetite and be speechless.

I just added the bookshelf this morning. Are you going to eunuch it tonight? ? ? ? ? ?

The name of the girl in white dress is Le Yiling?

It doesn't have the flavor of the previous chapters. The writing in the previous chapters was okay but there were a lot of useless emotional scenes in the middle. It didn't seem to be exciting but also awkward. It would be nice if there were less weird plots, this is the world of fog beasts after all. It's very poisonous to see the forced joining of an organization and forced tasks to be given later. The protagonist is already the highest level in the area and is forced to join. Immortal cultivators themselves yearn for freedom. The more I write about it, the less interesting it becomes. Post-apocalyptic novels need to write more about the surrounding environment to have a sense of the surrounding environment. There are still some minor problems. The description of neither sad nor happy seems awkward. Generally speaking, as a newcomer, the writing is good and it is inevitable that there are some toxic points. Come on, it is best to change the introduction and cover. Others generally have no idea of ​​​​clicking in after seeing the introduction on the cover.

Goodbye, brother🤝. It's really hard to wait

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