Return to the Apocalypse from the Game

You wrote this dialogue too hastily! I'm used to watery ones, but I'm not used to yours. The inner monologue is too fast, you can adjust the expression, otherwise it will look very stiff.

It is better to divide a sentence into more paragraphs. The loading method on the mobile phone is different from the format of the author assistant on the computer.

I can't understand the author's thoughts. He wrote it too naively. I probably just wrote it after thinking about it a few times in my mind.