Extreme Martial Arts

When I first read the first chapter, I always felt that the protagonist's reaction when he got the golden finger was too calm. Maybe it's because the author didn't go into too much detail on this aspect, and he got to the point quickly. Then I continued to read and felt that the author was too rigid in promoting the plot. The male protagonist's eldest brother died... Is this the reaction? There are only a few sentences to describe this small circle, and even the male protagonist's revengeful mentality is only one paragraph... This is really too fast! Writing like this makes me worry that in the future I will write wherever I think of it, and just push a plot as soon as I think of it. Is there too little foreshadowing in this regard? About the male protagonist's improvement in strength. The author describes an atmosphere of arrogance and domineering, and the care of villains. Some people knock on the door, and some people cause trouble... And in a world like this, the male protagonist's cultivation level has skyrocketed... Won't people kill people and seize treasures? There are also those common routines. There may be many articles that are simply skipped like this, but for readers like me who read them carefully and want to build a worldview, this is not possible. About the image of the male protagonist. I feel that there is nothing special about the protagonist written by the author, and the character language is too confusing. One moment "said awkwardly" One moment "kicked the younger brother" One moment "laughed up to the sky" And "said lightly"... Maybe the author wanted to express the expression and atmosphere of each situation in detail, but this cannot establish the image characteristics of the male protagonist. It also gave me a feeling: the male protagonist is just a bad guy who got lucky. If I can't add points in other aspects, how can I feel that a lucky villain can have a sense of substitution? Well, I read it on the client and then typed it out on my computer... So I can't talk about any chapter or paragraph. Anyway, that's my overall opinion. Except for the first chapter, the rest are all less than 2,000. Is the author a practicing practitioner? Haha, I hope the author can work hard.

The writing is too immature and the plot is a bit cliche, but the author's perseverance is commendable!

The writing is okay, there is nothing wrong with the writing style. It's just that the plot is a bit cliche and may not appeal to readers. In addition, there may be too many realms. Generally, nine realms are enough. Then just try to update it. The more words there are, the more people will read it.

Not bad, I hope the author will update it as soon as possible so that I can start killing pigs, 😁

Wonderful, the author will continue to update!

If you have any recommendation votes on hand, please vote!

There is no number of investments this month, but I will take a look, author, come on.

A good start, the author will update soon!

Niu Cha plus Niu Bao

The plot of the story is good and attractive, but the details of the characters, personalities, martial arts characteristics, and environmental descriptions need to be strengthened. Come on! Looking forward to your progress! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

This... I just updated 2 chapters after commenting, I admire it

Yes, I will kill them when they are fattened up. Come on.

The plot is quite interesting, I collected it and got fattened up by eating it 😍

The plot is not bad, the only thing that needs attention is the details, be decisive and fatten up!

Beautiful and vivid. 👍👍👍