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There is no description of the characters, and there is a lack of interaction between the characters. It is like watching a brief summary of the news, and there is no emotion at all.

🙏 I didn't get through the second chapter, and the third golden chapter was written as a dry explanatory text. I don't know if the author can improve his writing style in the future, so I'll take the first step.

Author! The writing is like writing notes, like writing a diary! Is there no character dialogue? Weird, no sense of substitution! Seeing that I feel calm and even sleepy?

The protagonist actually used a hammer to... Persuade him to quit

See Chapter 50. It really doesn't work anymore. Large sections of water, large sections of Baidu encyclopedia-style information. The protagonist's dungeon master is a poorly used profession. To be honest, none of the characters in it have distinctive and likable characters. And I didn't understand why the protagonist had to forcefully 'go'. He obviously has gold-level strength and a dungeon, but he doesn't open it, forcing him to act like a pig (it's not pretending to be a pig to eat a tiger, but forcing himself to be a pig). You have no conflict with those professionals. Rather, they complement each other. When you open the gold dungeon, the strength of professionals will be improved. Only when their strength increases can they get more and more advanced character cards. You can get more copies. Produce more resources. And if you have more money, you can buy more good things on the platform. It's obviously a mutually reinforcing thing that benefits everyone, but the protagonist is forced to endure it. It's just baffling.

This book is okay at first glance, but the more I read, the less interesting it becomes. The whole book is narrated internally, and the real communication is all done in one stroke, without giving the reader a sense of involvement. I only saw the narration, the characters are not clear

This dungeon setting is a bit like a book called "Federal Dungeon Master", which is probably the name. That book is also a dungeon setting and has the power of a dungeon. In general, this book is okay and makes people want to read it. However, the writing style is not strong and the background is not explained clearly. It only talks about the protagonist's time travel and does not say anything about other people on the earth

The author wants to cry, but some people even cancel the collection. Is that wrong?

There is a way, which seems to be much more comfortable. Increase the line spacing in the settings. It will be much more comfortable.

There is no sense of immersion. I just skip and watch.

Hahaha, the reason why people don't like hammers is very simple. In novels, movies, and TV series, those who use hammers are supporting characters, and most of them don't end well, so everyone doesn't have a good impression of hammers. 😁

The more I look at it, the more confused I become. I don't know why.

This is the first time I read this kind of novel. It doesn't feel like someone who wrote a novel. It's hard to read.

By the time the middle copy was gone, the earth was gone too. The more I read, the less interesting it became. It was the same as ordinary time-travel novels.

The dungeon master is completely a guise. The only thing that matters to the protagonist is to get the character card and throw it in casually, and the dungeon will be automatically generated.

The protagonist likes to use a hammer, but I don't like it, so I'll persuade him to quit.