Spirit Battle System

It starts off pretty well from the beginning. I have read many Elf stories where the protagonist is a trainer, but this one is Charmander. The setting is good, but later on, Charmander's identity may cause many inconveniences. I wonder if the protagonist will raise a few more elves, and the elves will raise elves. One more thing, the green caterpillar is clearly Rayquaza, but you still mock him for being weak! ! Hetui

I have read Chapter 23 so far. To sum up the poisonous points that I can't stand, 1 The heroine directly released the three elves left by her father. The good name is that she has to train her own elves. Please, this is the real world. At least you have a self-defense. These elves have watched the heroine grow up 2. After being kicked out of the house, you are afraid of being caught by the trainer. If you don't seize the time to improve your strength, you are still so salty 3. You are only a few levels up and add points to other elves. In the early stage, you didn't improve your own strength, so you spent precious points to add points to other elves The subject matter is very good, but your writing makes people feel useless and uncomfortable. It is destined to be a hit

Come on, author＾0＾~, I hope to get a permanent mega Charizard x form in the future, looking forward to it

If the character setting of the protagonist is changed, the results should be better. Is it to write a relaxing plot? This protagonist is not only a salty fish, but also mentally retarded.

! ! ! Oh oh oh Huo Yan has opened a new book! (Only you saw that I am a fake fan) Come and call 😭😭😭😭

Who gave you the courage to write this most relaxing elf article in 2020?

(ಡωಡ)Hiahiahia

To be honest, this book is really bad. During the battle, the trainer only started to issue orders. What is the difference between this and the robot? Are you planning to follow a trainer for the rest of your life? Is this a slave? Humans have a short lifespan, but Pokémon have a very long lifespan. They can basically live for a thousand years, let alone a sub-dragon Pokémon like Charizard. What happens after the trainer dies? The battle is completely useless and all I have is strength

I want to complain, complain again, complain again, a modern person traveled through the past, and actually surrendered and sacrificed to save others. Fortunately, he has evolved. What if he has not evolved? If he puts himself into it, is he so stupid? TV doesn't even dare to show it like this.

This book is really poisonous. The protagonist's character is completely destroyed. That's basically it... Forget it, I really can't describe it. Let's just talk about the combat system! It's okay for you to play occasionally, slowly accumulate points, and keep doing it by yourself. Then you get kicked out and you blame the system for seducing you. At that time, I wanted to squirt him to death. There is something even more poisonous later on. The protagonist meets a trainer and is exposed. As a result, more people come later and one of them saves him. When he is not around, he eats his food first and does not leave it for his elf. If he doesn't keep it, forget it. The other elf tells him and he gets angry. I'm angry, and you said that your master is doing it. I really want to beat such a cheap protagonist to death. He doesn't want to work, but he also wants to eat, and he doesn't even enter the Poke Ball. If someone accidentally discovers you, you are forcibly subdued, and there is no place to cry. Will you die if you enter the Poke Ball? He has a good personality. Where can he find such a good master? If you want to leave, he will definitely let you go. The protagonist is a bitch!