Elf Battle System

I only read six chapters and it poisoned me to death. The settings are inconsistent, and the combat system is full of bugs. What can be expressed in one sentence is written in two paragraphs.

Kaliya feels so useless, she doesn't have much strength or consciousness, she looks like a fool. If you want to find a master, you can choose something like Dudu. Women can choose a champion, such as Zhulan.

The author's writing is very good. It would be nice if the update could be faster. It's annoying to wait every dayヽ('⌒´メ)ノ

The protagonist has a very poisonous personality, and in the world of Pokémon, the law of the jungle is very important. It's a waste of money to cheat even though you have a system! Didn't you have a better memory after being kicked out in Chapter 789? I hope the author can adjust his character in the future!

🤓 Wherever there is elf literature, there is Jiangjiang, a huge shout out to the author.

Hey It's a little bit poisonous. Let me tell you my opinion. I liked what I saw earlier. I suddenly added attributes to others. The protagonist is not lacking in energy points. He is obviously lacking and needs to be used by others. The protagonist only relies on the system. His special attack is pretty good. He is not good in other aspects. He doesn't train hard and is lazy every day. Forget it. After you have teammates, you give energy points to others just to let others use them in future battles? Can you paddle by yourself? What kind of brain circuit is it? It's uncomfortable. Jpg

Jiangjiang left little footprints here. By the way, she moved a small bench and sat down. She brought her own small cakes, melon seeds, and spicy strips to watch the big book~^_^

After evolution, the race value is higher than that of other Charizard mage evolutions, so his race value in the mage evolution is over 800. Isn't it too invincible? Let's limit it to satisfy his early invincibility. After the fire dinosaur evolves, it is not a Charizard but a Super Charizard.

4 Votes. I read the previous elf novel and hope this one will work better.

🤓You only see the second layer, and you think of me as the first layer. In fact, I am the fifth layer.

I don't know how popular this book is. Click on the one with more than 1,000 points, but what I want to say is that if you like reading recommendations, don't read the previous part. If you skip this paragraph, it will probably be much better. If you read it from the beginning, I guess you won't be able to read it at all. Except for new readers, old readers like to see different things after reading too much. Anyway, I can't stand it. First of all, the protagonist portrayed by the author is too lazy, And the latter one has been beaten by a group, and he still wants to stir up trouble. He just wants to leave peacefully. He has to fight to save face. What is face and life that is important? Anyway, I don't know what the author thinks. He said that although I am lazy, I won't give up. I vomited 😰

It starts off pretty well from the beginning. I have read many Elf stories where the protagonist is a trainer, but this one is Charmander. The setting is good, but later on, Charmander's identity may cause many inconveniences. I wonder if the protagonist will raise a few more elves, and the elves will raise elves. One more thing, the green caterpillar is clearly Rayquaza, but you still mock him for being weak! ! Hetui

I have read Chapter 23 so far. To sum up the poisonous points that I can't stand, 1 The heroine directly released the three elves left by her father. The good name is that she has to train her own elves. Please, this is the real world. At least you have a self-defense. These elves have watched the heroine grow up 2. After being kicked out of the house, you are afraid of being caught by the trainer. If you don't seize the time to improve your strength, you are still so salty 3. You are only a few levels up and add points to other elves. In the early stage, you didn't improve your own strength, so you spent precious points to add points to other elves The subject matter is very good, but your writing makes people feel useless and uncomfortable. It is destined to be a hit

Come on, author＾0＾~, I hope to get a permanent mega Charizard x form in the future, looking forward to it

If the character setting of the protagonist is changed, the results should be better. Is it to write a relaxing plot? This protagonist is not only a salty fish, but also mentally retarded.

! ! ! Oh oh oh Huo Yan has opened a new book! (Only you saw that I am a fake fan) Come and call 😭😭😭😭

Who gave you the courage to write this most relaxing elf article in 2020?

(ಡωಡ)Hiahiahia

To be honest, this book is really bad. During the battle, the trainer only started to issue orders. What is the difference between this and the robot? Are you planning to follow a trainer for the rest of your life? Is this a slave? Humans have a short lifespan, but Pokémon have a very long lifespan. They can basically live for a thousand years, let alone a sub-dragon Pokémon like Charizard. What happens after the trainer dies? The battle is completely useless and all I have is strength

I want to complain, complain again, complain again, a modern person traveled through the past, and actually surrendered and sacrificed to save others. Fortunately, he has evolved. What if he has not evolved? If he puts himself into it, is he so stupid? TV doesn't even dare to show it like this.

I get it, the character of the main character is just trying to make people mad. But don't think of him as a time traveler, just think of him as a Charmander with a system. In this way, this book can be eaten.

This book is really poisonous. The protagonist's character is completely destroyed. That's basically it... Forget it, I really can't describe it. Let's just talk about the combat system! It's okay for you to play occasionally, slowly accumulate points, and keep doing it by yourself. Then you get kicked out and you blame the system for seducing you. At that time, I wanted to squirt him to death. There is something even more poisonous later on. The protagonist meets a trainer and is exposed. As a result, more people come later and one of them saves him. When he is not around, he eats his food first and does not leave it for his elf. If he doesn't keep it, forget it. The other elf tells him and he gets angry. I'm angry, and you said that your master is doing it. I really want to beat such a cheap protagonist to death. He doesn't want to work, but he also wants to eat, and he doesn't even enter the Poke Ball. If someone accidentally discovers you, you are forcibly subdued, and there is no place to cry. Will you die if you enter the Poke Ball? He has a good personality. Where can he find such a good master? If you want to leave, he will definitely let you go. The protagonist is a bitch!

To be honest, after reading the first nine chapters, I originally read the first three golden chapters and was a little persuaded to give up, but because of the book shortage, I also thought that maybe the later chapters would be better. Unfortunately, I am now twenty or ten years old, and I really can't stand it anymore. I don't mean to criticize, I just feel that the subject matter is very good. I have read an infinite flow, and I also dressed as a small fire dragon. Unfortunately, it fell apart. I am at the opposite extreme of your idea. I feel that you are too dissuasive. I just want to express my own thoughts. If you don't like it, don't criticize it 🙂 The protagonist travels through time and becomes Charmander. If you don't know the Pokemon series, it's okay. Since you said that you have a deep memory, you should understand that real elves can't be as peaceful as in anime and games, without killing, otherwise the elves in the wild will eat nothing. The author actually wrote it clearly, but there is another big poisonous point, that is, the protagonist knows the danger of the world he lives in but does not work hard to improve his strength, especially when he knows his value and future as a Charmander. It was mentioned at the beginning that the protagonist wants to eat the old people for salted fish, okay, there is no danger to his life in society, so casual, but in the crisis-ridden elf world, as a little fire dragon without the protection of his parents, he still needs salted fish? Even if you are a dead otaku, you don't want to die, right? After getting the system, you will find enemies to fight for a period of time. Since you want to become stronger, don't insert salted fish ideas into it. It will be very awkward when reading. I also wrote a battle scene, but I didn't know why, but I was stuck again. Please, now that the fight has been fought and the system has guided it, just make up your mind and write it along with the flow, and don't force a turn. I have endured the previous poisonous points. In Chapter 9, let's not talk about the example of the Hualan Gym. Basically, the gym owners are families that have been entrenched in the local area for decades and are recognized by the locals. If you wait for the old gym owner to finish, the alliance will send someone to kick the gym. If you succeed, you will take over as the gym leader. There is too much maneuverability here. If someone doesn't want to work hard anymore, he wants to be the gym leader. You can just hang around as a gym leader, and you can just ask around, and then find someone to play in a gym where the successor is weaker than you, and if you win, you can take over, regardless of the contribution of the previous generation. It would be strange if the gym leader doesn't rebel in this way. No one can guarantee that he will be strong in every generation. If one generation is weak, then all the accumulation of the previous generations will be nullified. The above is my personal opinion, please forgive me if it offends🙂

The most unacceptable thing for Japan to see is this. During the battle, you have nothing to do with that female trainer's orders! To put it bluntly, who can feel more objectively than the people who are fighting? The reason for the fight with the elves is because the elves have poor intelligence and cannot think in such complex ways. You are a fucking human being. Are you a stupid elf or a time-traveled elf? Your brain has turned into a pig. The trainer's main task is to provide you with food and accommodation, right?

Powerful and speechless, the protagonist is a Charmander, has a system, but in the world of Pokémon but just wants to fish? If you don't have the strength, how can you fish for free? After all, Charmander is considered a cherished elf. If you were discovered, wouldn't a bunch of people come to arrest you?

It's really disgusting. He actually increased Mu Shou Palace's combat power. He didn't even have enough.

Don't update, just throw this book away What the hell is it written? It makes people uncomfortable to read it. It's completely different from the introduction. This is the salted fish life you want. Fighting with other trainers every day, doing special training every day, it is contradictory to what you wrote before. I have a plug-in system, I I've never seen someone as talented as you. If you were a human, you could still use plug-ins for your elves. The key is that you are a little fire dragon yourself. You also use plug-ins for your teammates. You only have a few hundred points to add to your teammates. I asked you how you are so generous. Besides, that Mu Shou Gong still had conflicts with you before. You are really a little genius.

This author is a master at using poison

In fact, the fact that the system itself can be used to improve other people is a minor poison. Then it is even more poisonous to give points to other elves in the early stage. I remembered a book I read before (I forgot the specific name), which seemed to be about improving your cultivation level by playing League of Legends. It was quite popular at the time. The protagonist gave all the resources from playing n games of League of Legends to the heroine, and she was always in the first realm. The heroine seemed to have reached the third or fourth realm with the protagonist's resources (the key is that the heroine took the protagonist's resources without any guilt), and then the heroine's mother madly mocked the protagonist as a waste. I was poisoned when I saw that piece. Seeing this book now reminds me of the bad memories I had when I read that book.

It's so poisonous that even the Poison King who has been there for a few years can't hold on.